VN Ren'Py Completed Sunshine Love [Ch. 3 v1.01i Extras] [MrDots Games]

[ProofreadingRUS]

Well I kinda knew her boyfriend was no good. Aren't all boyfriends?
I kinda expected to look like his dad. Bald and desperate for money.
That name was almost a giveaway too, I know of another Broody. bald and no good.
Well at least it makes things simpler to get rid of him when she finds out what a low life he is....peace.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

The problem is that the developer renders the scene in layers. It looks nice, but distasteful comic type. The scenes lose realism.

Then there are other games more to your like, like tic tack toe.

 

[magneticbird]

I am blown away by these renders. This is going to be amazing.

 

[callmemaximous]

Nice start of a game. looking forward to future releases

 

[yltohawk]

I played it to the end and this ending was unnecessary. Why bring this stupid Lucas back? I hope he doesn't do anything to our half-sister. Nothing but wait for the next update. In a month DMD or SL, anyone know?

Well as you know sister believes in white knights and who better to rescue her than her brother IMO. Also this will cause their bond to get even stronger, And what better way to establish a enemy than to sic. ( A SICK TWISTED F**K LIKE LUCAS ). at her boyfriends or his fathers request. That's why we bring Lucas back.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Well as you know sister believes in white knights and who better to rescue her than her brother IMO. Also this will cause their bond to get even stronger, And what better way to establish a enemy than to sic. ( A SICK TWISTED F**K LIKE LUCAS ). at her boyfriends or his fathers request. That's why we bring Lucas back.

Lucas is back?
I thought he was dead. At least I hope he was.
What is he 100?
The story takes place years apart, so I don't know why Lucas is there unless he's on the run from the police.
Well at least let's make sure he never bothers anyone ever again.
I mean let's get this right once and for all. Let's play the path "Let's get rid of Lucas Path"

 

[ssmm6363]

Nothing to see here...more Mr Dot garbage. Plastic doll renders with exactly 2 facial expressions, and a horribly written cliche trash story with a total of zero likeable or interesting characters. Stop encouraging this hack. Reusing a bunch of terrible characters and references from your old bad games isn't clever, it's tiresome and lazy. Just quit until you can make something tolerable.

 

[yltohawk]

its feels length... but also having so many extra feature like peeping tom, hunting dounut is too much... what can one do? and its so lengthy, that i wont be going to do one more time for those hunting alone... its just too much... i liked the whole idea of the story, but so many, guns is pointing to the mc, one side GF, then fixing a hotel to get paid, then comes the bf of ur sis, then finally sis's bf's dad trying to buy the hotel no matter what, its feels too much for a simple story.

That's the point It's not a simple story at all, All updates from now on will be less than the first because of the need for a backstory and to emotionally invest in the characters. That's why it's so big. Now IMO MrDots has never been a home wrecker just for the sake of a story so there was a reason Nicole saw Georgina and had that interesting question come up about Georgina's relationship. If you haven't played DmD. you are missing a critical part of the puzzle. See Georgina is already in an incestuos Love triangle already (or will be if you answer the question correctly). So Nicole being the goal focused person that she is shows her frustration as most women will and the biggest worry for a woman is security. Of course she will come off single minded but I do believe she loves him dearly. How you play this game will determine if you keep Nicole and maybe your sister will be added ( wit the help of Georgina) again IMO

As for the enemies you can admit they are well established now... Truly black and white no areas of grey, and you know what you are dealing with. This allows you to really understand what is important and to see what's at stake.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Nothing to see here...more Mr Dot garbage. Plastic doll renders with exactly 2 facial expressions, and a horribly written cliche trash story with a total of zero likeable or interesting characters. Stop encouraging this hack. Reusing a bunch of terrible characters and references from your old bad games isn't clever, it's tiresome and lazy. Just quit until you can make something tolerable.

I didn't think it was that bad. I say show more versions and waste not time on these backward comments from backward people who wished they had half your imagination. You don't need need much of an imagination to play Rock Paper , Scissors, nowadays.

 

[ssmm6363]

Having some minimal standards for something that they expect payment for isn't backward. There are dozens of free VNs that are exponentially better, his games are just awful. Unless the target audience is 12 year olds who lie to the age check.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Having some minimal standards for something that they expect payment for isn't backward. There are dozens of free VNs that are exponentially better, his games are just awful. Unless the target audience is 12 year olds who lie to the age check.

Just enjoy it. Nobody is forcing you to play. Tic, Tack Toe, nobody is forcing you to play that either. Which seems to be a lot of people's speed nowadays. I think cause there is less to complain about.

 

[thanatos69]

Having some minimal standards for something that they expect payment for isn't backward. There are dozens of free VNs that are exponentially better, his games are just awful. Unless the target audience is 12 year olds who lie to the age check.

You created this account less than a month ago, and you have only 2 messages, both on this thread, and somehow you know everything about the dev? Reported for trolling. Go back to your old account (if it hasn't been banned yet) and comment on your favorite game threads. Get out of here if you don't like the dev.

 

[ninetofive]

Sunshine Love v0.0.1b

Good morning/evening again to my loyal supporters. Thank you so much for the feedback and support you’ve given us these past few days about Sunshine Love and its first release. As you know, our games are in constant development, so we take notes of what you report and today I’d like to inform you that we’ve updated Sunshine Love to v0.0.1b.

