VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hidden Feelings [v0.3] [Stince]

[ShiroOkami2]

did like the milf renders, V1 had hope but if you havent played yet dont bother. Rather wait till v4 or 5 maybe by then the plot and playthrough will be somewhat good...as of now v2 just a mess and an insult to v1

 

[ShiroOkami2]

Isn't it a common sense to expect teasing when game's still v0.2? Do we need 'no sexual' tag for that just to let people know before they go ballistic while rating.

Teasing is to be expected, though with that route you'd also expect a good continuation in plot and character development from v1 but in this case this VN would fare better without this update well imo that is

 

[Rododendron3322]

Guys... Really?? This is this guy first attempt to create vn... First trying... If you are so smart why don't you create something better? I am really happy for this dev, he is creating something what is not so easy as you think, ALL ALONE. There are plot holes? No consistancy? Try to express your thoughts in language that you are not native, nor even fluent, in language that is much different then yours, hole sentence building is different. Trust me, it's not that easy as you think. So stop bombarding him couse for a total newbie he is doing decent job in foreign language...
And as about tags. Really?... No incest couse there is not scene with it YET? So basicly 90% of games that is v0.1-0.3 should have tags "no sexual content" but not "incest", "group" etc.... This game is evidently incest focused, so it deserve that tag even if there is still not such scene...
Gosh guys, chill out. Rome wasn't build in 1 day, what are you expecting? Gosh...

 

[punisher2099]

Once the dev gets help with the grammar/translation it will be fine. Couple of things the dev should look out for in the future is avoid introducing a ton of side LI before taking the relationships with the family to the "final level" so to speak, making sure saves don't break between updates, and offering an optional update only file when the updates start getting several gigs in size.

 

[maqkak10]

Thank you

 

[Sephiroth_85]

This game has some flaws but characters are very good and they are well connected with MC.

 

[Caninenappe]

good start with endearing characters. I'm waiting for the rest hoping that the updates are regular.

 

[giantsquidboy]

No patch needed so far. The "foster" preset is only to to make it acceptable for patreon. The mc will call the other characters always mom, sis, aunt and so on, no mater what you put instead of "foster". You can just insert "real" or "happy" family or "Alabama-maga-shithead" family if you prefer that... Whatever floats your boat.

script is in symbols cant edit it, its unreadable to make a patch out of it

 

[ticaaa]

a very good game , teasing at first is important , if sex happens at first easy then game is not worth playing

 

[brankom]

Looks promising, renders are good but the update does seem kind of lame, granted is a story focus update but have you seen the mom? at least squeeze something with her, just saying. Hopefully the first lewd scenes will be with the mother or the aunt, it's always nice to have some PG40+ protein.

 

[HansDampf788]

Well, the update was a disappointment.

The translation needs to be fixed, including having a clear distinction between talking and thinking.
The MC talked about a nightmare in the hospital but it was not shown.
Did the tits and ass of the mom get bigger? They look laughably big.
So the dad wants the son dead. That's new but do we need the drama?
WTF happened to the MC he looked much better with the beard. His clothing when leaving the hospital looks terrible.

Also, why mention that Jess is married? It seems like she is a LI.

If I would review the game in its current state it would be 2 stars.

 

[L3z1l3]

I really liked the game but it really needs a proofreader. The English is not unreadable, but there are a lot of annoying errors in it.

 

[Glen_Quagmire]

Is there a chapter 2 in this new game or does v0.2 mean that it was still the 1st chapter ?

Nice looking MILF in this game

 

[Rododendron3322]

Aunty is my favorite one

 

[cxx]

Is there a chapter 2 in this new game or does v0.2 mean that it was still the 1st chapter ?

2nd update of game.

 

[Illuminate]

like this game, can't wait the next update

 

[Stince]

Hi guys!
I haven't read the comments for a long time (I was afraid that a ton of shit would be poured on me), a lot of funny comments (they really make me choke with laughter).
Negative comments (I understand what they are writing about), but most of the claims at the moment I can't solve (if I can't pay for a normal translation, what kind of scriptwriter can we talk about)
As for the plot, maybe in the end it will be complete shit (for you),the plot is not so important here (for me), but the fact that I can't show you how I see the characters, it really depresses me.
Okay, don't be sad, I hope you're doing well.

 

[Ramagar]

Hi guys!
I haven't read the comments for a long time (I was afraid that a ton of shit would be poured on me), a lot of funny comments (they really make me choke with laughter).
Negative comments (I understand what they are writing about), but most of the claims at the moment I can't solve (if I can't pay for a normal translation, what kind of scriptwriter can we talk about)
As for the plot, maybe in the end it will be complete shit (for you),the plot is not so important here (for me), but the fact that I can't show you how I see the characters, it really depresses me.
Okay, don't be sad, I hope you're doing well.

You make the game your way. You are the one with the vision and courage to make it. If people dislike your game for whatever reason, then it is their problem, not yours.

 

[___abbas___]

Hi guys!
I haven't read the comments for a long time (I was afraid that a ton of shit would be poured on me), a lot of funny comments (they really make me choke with laughter).
Negative comments (I understand what they are writing about), but most of the claims at the moment I can't solve (if I can't pay for a normal translation, what kind of scriptwriter can we talk about)
As for the plot, maybe in the end it will be complete shit (for you),the plot is not so important here (for me), but the fact that I can't show you how I see the characters, it really depresses me.
Okay, don't be sad, I hope you're doing well.

Don't be sad. A lot of the big devs nowadays didn't make it big from their first game or even the second. Take this game as a learning experience. You already excel in the renders department, and it is a huge plus as it's the main component in making most of the games here successful, you only need a few experiences in story telling and writing (although I know that the translation is a huge pain in the ass for you, I hope you find a solution soon) but nevertheless don't get bummed out from the criticism, listen to them and keep improving I know there are very harsh comments, but you will always have people who will call your game shit even when you have the best game ever.
For me, I enjoyed it so far keep up the good work and I wish you all the best

 

[Rododendron3322]

As above, your game is good, and have nice potential. You could improve yourself, but everyone should. So keep your head high and don't let them take you down. We are here for your game and for you.