Smarmint

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All 4 facial expressions of Mr Dots games.
Wow. That is truly awesome (and sad). I noticed a lot of repeat expressions, especially the sideways grin in all his games, but I didn't realize it was like that for all expressions. Maybe he/they need to come up with a couple of new ones for SL!
 

Smarmint

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Wow, the view under here is nice...
Hey. Just giving credit where credit is due. SL is quite good, but I think Mr. Dots could learn a lot from other devs about clothes draping. Maybe most people don't care, but it means the developer really cares when he/she makes the effort to make the clothing look at least somewhat realistic.
 

Content_Consumer

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This seems to be wrong;



I think either someone doesn't know what that phrase means or "are" should be "aren't".

"A dime a dozen" means something is cheap, easy to come by.


also



you wouldn't ask the electric company to do that, you'd just shut it off at the breakers in the electric supply cabinet, the maintenance guy should be able to handle that or at worst you'd just shut the individual breakers in the fuse boxes for each room.

I'm not trying to nit-pick, just feed back since I actually like your stories and these are easy fixes.
 
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Mr. Dom

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This seems to be wrong;



I think either someone doesn't know what that phrase means or "are" should be "aren't".

"A dime a dozen" means something is cheap, easy to come by.


also



you wouldn't ask the electric company to do that, you'd just shut it off at the breakers in the electric supply cabinet, the maintenance guy should be able to handle that or at worst you'd just shut the individual breakers in the fuse boxes for each room.

I'm not trying to nit-pick, just feed back since I actually like your stories and these are easy fixes.
I'm glad I wasn't the only one who found these mistakes. I found many many more and still haven't been able to complete the story so far, because of the writing. I thought the MC was supposed to be intelligent, but I have yet to see that. The MC also speaks of being dominant, I have yet to see that as well.


I hope it gets better in the future.
 

Somnus

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All 4 facial expressions of Mr Dots games.
The "My mouth is open because you are so wise"
The "Im biting my lip because you are right"
The "Cheeky side wards smile"
The "I have smiled like this for 3 games...."
Hahahaha, you totally nailed it! :ROFLMAO: I said a few pages back, those bitting lips are ridiculous for male characters, not to mention overused. Thankfully the women are hot.
 

dragonbro91

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Maybe he's confused about the amount of content, compared to so many other games with version number 0.1/2/3/4/5/6?! And did read 0.1 as 1.0? :unsure::whistle::giggle:
gaslighting 101

the game has like 2 to 3 hours of dialogue and maybe 3 minutes of lewds or sex,the first 10 minutes of the prologue is complety pointless.
the first 2 very long days are nothing but introduction and drama.
 

dragonbro91

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Since when was that ever a problem ?
oh well maybe because if they made a poc the bad guy then it would be downvoted to shit.
just tag the thing femdom so everyone will know the male protag will be nothing but these chicks whipping boy.
 

Ruzzerion

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Not feeling it at all, MC´s should be faceless. The constant showing of the dudes face that i can´t relate to just makes this boring.
 

moszter

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Sunshine Love [v0.0.1 Extras] CG [Mr Dots Games]


 

goobdoob

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gaslighting 101

the game has like 2 to 3 hours of dialogue and maybe 3 minutes of lewds or sex,the first 10 minutes of the prologue is complety pointless.
the first 2 very long days are nothing but introduction and drama.
This isn't a quick hit porn game. This is a visual novel. Introduction and drama are story and world building. They are not a bad thing.

You shouldn't be surprised, DMD and Melody were the same way.

If you want teh pr0nz, come back in about 5 updates.
 

yltohawk

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gaslighting 101

the game has like 2 to 3 hours of dialogue and maybe 3 minutes of lewds or sex,the first 10 minutes of the prologue is complety pointless.
the first 2 very long days are nothing but introduction and drama.
Mr Dots is known for his slow burn. If you want instant gratification your not familiar with how He works... As with all of his works he slowly increases the tempo. So if this not to your liking I suppose we won't be hearing from you. Or will you suck it up and actually invest some time to this game and be hooked like the rest of Us are .
 
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