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VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hidden Feelings [v0.3] [Stince]

3.50 star(s) 15 Votes
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ILCjr

ILCjr

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Dec 27, 2018
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mega is bit acting up but got it to dl it.
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Yeah, I don't know exactly what went wrong at first on the pc link in particular. I noticed that it messed up as soon as I posted it, so I edited it, and reposted the url, ad it worked. Maybe it was something to do with MEGA.
 
Mitsu80

Mitsu80

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Jan 30, 2019
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Direction wise (renders, poses, angles, facial expressions, lighting...) the game is good, very good even, but the writing is not that good, I'm not just talking about grammar, you don't have to do everything alone Dev, try to invest in a proofreader/writer, for now the writing and dialogues drag down a potentially amazing game
 
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BoltonGuy35

BoltonGuy35

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I'm guessing this is a lesbian dominated harem game with the mc in it just for his magic dick going by the preview pictures?
Normal 'Romance" isn't going to be an option and we will have the full force of a poly path rammed down our throats?
Not for me I guess.
 
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Xman60

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The story centers around a 26-year-old man. He returns home to face the consequences and those he left behind 8 years ago. Discover what you left behind. Love or hate? Well, play it and find out!​

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Release Date: 2022-05-19
Developer: Stince
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OTHERS: COMPRESSED*

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It has a great story.
I will be watching you to see how you write the story
 
Simulacrum29

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voyeurkind said:
Nice update. A few things:

* MC is referred to as "Tom" a number of times.

* A number of other random missing words in sentences.
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in addition, it should be made more clear when someone is thinking.
use a different text color or write it in parentheses or put an asterisk in front of the thinking. Without it I perceived it as slightly strange and with the mc in the hospital it got worse.
 
GentlemanCorpse

GentlemanCorpse

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Dec 11, 2021
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Hi,

I already don't understand the beginning, why should the family think I abandoned them? I don't get the story he tells... what is the point, he protected his mother and now he is out drinking...

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Stuart Hargreaves

Stuart Hargreaves

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Good game, first time playing, good story excellent twist at the end of chapter and some very sexy female characaters like where this is going will be following this(y):)
 
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GentlemanCorpse

GentlemanCorpse

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Okay, some things need polishing..

Posing - sometimes very theatrical or exaggerated, looks more funny then normal...

Writing - no problem with fast paced but somehow the language used sounds odd.
thoughts should be highlighted, you never know when MC is thinking or saying something, sometimes NPC thinking is highlighted with "", I would use italic font and always keep the name.

And I think this should be checked before releasing. It looks sloppy done and that there is no care taken..

Edit: I am glad there are all the other girls, because the mother is one hell of an abomination... at least her ass.

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michael1984

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Felt like there was nothing new

Thought this was a 0.2 version but ended on the same thing as before

Also there is a few times were the character name as tom even if u put another name
 
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