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None of them have powers Tony has a suit to do his bidding and green arrow is peak physical condition.
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If I had to hazard a guess, it would be for Cheetah, since she does qualifie for Furry.Harley: "Sweetie, get Mommy's Bazooka!"
How much yiffing are we talking about?
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I'd question how you could train a psychiatrist, but I guess the Joker did it somehow... with varying degrees of success.
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Have you tried hitting her again 3 times ?
Anyway intresting and promising game best of luck to the Dev.
Actually, if you allow me a joke which may actually not be a joke (I will let you decide if my smile means it is really a joke
), in at least some countries, roughly 50% of people starting to study psychology is because they lke the idea of helping others (for how many that is really about helping others, or about their self-gratification, can be a question), the other 50%, is because they feel a weakness, and they they hope to understand more, solve it.In which group fit the ones, especially in USA, that are thinking to make a lot of money by charging by the 15'
, I cannot say for sure, but I would guess it is an horizontal category overlapping with the others The ones that go to become psycanalists, at the end of their studies normally have to go for a period of psycanalysis themselves.
Trick is, if you are providing psychological support (but even that sort of "mentoring") to someone who is in a weakened position, it can be relatively easy for you to get into a position in which you can influence them.
Why is this relevant for a psychologist, or even better, a psycanalist ? See the point above on the reason many start those studies in the first place ;-)
Sorry, don't want to get in too many details, but I think it is enough to give you an idea.
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Well... not quite like that. I'm here. I am happy to read your comments and thoughts on the game. I was inspired by the game Oni Rogue Like. At first, I planned to make a regular submission game, but in the process of developing the script, I came to the conclusion that the hero should have 2 paths. So, yes, Harley's romantic relationship is part of my idea. But to make Harley part of the battle team... Hell, why not!
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Thanks! Finding bugs helps a lot!Bug: Talk with Batgirl while she's not wearing mask - Choose the clothing option - She puts the mask on - Then it triggers the script where you silently enter her room and she's angry (if you're in her room)
If she's in the main hall, it triggers the "Open the map" option.
Also, you can summon her naked in the main hall. Let's call it a feature
Though the chatting option makes her dress up forgetting the bottom part.
I'm probably a wrong person for that, but I still could help with the translation.
I think, for some reason, the script does not correctly calculate the selected clothes. I plan to add a choice of clothes in the future, so I have already put a change of clothes in the script.
It is very difficult to check all the scripts alone, because you have to replay the game over and over dozens of times.
I will be glad of your help!
If it is not difficult for you, help in the correct construction of English phrases. This language is not my native language. It is difficult for Russians to learn foreign languages. We don't have the ability to do this. In fact, it is easier for us to capture another country and make its inhabitants speak Russian ))
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Happy to oblige!
Found some new ones.
- The game does autosaving to the folder, but there's no way to load the files.
- If you choose "No matter" while talking with Batgirl at the Main Hall it brings you both in her room. As well as if she refuses to take the mask off when talking about clothing.
- Nothing stops you from doing the undressing option if you have only 25 $ (Tenge is ₸, btw). The bet is 30 $, and if you lose:
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- Main Hall - Call for help - Helping hand - Masturbate - Faster - Stop - And it doesn't until Martha leaves
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- Rare exception when you visit Batgirl quietly, if a previous visit ended with cum. It may not reproduce right away, since what's going in her room is random. File attached anyway.
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I'm going to find the game lines that feel wrong and suggest a possible fix.
My grammar is far from perfect, so I welcome everyone to correct me If my fix is wrong as well.
Status: Done. Corrections?
