VN Ren'Py Abandoned Smartass [v0.06] [Zee95]

[Gleemer]

Here is the Italian translation

of Smartass [v0.05]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.

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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Smartass [v0.05]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

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Here is the Italian translation

of Smartass [v0.04]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.

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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Smartass [v0.04]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

You must be registered to see the links

 

[Zee95]

I think you need update the description and thumbnails images too.

If someone would write a description, I would be very grateful...
And the thumbnails images should also be changed, like you said... not a single image is no longer relevant there...

 

[Zee95]

Here is the Italian translation

of Smartass [v0.04]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Smartass [v0.04]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

Cool, FORZA ITALIA
An order from Signor Petrucci.
If the translator doesn't mind, I could add this version to my Patreon page...

 

[Stefan1985]

can anybody please help me with paulinas phone code?

 

[Gleemer]

Cool, FORZA ITALIA
An order from Signor Petrucci.
If the translator doesn't mind, I could add this version to my Patreon page...

thanks for the sympathy, add this and future translations calmly my friend

 

[Zee95]

thanks for the sympathy, add this and future translations calmly my friend

THANK YOU for your work...
Do you have any website, or should I leave a link to your account?

 

[Gleemer]

THANK YOU for your work...
Do you have any website, or should I leave a link to your account?

I answered you in private

 

[Abhai]

can anybody please help me with paulinas phone code?

2525

 

[Stefan1985]

thank you

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Smartass Hey, I resemble that remark

 

[PeggyBlackett]

Is this new or the same as the one i do0wnloaded yesterday/last night?

 

[Bip]

Is this new or the same as the one i do0wnloaded yesterday/last night?

If you took it here, then it should be a new release since the links were given today. But the release is already a few days old (3th of august), so if you took it somewhere else... The size of the files should give you a clue

 

[Alex5280]

Overall this was a pretty good update. However, a couple of scenes didn't really feel like they made sense for the story. The scenes with Kate and Sharon in the morning really didn't feel all that necessary, but the main one that felt really out of place was the flashback sex scene of the parents. It came across as just an excuse to through in a sex scene, but it didn't really seem to have anything to do with the story. Zee95 might want to consider increasing the text font size. It isn't too bad if you are playing on a desktop PC with a decent size monitor, but if you are playing on a smaller laptop, tablet, or phone it would probably be very hard to read. Anyway keep up the good work and looking forward to the next update.

P.S. The new banner image looks really good.

 

[PeggyBlackett]

If you took it here, then it should be a new release since the links were given today. But the release is already a few days old (3th of august), so if you took it somewhere else... The size of the files should give you a clue

got it here. i think it had a different picture on the page, which is what confused me, but this appears to be the one i already had

thanx for the reply

 

[negisensei1]

nice game \o

 

[nn2017]

Good

 

[visagedirect]

For almost 1GB this game is TRASH! i wont put a bad review (There is nothing to review) hence 0 stars ! Period !

 

[Zee95]

For almost 1GB this game is TRASH! i wont put a bad review (There is nothing to review) hence 0 stars ! Period !

just for fun

 

[Deleted member 3083868]

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just for fun

Face the reality man you gonna have to start writing new script for another new game. Note the criticism for your patreon numbers show they are right. People liking this are fans not supporters and we understand how hard it is to make a game so try to give positivity but we hope that the creator learns from his mistakes but here you have proved you have a yuge ego as evidenced from this game as no improvement from the previous game The Way can be seen . When there is so many games out there an average adult games user can only support about 5 games max if from a weak currency country and maybe 10 to 20 if from a country where currency is strong . Don't expect to get 1000 usd per month by being below par or average or even above average. If money not motivation then carry on like this

 

[Zee95]

Face the reality man you gonna have to start writing new script for another new game. Note the criticism for your patreon numbers show they are right. People liking this are fans not supporters and we understand how hard it is to make a game so try to give positivity but we hope that the creator learns from his mistakes but here you have proved you have a yuge ego as evidenced from this game as no improvement from the previous game The Way can be seen . When there is so many games out there an average adult games user can only support about 5 games max if from a weak currency country and maybe 10 to 20 if from a country where currency is strong . Don't expect to get 1000 usd per month by being below par or average or even above average. If money not motivation then carry on like this

Nah, this is my last project, if it's not successful... I will leave this field... If you think that I have no improvement in my work, well... I don't mind...
You say I don't learn from my mistakes, my biggest mistake was listening to every toxic user, and I tried to please everyone by rewriting the story over and over again... Which caused my work to drag on for years... And turned out to be an impossible task... I should have originally finished "The Way" the way I intended... not listening to "smart people"... Whether the game was successful or not doesn't matter, the project would have been finished... In my case, the only thing I felt I needed was time to learn some tricks, time and practice in writing dialogues... and so on... I think I'm making good progress in all components...
Regarding the number of patrons I have, yes, it's pretty darn amazing... I occasionally check out some games that are three times worse than mine, both in terms of visuals and story... with wooden characters living in cardboard boxes... but these games make a lot more money than I do... I guess their secret is showing pussy close ups
I always listen to constructive criticism, and it's helpful...
about my ego... you must be kidding, I'm friendly to all, adequate people, but I choose to respond toxically - to toxic dudes... and I'm open to any dialogue... and willing to change any nuances in the game...