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That was the first update that I haven't enjoyed.

I really didn't like the new character. Her role easily could've been filled by Soteria or even just having the main character simply black out for a minute and recover on his own. That whole scene just felt like an awkward attempt at fan service.

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The rest of the update was fine, apart from the bugs, but that one scene was awful.
 

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That was the first update that I haven't enjoyed.

I really didn't like the new character. Her role easily could've been filled by Soteria or even just having the main character simply black out for a minute and recover on his own. That whole scene just felt like an awkward attempt at fan service.

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Sorry, you didn’t like it. But it is totally avoidable.
You could have let the MC’s arm fully heal, and Gone down the Path that has the MC explain the War and other things to Sammy and Marena.
 

NoxRaven

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I just got done playing this and I have to say you my friend have my sincerest compliments. Well rendered, decently written, and a good plotline that made me want to scroll back and reread through it. My only complaint was how short it seemed as I reached the end much to quickly for the enjoyment I was having. I can't wait to see how this game progresses and what you do with it.
 
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moqbull

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one of the better written games story wise.

I like the fact that there is no incest or any other weird stuff, so far at least.
 
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ThunderRob

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i was really happy the MC did NOT send Alvara away..she is my #2 very very closely behind Katsumi..i almost panicked when he lost it on her..lol
 
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The Krypt Angel

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There's a modicum of irony in the fact that the first time I ever talked to Ava on here was a disagreement related to sharing of digital conquest in another game. Now I just got forced to share all of mine with a digital version of her (even if it WAS a dream sequence) in this one...... At least till I reloaded and chose not to go nuclear on Ishida :)
 
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dstarfire

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It looks like the developer has taken down the link to this version (probably for bug fixing). Also, that unavoidable game-crashing bug occurs just before the end of the game (only a dozen or so more lines of dialogue) where it trails off into a cliffhanger.
 
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Zivairs

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i was really happy the MC did NOT send Alvara away..she is my #2 very very closely behind Katsumi..i almost panicked when he lost it on her..lol
I was…Planning on the MC really sending her and the Aunt away, but my GF was overdoing it mad (lol, she likes the plotline I have designed for Alvara and didn’t want me to change it.) So I caved and made the MC second guess himself when he had time to cool off.

Mareena has a new competitor or perhaps a long lost sister.
Yeah, it looks like she is a bit modeled after Marena, she nearly has the Hair. It could be Marena and Sammy’s ancestor.

It looks like the developer has taken down the link to this version (probably for bug fixing). Also, that unavoidable game-crashing bug occurs just before the end of the game (only a dozen or so more lines of dialogue) where it trails off into a cliffhanger.
Oh, sorry, I didn’t say anything about that….or did I? Eh, anyway. I fixed that, I haven’t uploaded the new build because you are really not missing anything after that Error shows up. The only thing you are missing is. Me telling you that is the end of this update. It will be fixed when I release the next update taking us out of Alpha.
 
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Zivairs

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For the record, I totally side with your girlfriend on that one.
Is it wrong that I am glad my girlfriend doesn’t read these posts? I think this comment would give her more fuel to push for more of the plotlines to change. Haha
 

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I was…Planning on the MC really sending her and the Aunt away, but my GF was overdoing it mad (lol, she likes the plotline I have designed for Alvara and didn’t want me to change it.) So I caved and made the MC second guess himself when he had time to cool off.
Kinda glad she stuck you with your plot cause it would had made a plot hole. Since Mc is Promised to her in someway we would had lost that plot and he still has not dismissed her as his guardian from the convo they have had. So I am glad your GF kept you in the right plot direction lol
 

Avaron1974

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Is it wrong that I am glad my girlfriend doesn’t read these posts? I think this comment would give her more fuel to push for more of the plotlines to change. Haha
I'm just glad she got you to change your mind about that one character. I think it would have been a shame if you'd sent her away after the promises and how sad she looked when he lost his temper.
 

balinorr

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am i the only one here who likes vanessa? damn it people the whole lot of these myths are screwing with MC.
by the way can we please have some self restrain choices? i would like to be able to reject some of these women (i mean we are a pretty powerful almost godly sorcerer self restraint goes with the package xD)
 

Avaron1974

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am i the only one here who likes vanessa? damn it people the whole lot of these myths are screwing with MC.
by the way can we please have some self restrain choices? i would like to be able to reject some of these women (i mean we are a pretty powerful almost godly sorcerer self restraint goes with the package xD)
I like Vanessa I just also happen to like Alvara, Marena and Kelyera too.

I probably like Alvara and Marena more.

My character had my ideal scenario. Willing victim of a group of muscular powerful women...

Dreamy.

So, yeah, Amazon and Orc, only way to go. No better place than being stuck between a rock hard body and hard abs place.

I'm totally not a perverted bitch... honest.
 

Zivairs

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by the way can we please have some self restrain choices? i would like to be able to reject some of these women (i mean we are a pretty powerful almost godly sorcerer self restraint goes with the package xD)
I base most of the Lore of this game off of Greek Mythology with my own twist on it. That being said…. Have you read any Greek Mythos? Most of the Gods in those show hardly any restraint, lol.

But for the most part, I do put up choices for each girl. Sure I am, guilty for two of those girls. The first time you meet Katsumi the MC has sex with her. That was to push the plot along because she comes in more later on in the story. The next one being Kelyera because I tried to convey that she is oversaturated in Lust-Inducing-Pheromones the times she meets the MC, and therefore the MC is not thinking correctly and just goes with it.

After that, however you have the choice, do you want to stay with Vanessa? Make a choice to offer her a way out or comfort her. Didn’t like Katsumi? Let her be on her way and don’t offer her a job and to keep her safe. Marena not for you? Don’t show up at her doorstep at the time she gave you, show up when everyone else arrives. Kelyera, not your thing? Don’t say she is yours in front of her Father. Soteria will always push herself onto the MC, but I do let you chose to go further or not.


So yeah, the restraint falls onto you…
 
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