| Line used in the game | Possible Fix |
| The rights to Harley Quinn, the rest of the characters.... | HARLEY QUINN is a trademark of DC COMICS, owned by WARNER BROS. ENT. |
| Should I watch cartoons? | Should I watch cartoons instead? |
| One hundred and fifty miles east of Almaty | One hundred and fifty miles East of Almaty / One hundred and fifty miles to the East of Almaty |
| There is also a Jokerbek crazy clown living there | There is also Jokerbek the crazy clown living there |
| That's fucking spam | That fucking spam |
| In general, newspaper are not journalists differently... | Usually, it's not a journalist's job to spread... |
| The job seeker must find Batman himself | The applicant must find Batman himself |
| In the real world, everyone knows where Bruce is hiding | In the real world, everybody knows where Bruce is hiding |
| How I can cancel spam? | How can I cancel it? / How can I stop it? / Is there any way to undo it? |
| Could I stop a time? I can stop the time! | Could I possibly stop time? I can stop time! |
| How fortunate that this truck was here | How fortunate that this truck is here |
| I think the driver would mind if I borrowed it | I think, the driver wouldn't mind if I borrowed it |
| I'll try to explain it in another way | I'll try to explain it another way |
| you have a car on a special order | you have a customized car |
| You'd have to be a complete idiot not to guess | You'd have to be a complete idiot not to guess this |
| You're the first one who guess | You're the first one who guessed it right |
| Did you put an ad in the paper? | Did you put that ad in the paper? |
| I can stop a time | I can stop time |
| Okey | Okey-dokey / Okay |
| Welcome to the team Robin! | Welcome to the team, Robin! |
| I managed to get Wonder Woman and the Eagle | I've managed to get Wonder Woman and Hawkgirl |
| we're going to hang out on Amazon Island | We're going to hang out on "Amazon Island" |
| So I need to leave someone to keep an eye on the city in my absence | So I need to leave someone to keep an eye on the city during my absence |
| And I think you're right for me | And I think you're the right man |
| well, keep an eye on the city, all sort of criminals there | Well, to keep an eye on the city, all sorts of criminals there |
| So you can learn about crimes | So you'd be aware of crimes |
| I have an agreement with Arkham Prison | I have an agreement with the Arkham Asylum |
| Then I'll do it myself | Help yourself |
| Wonder Woman and the Eagle | Wonder Woman and Hawkgirl |
| Is it really Batman's job to sit his ass out in front of the monitor? | Is it really Batman's job just to sit on his ass in front of the monitor? |
| Oh, what's that red light coming on? | Oh, what's that red light flashing for? |
| All the weekdays are always busy with the Joker or Two-Face | All the weekdays are always occupied either by Joker or Two-Face |
| I'm the interim Batman! | I'm Batman's interim! / I'm Batman's deputy! |
| They say that the first Robin is remembered for a lifetime, and all the others you involuntarily compare with him | They say the first Robin is remembered for a lifetime, and you will always involuntarily compare all the others to him |
| It seems to be breathing! | He seems to be breathing! |
| His eyes opened | His eyes have opened |
| I think I can teach you a few tricks so your next meeting with Harley Quinn won't be like this... painful | I think, I can teach you a few tricks so your next encounter with Harley Quinn won't be this... painful |
| When you're rested, come to my training room | When you're rested, come to me to train |
| You know, with all the fuss, I forgot to even ask you your name | You know, with all the fuss, I even forgot to ask you what's your name |
| You spend this day in peace and solitude, recuperating | You spend the rest of the day recuperating in peace and solitude |
| C:/SISTEM/ | C:\SYSTEM\ |
| Choose your character | Select any character / Select any girl / Select a villain |
| Wants the attention of "Daddy" | Wants "Daddy"'s attention / Has "Daddy" issues |
| Inexperienced in sex | Sexually Inexperienced |
| Cat-Woman | Catwoman |
| Afraid of pain | Algophobia / Phobia of pain / Fear of Pain |
| Like sex toys | Likes sex toys |
| And I don't have a local one yet. I'll have to go and buy it | And there's no landline. I need to buy one / I need to find one. |
| Wow, there is " Telecom " here! | Wow, there's an intercom here! |
| Clearly and clearly Robin. Is there a " Telecom " here? | Loud and clear, Robin. Are you using an intercom? |
| There is " Telecom " here! Will you come? | Yes, could you come here? |
| Not... I'm meditating now | No... I'm meditating now / Not now, I'm meditating |
| Okay. Hang up | Fine, hanging up |
| A dark, gloomy corridor, | A dark gloomy corridor, |
| Well, you could not save on light bulbs! | Well, at least he must stop saving on light bulbs! |
| She thinks I'm a little girl | He thinks I'm a little girl |
| But I'm saving Gotham from criminals, just like him! | But I save Gotham from criminals, just like he does! |
| You've come to see me too often | You're coming to see me too often / You started visiting me too often |
| But with Batman, it's somehow calmer | But it's somehow calmer when he's around |
| I wish I could strip off her red and black underwear and spank her until she's scarlet and bruised! | I wish I could rip off her that red and black underwear and spank her to crimson bruises! |
| Practice is a useful activity. So, Robin, ready for your first workout? | Practice makes perfect. So, are you ready for your first workout, Robin? |
| In the Head. To the building. On the legs | Head, body and legs |
| Clearly. Clearly. | Okay. Okay. |
| We pushed this ban through the Senate | They pushed this ban through the Senate |
| You're a journalist | You're the journalist / You're that journalist |
| Do you also serve pizza? | Do you also deliver pizza? |
| Yes, I am... I just asked | I... I just asked |
| No matter | Doesn't matter |
| On your horses! | To horse! |
| Right on the tits hit! | Hit right in the tit! |
| My time stopper is getting little charged up! | My time stopper is recharging! / My time stopper has charged up a bit! / My time stopper has recharged a little bit! |
| They call you the Batman replacement? | They call you Batman's replacement? |
| Beaten half to death, you return to the cave in unconsciousness to recover your strength | Beaten half to death, you return to the cave unconsciousness to recover your strength |
| Hitting your knees is not athletic | Hitting your knees is unsporting |
| You haven't been to see me in a long time, Bruce! | You haven't been visiting me in a long time, Bruce! |
| spera | sperm / jizz |
| And he smiles broadly | And she smiles broadly |
| And know what it will be like now, | And know that it will be like now, |
| she's so hot! | it's so hot! |
| the solar plexus... anti-sports! | the solar plexus... very unsporting! |
| they are sew n for me by special order! | they are sewn to special order for me! |
| ow n forgiveness | own forgiveness |
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Wow! My English is worse than I thought.
