so is the camgirl stuff going to be avoidable or is it a key part of the game also will there be ntr/sharing/swing or any of the li's with other guys? im holding off trying this until more is clear on the direction
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interesting could be good...any reason why have low support? like coppying others devs, no story, ntr... atc?
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This is stupid logic.
Does this mean that if you and your 'girl' went to a nudist resort where EVERYONE was naked, you are a cuck?
Do you see how dumb that chain of thought is?
True; it's much more likely to make you her pimp. Especially if all the men there at the camp were giving her money to perform various lewd acts.
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Script uses default name Max instead of the name I set ..
There has also been mistakes in grammar, and some lines are missing punctuation.
Also there are times when it doesn't even make sense, like in the beginning, she says "Friend's Son?!!"
instead of something more logical like idk, his name if she knew him from when he was younger???
I feel like the script needs a revamp, and someone to proofread it.
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There has also been mistakes in grammar, and some lines are missing punctuation.
Also there are times when it doesn't even make sense, like in the beginning, she says "Friend's Son?!!"
instead of something more logical like idk, his name if she knew him from when he was younger???
I feel like the script needs a revamp, and someone to proofread it.
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Hmm... while I like the concept, I looked at the reviews and it said that the choices didn't seem to matter in terms of content - that the good/bad routes were largely the same. Is this correct? I've also seen complaints about the size of the game, which is odd if it is as far along as being halfway done should imply (.5)
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Thank you very much for reporting these bugs. They will be corrected immediately and measures will be taken so that this does not happen again.
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Thanks for reporting the bugs.
goatherd? I don't know what it is either XD.
The correct word should be gentleman, it will be corrected.
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Thanks to all the people for having marked the game with a like, we finally reached 100 likes.
I know a lot of embarrassing mistakes were made, I promise to spend more time reviewing each update before publishing it.
As a reward for the 100 likes I leave a preview of the next update of the game. Stay lustful. XD
I know a lot of embarrassing mistakes were made, I promise to spend more time reviewing each update before publishing it.
As a reward for the 100 likes I leave a preview of the next update of the game. Stay lustful. XD
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hallo
playing v0.5 full and still errors without end during the yoga-scene !
It probably makes more sense to wait for an update/bugfixing than to continue playing like this.
Yep some of those issues are still present in the 0.5 version that I'm now checking out, I will have to go through the script personally and make changes since I cannot even begin to enjoy the game while those glaring issues are staring me in the face
I have noticed a few of those scenes, some of which were sexual in nature where the names got mixed up and it shows the MC talking when it clearly should have been the girl and vice versa, this is incredibly immersion-breaking and messes with the feel of the game, as above I'll just edit those changes personally.
I'm enjoying the idea behind the game and I know when those bugs/errors are dealt with I'll be able to really enjoy the game properly, but hopefully, they'll be fixed permanently soon so I no longer have to keep editing it my side before trying to enjoy the story.
Also, there are numerous points in the story where a female character is referred to in the 3rd person as a 'him' which is incorrect
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I think that incest tag was put in there to try and get as many people as possible to download it. You don't just accidentally add incest as a tag. If you want to tell an incest tale, don't be frightened to do it.
Trying to read between the lines, it sounds like you really don't have a clue where your game is headed. Thing is this is the kind of thing some new devs would do to get traction on their game early on, by doing so it kind of generates subscriptions of support, then after they they get their subscribers, they change the goal posts and remove the tags that people subscribed for in the first place.
That is a massive no go for me. At least from what I have read so far, you haven't exactly been very honest with the tags. You say there is no incest. You do know that incest games that are censored from patreon use terms like landlady etc. Of course you must do, that's why you used those terms.
You need to decide where you want to go with this game, you need to stop, and think. Tagged incest games if done properly without any ntr or other males will get you a large audience. You might even want an harem. Incest+harem usually go together in these games but not always, you can have a harem game without the incest, think harem hotel.
If it's NTR you will get a much smaller audience since not so many people like it, but don't add both incest + ntr or harem + ntr, the harem + ntr are opposed to each other. Harem=1 male, ntr= multiple males = not a harem, because you will loose any credibility your trying to build up and I doubt many people would even bother with it.
I would also suggest you look at subscribe star as an alternative better solution than shitty patreon and their draconian censorship, with subscribe star you don't generally need to worry about any of that except for the really bad stuff. And has been said already a few times, get a fluent english proof reader since it is very obvious you need one.
Decide where you want to go with your game, give it some thought, sit down and write an outline of the story your trying to tell and then wite it. Each chapter should have at least a plot line. A lot of these games fall flat on their asses because the dev gets lost in the story he/she is trying to tell because it wasn't properly fleshed out, so the story ends up all over the place and a giant mess, don't fall in to this trap. If your trying to get the girls and the mc emotionally attached, never ever kill a love interest off (girl), don't punish your players.
I won't bother with your game, since you have stated in this post there will not be IC, despite the landlady, i'd suggest rewriting her as something else, otherwise your going to confuse people into believing it's a censored incest story. Unless it really is, and your just trying to protect your account...go to susbcribe star..they don't take 8% of people's subscription for themselves in the process. Sorry if I come across as being rude, I am not, I have seen way to many games die an early death because of dev mistakes. (they loose their support).
I just tried this for the first time.
I am unsure what people are talking about with the cam girl stuff. In my play through I never encountered a cam girl.
So obviously choices matter to some degree. I did almost all the red choices,and rolled back if it was a game ending thing(kind of dumb to have game ending things,but meh). It was a fun game. Not totally original,but enough so it felt good to play.
I enjoyed it.
I am unsure what people are talking about with the cam girl stuff. In my play through I never encountered a cam girl.
So obviously choices matter to some degree. I did almost all the red choices,and rolled back if it was a game ending thing(kind of dumb to have game ending things,but meh). It was a fun game. Not totally original,but enough so it felt good to play.
I enjoyed it.
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DEV: I can tell you this from the point of view of an NTR hater, the events where those bosses touch my women. It was very close to not removing the game at that point and setting it to ignore. This is already on the red side. So if you want to be popular with NTR haters too then don't let other men touch MC women. It doesn't matter if the shit happens in a dream. You can chase away a large number of players with a very small mistake and there is no going back.