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In my opinion animations are a waste of time and resources. They cost more to make than an image, and they usually look bad. Obviously it's your game, and you decide which direction you take. But if you allow me a piece of advice, don't waste your time with animations. They do not contribute anything, and even make many games worse.
What’s your point? Porn doesn’t have choices. Books don’t have choices. Hell, even tv shows don’t have choices.
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Well yes, you are right about that. I already said it in my review. A game without choices is not a game. I think it would be easier to make a comic, and the result would be pretty much the same.
However, I understand the decision to make a visual novel. It is a different format than the comic, and there are people who find it more comfortable and attractive.
I am liking this visual novel, and it is the format chosen by the author to tell the story. So for that reason, beyond what I think of the format, it did not influence my final evaluation of the product.
Your game is very beautiful, the animations are well done and the story is well built.
I would love to see Kimberly's story intertwined with that of Rayanne and Cathy.
If you allow to give you a hint in the game, at Rayanne and Cathy's workplace in the bakery, have Cathy put on a new uniform and groping scenes when serving the tables, also in the room add a bathroom with the possibility of satisfying the customers there with a gloryhole.
For school: blowjob scenes for girls with the soccer team.
blowjob and sex scene between the principal and Kimberly.
Carry and her mother being blackmailed and caught in the trap.
I would love to see Kimberly's story intertwined with that of Rayanne and Cathy.
If you allow to give you a hint in the game, at Rayanne and Cathy's workplace in the bakery, have Cathy put on a new uniform and groping scenes when serving the tables, also in the room add a bathroom with the possibility of satisfying the customers there with a gloryhole.
For school: blowjob scenes for girls with the soccer team.
blowjob and sex scene between the principal and Kimberly.
Carry and her mother being blackmailed and caught in the trap.
You're strangely aggressive in your comments. I could e.g. pay for an alternative path as I have done with another game/ visual novel couple of times, but you obviously don't need that which is ok with me.
I read the comments and wanted to ask something.
Is this game abandoned and Kimberly's story made?
Or will there be 2 different games one this and the other Kimberly's Story?
Is this game abandoned and Kimberly's story made?
Or will there be 2 different games one this and the other Kimberly's Story?
Fair question. I am currently working on Kimberly’s Life and it is more like a side story or continuation of this game because it has the same cast. However, Rayanne, Kayla, and Carrie will only be seen in the prologue. I would not call this game abandoned at this time. At the very least, hometown trap will have one more update that would complete it in a logical way. But the option to continue both is still open for now. I can only work on one at a time though. I know that is a vague answer, but it is the truth.
I understand what you mean, if you allow me I'll tell you how I think:
It is better to finish this story first as it is the main story. Once the whole plot is done and the ending is obtained with the main protagonists, with their stories, with the events that must take place and the combinations to be made to have a linear and logical plot. Then do the secondary story which is implemented with the main one.
it's like playing an RPG and having primary quests and secondary quests.
I'm not a programmer so I don't understand many things, but I believe that in every story you have to set a goal and work to achieve that goal. Ask yourself these questions:
You as a programmer what story do you want to give to your characters?
What final goal do you want to achieve? How do you want to structure the plot? What do you want to achieve?
It is better to finish this story first as it is the main story. Once the whole plot is done and the ending is obtained with the main protagonists, with their stories, with the events that must take place and the combinations to be made to have a linear and logical plot. Then do the secondary story which is implemented with the main one.
it's like playing an RPG and having primary quests and secondary quests.
I'm not a programmer so I don't understand many things, but I believe that in every story you have to set a goal and work to achieve that goal. Ask yourself these questions:
You as a programmer what story do you want to give to your characters?
What final goal do you want to achieve? How do you want to structure the plot? What do you want to achieve?
I understand your point of view. But plans and goals change. When I found Kimberly’s model I fell in love, and when came up with her backstory…I knew I had to tell it. I tried adding her as a side character. Then as a 2nd MC. But doing the second MC I found myself only wanting to tell things about her. Then I felt doing that wasn’t fair to the other story because this one started with Rayanne. I’m not sure it would have made sense if I made Rayanne a side character in her own game. I’m sure that makes me look bad to certain people. It makes me look like I can’t finish something I started. I get it if people are upset about starting a game when another isn’t finished. But the truth is that it was either do this and start Kimberly’s life, or quit developing all together.
I'm not mad, I just wanted to know how the story will proceed I can't wait to play the game you are creating.
I like stories like this, I just hope you don't abandon it, it has potential, the animations and the plot that is coming out of it is done well and continues like this.
I like stories like this, I just hope you don't abandon it, it has potential, the animations and the plot that is coming out of it is done well and continues like this.
I am making a lot of progress on the first release of Kimberly’s Life. It’s already as long as the first release of HT. I plan on making the first release twice as big, and with more action then the first release of HT. Meaning there will be at least one sexual act. For those who haven’t heard, I decided to make a game starring Kimberly. It coincides with HT and uses the same male characters already created in the world, and more. I can’t wait for everyone to see this new project. Thanks for your support.
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nice game , facial expressions to be corrected,
good luck with your development
good luck with your development
Already been done. There were a few in the first update that weren’t the best. But since then the facial expressions have spot on. Thanks for the well wishes.
Thanks for this kind of VN, finally a story that does without the sometimes nonsensical choices that often enough mean that some things are missed, because you choose the wrong path. If anyone don't like that, he can easily delete the story and deal with "games" that suit his preferences, because when reading a crime novel I can't choose too who the murderer should be.
Criticism is sometimes completely ok, but everyone should also accept the paths that other people want to go, keep it up, SpaceBall1
Criticism is sometimes completely ok, but everyone should also accept the paths that other people want to go, keep it up, SpaceBall1
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