But...
My work is also progressing
But...
My work is also progressing
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Uh, far from me giving trying to give lessons, even because for 90%, not having played the game, I cannot say for sure (the context can change a lot), but at a superficial look...
"HARLEY QUINN is a trademark of DC COMICS owned by WARNER BROS. ENT." -> "HARLEY QUINN is a trademark of DC COMICS, owned by WARNER BROS. ENT."
I am missing the context from the game, but in general the phrase about Almaty can also be said in the first form, it is not wrong in absolute - e.g. "Our base is located 150 miles East of Almaty" is less poetic and more military, but perfectly fine.
"Batman" with a big B is like the name of a person, so you don't write "the Batman", you just write "Batman" (there is more than one instance in the table), safe for specific cases.
If you risk an ambiguity, e.g. you want to be sure that people understand it as "find Batman using his own skills", could be written "find himself Batman", or some other form, if you want to put emphasis on the great Batman, then you would probably put an exclamation mark at the end, so the phrases ends with emphasis on "Batman himself !".
It is the same, in the reverse direction, as the extra "a" present sometime in the original text. I think the mother tongue of the game author is Russian - all Slavic languages I know about, with one exception, do not have articles, they have declensions.
It is typical to find people who may even have a pronounciation more "by the book" than many mother tongue, yet make mistakes with "the", "a" - I have some funny story from my life about that.
There are at least two language where they use a form equivalent to "the Batman", i.e. the article in front of what can be consdidered the name of a person, but for one of the two is either used as part of a dialect or meant as a kind of joke through redundant emphasis, while for the other, is more of colloquial way used between friends (but depending on the way and tone, even a potentially rude, or kind of "lower class", way of speaking).
Unless you have a very specific reason to claim otherwise, the comma in the phrase "In the real world, everyone knows" is definetively not wrong. What is more doubtful, is whether that should be "everyone", or rather "everybody" - the generic "In the real world", seems to exclude the reference to a group of specific invididuals, but in some situations, "everyone" is used on purpose in similar phrases.
Since I guess the reference is to e-mail spam and a computer, then the correct verb is "delete", not "cancel". You would "cancel" an operation to reverse it's effects (a.k.a. "undo"), but you "delete" an e-mail, although both verbs derive from Latin.
"Tell me how you found this place" can be pefectly acceptable, if there is no question mark and it is rather an instruction. "Tell me, how did you find this place ?" is correct as a question, but it needs the comma and question mark, because "how did you find this place ?" is the form you use in a question, why the "tell me" is the instruction. The comma bridges between the instruction part, and the question part (and also makes it nicer as tone).
"Do you know who the main villain is ?" would be perfectly fine, and while the form with the elision ("who's" instead of "who is") is often used in daily language, in general the use of "do you know" is not associated with the form with the elision, being somehow more formal - though I believe even many mother tongue would indeed say something like the form you suggested (though in spoken language, they may go straight for "you know who's [...] ?", they will not use the "do you know" form).
'We're going to hang out on Amazon Island' can actually be very correct as informal language, if one writes it as 'we're going to hang out on "Amazon Island"', i.e. if there is a know joke or nickname for Themyscira, with people usually calling it "Amazonz Island".
