MikesDK

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I understand your point, but sincerelly I can't work with male to male sex, so that is out of the table. Also, mc could fuck girl corpses, but
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Also, Patreon and most pages are strongly against necro, so that's a big no. I understand you just started and MC is barely starting to grow in personality, so there's a lot to see.
I just gotta ask, its proberly been up already but, why do you say MC can only get powers from fucking/orgasm?

First story dosent really add up since my MC got wind power without fucking her in my playthrough? which is also why i found the forced sex scene at the start stupid (hate forced stuff, but would have fucked red if it had been a choice but still) since MC can clearly gain powers in other ways, but that fact is never part of the story which kinda ruins the overall picture a little and make MC feels stupid since he should know how he got wind power and that it wasent from sex.

Second i always hated that part since i wont be able to get powers from most girl in prisson since i dont want to fuck em, but atleast you can tame them and put them to work without doing anything with them, but cant gain powers.
 

Finisterrex

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I just gotta ask, its proberly been up already but, why do you say MC can only get powers from fucking/orgasm?

First story dosent really add up since my MC got wind power without fucking her in my playthrough? which is also why i found the forced sex scene at the start stupid (hate forced stuff, but would have fucked red if it had been a choice but still) since MC can clearly gain powers in other ways, but that fact is never part of the story which kinda ruins the overall picture a little and make MC feels stupid since he should know how he got wind power and that it wasent from sex.

Second i always hated that part since i wont be able to get powers from most girl in prisson since i dont want to fuck em, but atleast you can tame them and put them to work without doing anything with them, but cant gain powers.

I can't spoil this information, sorry.
 

bcrr

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This would honestly just be "I take special care of enunciating when speaking" in every modern dialect of English I'm aware of.

Hearing it would make me assume the speaker was a Spanish speaker originally, as they sometimes add eh to the start of s words when speaking English, although I think it's technically only st words (like ehstop)
Native Spanish speakers don't add random E's the start of words, "especial" is just literally what the word "special" translates to in Spanish.
 

MikesDK

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I can't spoil this information, sorry.
Fair enough, it just makes story and MC feel a bit weird when things dosent line up as story goes along and MC not even thinking about how he got powers once without sex, i mean he should know that and yet he only thinks its all about the sex which dosent make sense.

But i guess something is planed in the future releases about this hole thing so guess ill wait and see, maybe it can make sense at some point :)
 

DyonisXX

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I don't think I have it in me to keep playing

The dialogue is pure cringe

I'm at the hero party or whatever it is in part 1 and I just can't take it anymore, any time anyone says anything I have to stop and look away at my 2nd monitor for a bit because it's that ubearably cringe.

This game reads like a 14 year old who has never interacted with a single person in his life and spends 9 hours a day watching ecchi anime wrote it.

Here, let me give show you the current line of text I'm at as I'm writing this:
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What am I fucking reading. let me out
 
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I don't think I have it in me to keep playing

The dialogue is pure cringe

I'm at the hero party or whatever it is in part 1 and I just can't take it anymore, any time anyone says anything I have to stop and look away at my 2nd monitor for a bit because it's that ubearably cringe.

This game reads like a 14 year old who has never interacted with a single person in his life and spends 9 hours a day watching ecchi anime wrote it.

Here, let me give show you the current line of text I'm at as I'm writing this:
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What am I fucking reading. let me out
Look, I'm not going to spoil anything. But if you care about me and my happiness at all, then I ask you to power through! I'm not saying it gets better, but I know you will want to kick my ass when you come back here! :ROFLMAO: It will still be worth, for the joy and happiness I'll feel will keep me laughing and youthful for decades to come! PLEASE! :LOL:
 

HELIO CESAR

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First time playing, was loving it till the costume party and post Kate bridge scene, things got rough...
Dont get me wrong I have nothing against sharing or ntr in games when they are properly settled (i even shared Winter with our bro Erick!! (Love the guy!)), but man, this whole party and competing against yourself got me bummed. It got half the LI cast and basically throws them out the window.

