Vinfamy
I took a look at the dialogues for the lpscenes of the vanilla incest module. Find my suggested changes below. I tried to change as little as possible - so mainly grammar, the odd spelling mistake, occasionally word choice or english idiosyncracies. Needless to say I am a fluent native speaker...
If you (or anyone, really) has questions, comments, objections, etc. feel free to respond. I am happy to discuss, explain, make alternative suggestions where I can and to admit any errors I might have made.
I hope the format is acceptable.
If in the future I look at other modules is there a better way to submit proposed changes? (I'm not comfortable with git/github and thought that this way you could see what I was suggesting more clearly, but perhaps just attaching changed files would be less work for everyone involved?)