Apparently, in the first period of the comics of Wonder Woman, they did refer to "Amazon island", or better "Amazon Isles" - though more than to use a nickname, it was probably because they did not have in mind a name (and for ideological reasons of the creator of Wonder Woman).
In any case, "on the Amazon Island", is wrong - it could be "the island of the Amazons" (effectively, in the end it stabilised on being one), or if you want to refer to Wonder Woman/Diana without using her name, you would say "on the Amazon's island" - though refering to someone in that way, through one of their characteristics, it is in general done to show distance from the person.
If you want to simplify, just say "We're going to "hang out" on Themyscira' - it is actually the name of the (invented, there is no island with that name) island.
About "interim" and "deputy", they are two very different concepts. A "deputy" will do the role for which he/she is acting as deputy "ad interim" (from which "interim") every time the person with the role is absent or otherwise impeded, and his/her roles as deputy is meant to be permanent.
However, an interim is someone doing a role "ad interim", for a limited period of time, but does not have any permanent role linked to that position (thus, not being the deputy). Also, again, using "the" is unecessary ("the Batman's deputy"), since you are using the genitive.
About Robin, you may want to go for something like "They say the first Robin is remembered for a lifetime, and you will always involuntarily compare all the others to him" - it is actually the description of a well known +/- subconscious process, and fits in one of the variants of the Batman's story (where the first Robin died).
"Not the best start to a career" is not my preferred form (I would change one word), but it is not unusual, although I believe is used more often in American English, and I would say it's a kind of colloquialism - wouldn't be flagged as wrong.
I am probably missing the context, but "You can consider it my superpower", seems perfectly correct, and depending also on the way it is said (contrary to popular belief, English can also be a very high-context language
) it can be considered nicer than the variant "Consider it my superpower".About fuss
, you may want to go for something like "You know, with all the fuss, I even forgot to ask you what's your name", where "with all the fuss" will indeed be written "in all the fuss" by some (there is a slight difference in meaning, I would say, but it seems negligeable in this case), and many will just cut the last part to "forgot to ask what's your name". Yes, some would say it could be '[...]I even forgot to ask: "What's your name ?"', but that is really something more for written language than spoken one.Unless you have some special reason that is not evident, there is no evident reason to change that "And with her help, I'll get to Harley" - that comma is not wrong, it is just a matter of where you want to put emphasis.
About "Daddy", it is 'Has "Daddy" issues", or 'Wants "Daddy"'s attention' (or "attentions", though there is a slight difference). The reason to use the uppercase "D" (and the genitive), is because people that type of approach may even seek a "father" figure in general, but when they get tuned on one person, they stick to that person - it is not a "daddy" they focus on (or even want as couple relationship and/or sexually), it is "Daddy".
Hope it's somehow useful, have fun !
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Thanks, this is very helpful!
I deleted the negligible ones and fixed the others in my column.
What online source should I use to quick-check my articles or grammar in general?
This is a hard one for me. According to the plot, some sort of malware is executing on the MC's device. And this (or also a car crush) causes him to turn up in Gotham.
But the whole time he refers to the malware as spam. At the start, he's watching cartoons and something interrupts with the matrix screen. I guess, it's intended to be a youtube-like ad or a random pop-up you can get when you're watching videos on the web. So his first line is "Spam? Can I watch the video in peace?" Since then, it's rather a name to the whole thing then actual spam you want to delete.
The actual dialogue is:
- I'm the interim Batman! But you call me ___.
- So you're the new Robin?
Looks like NPCs connect the two, the role and "Robin". But it's also known that Robin is Batman's deputy and not interim. So I suggested to change it.
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Okay, I'm done with drawing. It's time to write the code and edit the translation. The next update is on the 25th
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aight dude, thanks but imma pass, she has bigger eyes than fking alita man wtf, thanks a lot still
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Wazzaaap, dudes!
Added new content, as promised.
It's includes:
1. Harley,s blowjob
2. Harley,s Striptease
3. Corrections of the English translation
Plan for the future:
In the next update, I will add sex with Batgirl during the time freeze.
I hope I will have time to add titfuck for Harley Quinn as well.
I think the update will be ready between the 5th and 10th of August. See you later!
Added new content, as promised.
It's includes:
1. Harley,s blowjob
2. Harley,s Striptease
3. Corrections of the English translation
Plan for the future:
In the next update, I will add sex with Batgirl during the time freeze.
I hope I will have time to add titfuck for Harley Quinn as well.
I think the update will be ready between the 5th and 10th of August. See you later!
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