The changes are:

Fixes: Music player hides properly now.
Fixed Navy terminology (opening scene) and a few dialogues/renders. Thanks to the Navy members of our community for the feedback.
Animations loop properly now.
Fixed a few animations that were having playing issues (Flicker)
Android animations work now.
Grammar errors fixed (any other errors found after this post will be corrected in the next release of SL).

New Features:

• Added a black text box for those who are having a hard time reading some of the dialogue. You can turn it on/off in the settings menu.

• Audio Preferences are now in a separate tab, and I’ve also added an option to turn the “Peeping Tom” and “Donut” sounds on and off.

You can find the new download links at my Subscribestar or Patreon pages if you are a member:

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Final Words

As always you can leave your thoughts, feedback and constructive criticism on this update in the comments section below. We always strive to do our best and to give our fans a satisfying hour (or so) of entertainment with each release for either of our games. Thank you for your continued support because without it, our games would not exist.

MrDots

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Sunshine Love v0.0.1b

Good morning/evening again to my loyal supporters. Thank you so much for the feedback and support you’ve given us these past few days about Sunshine Love and its first release. As you know, our games are in constant development, so we take notes of what you report and today I’d like to inform you that we’ve updated Sunshine Love to v0.0.1b.

The changes are:

Fixes: Music player hides properly now.
Fixed Navy terminology (opening scene) and a few dialogues/renders. Thanks to the Navy members of our community for the feedback.
Animations loop properly now.
Fixed a few animations that were having playing issues (Flicker)
Android animations work now.
Grammar errors fixed (any other errors found after this post will be corrected in the next release of SL).

New Features:

• Added a black text box for those who are having a hard time reading some of the dialogue. You can turn it on/off in the settings menu.

• Audio Preferences are now in a separate tab, and I’ve also added an option to turn the “Peeping Tom” and “Donut” sounds on and off.

You can find the new download links at my Subscribestar or Patreon pages if you are a member:

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

Final Words

As always you can leave your thoughts, feedback and constructive criticism on this update in the comments section below. We always strive to do our best and to give our fans a satisfying hour (or so) of entertainment with each release for either of our games. Thank you for your continued support because without it, our games would not exist.

MrDots

Wow this game is basically new and a lot of people complain over nothing.
I saw almost no grammar problems or I was just too much into the story to notice,
Everything is basic and easy to figure out. Maybe too easy for some people.
I for one like the game. I didn't get to the end yet. One more thing to figure out why they complaining about that. You can practically raise the relationships yourself with the mod, so that's a plus.
Although, I advise you not to use it. It does nothing if you don't follow the story along.
I want to see more versions in the future. Make it like Melody or DMD, I don't care just don't make them too hard to figure out.....peace.

 

[Hyperserver]

@ monroe please take notice that there is a new version which fixed some of the reported issues like non-working animations for android, hideable musicplayer, textbox as background, and other stuff

 

[Irgendwie Irgendwo]

Okay, finally finished it yesterday night and now I've read through the whole thread. Final impressions, broken up a bit in order to avoid a wall of text.

- As an (almost) life-long Red Devil that Gunners mug hurt a bit.

Spoiler: premise

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Spoiler: hilarity

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- Those donuts and Peeping Toms are a nice way to stretch playing time. I still managed to miss some.

Spoiler: Bugs and inconsistencies, some are probably already fixed

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Spoiler: "Realism"

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Spoiler: Enemies

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Final words about the music: It tends to repeat itself when you're playing for 5+ hours, but I assume that more songs will be added. I love "Stop loving you" with the 1980s Stock Aitken Waterman vibe and "Happy Clappy Castagnette", the Mediterranean / Caribbean take on the Parks and Recreation theme, would make a great theme song.

All in all it was an enjoyable experience. I am looking forward to the next update in two months.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Okay, finally finished it yesterday night and now I've read through the whole thread. Final impressions, broken up a bit in order to avoid a wall of text.

- As an (almost) life-long Red Devil that Gunners mug hurt a bit.

Spoiler: premise

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Spoiler: hilarity

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- Those donuts and Peeping Toms are a nice way to stretch playing time. I still managed to miss some.

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Spoiler: "Realism"

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Final words about the music: It tends to repeat itself when you're playing for 5+ hours, but I assume that more songs will be added. I love "Stop loving you" with the 1980s Stock Aitken Waterman vibe and "Happy Clappy Castagnette", the Mediterranean / Caribbean take on the Parks and Recreation theme, would make a great theme song.

All in all it was an enjoyable experience. I am looking forward to the next update in two months.

All that is boring to read. Can you summarize it to 3 lines or less?

 

[thanatos69]

Wow this game is basically new and a lot of people complain over nothing.

This dev has a lot of haters (some other devs among those haters). That's why you see comments from new users or just complains about things that don't happen in the game or are just trivial, etc. They're always the same users, and once you've been long enough around here, you'll learn who they are.

 

[Irgendwie Irgendwo]

All that is boring to read. Can you summarize it to 3 lines or less?

Not my problem.
Maybe I could do it, but no.
Better?

 

[Thelonely6]

The only thing I hated this dev for is the BS endings of Melody.
Other than that I loved all of his games