Amanda calling mc a pervert every single time she shows up but got no problem deep kissing a 'random dude'?
Vellanie implied interest in mc after pool scene and in drawing scene to also kiss a 'random dude'? (they didn't get married but...)
Hannah almost get raped, is saved by mc, showing interest, can't even look the mf in the face without embarrassment, also kiss the 'random dude' at party...
Rei gets annoyed if anyone even tries to flirt with her and run to mc to escape, also no problem at party.
And Kate is obviously falling for another guy. but sure 'it's mc so it's cool'.

The issue is not even the kiss per se, it's that it make their personality conflicting and make we think, "anyone will do heh? At least any Superhero...".
Hell if this scene happened at the start of the game before we form some connections with some of them i would have no problems. As i had no problem with Lisha since her connection with the mc was pretty normal/weak till that point or sharing Winter since she is just a horny gal till it.
Ok i admit maybe Vellanie can be taken out of the rant like Lisha, since the bet showed she is a more 'free-spirited' gal and don't mind casual kissing.

Again the problem wasn't the scene but the way it contradicted their personalities, why make some of them first fall or show interest in mc to have them nonchantaling kissing a random Superhero dude?
Kate was licking mc's leg some days prior, she isn't retarded to not see what it would seem like, so i guessed she was clearly showing no problem making advances into her brother...

This premise was kinda a bummer being honest. Kate could very well have heard Marco being mentioned in the bridge scene and tried to get to him in secret, but knowing its him! If we would have LI falling or romantically interacting with the Hero alter ego it would be nice having them not having these interactions with mc and vice versa.
So when they are pretty close he have; "Oh you like me Marco? I'm also the Hero!", "Oh you like me Hero? I'm also Marco!" (if plausible)

But the game is really well made and the general story is good, i guess it's a personal thing and this one in specific didn't sit well with me, i will probably keep playing because as a said it's a well made game. Just wanted to rant heh.

Good luck in the future dev!
 
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Blaisdale

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HELIO CESAR

Been a while since I played this but...

1.) For Amanda.
I'm with you on the concept of not like being insulted all the time with people on a game.
However Amanda's point of view, you could very well be a pervert and was bad mouthing you for such actions.
When you first run into her, pun intended.
It's a panty shot, the later again when you get the option (assuming you pick it) again she comes to with you looking at her panties.

When she confronts you later when she touches your leg to see if the pain is real she touches the fake leg.
This points at the fact she was struggling to see what you did as just, she had it in her mind you're a pervert.

I think you kinda have to forgive a bit with her, specially later when she also thinks you're stalking her.
Depending on your actions at the pool, feeling her up...... If you do that you got the name coming for sure.


2.) Vellanie
I think that's the chick who draws the pictures.
Its implied that she has an interest in him (?)
Ok, dont see how that matters too much but you bring up the pool party.

If your giant cock is out there at near full mast, people are going to be interested in him seeing how big it is.
Specially since hes also ripped a bit.
You made a better point for Amanda, all you did was point out two things.
But they aren't of big consequence.

An interest in someone does not mean it will lead to something.
I.E. Winter has an interest in the M.C. She stalks him to his house and he wakes up next to her.
She never even called him like most.
There were lots of days a phone call could have been made or an attempt to his his number.

Vellanie shows shes manipulating you/has plans for you.
You see how little she will fight for you at this point.
When Eric talks to you about wanting to train or something, Vellanie if I recall correctly is in the background at the left side.
If you pick Eric over her, she slouches her head in defeat, but she never came up to you trying to make an argument for staying behind with her.
She isn't brave directly and uses her art to get what she wants.

3.) Hannah
Crap one of the ones I seriously lack interest in.
Yeah shes not up my alley, I'm sure she is written for people that like that.
I'm sure it works well for them, I'm not one of them so no defending that one from me.

4.) Rei
Ok now I very much like Rei.
I've stated that before on here so that's no shocker.
So Rei doesn't like anyone flirting with her, that's a common thing actually.
So the writing there is kinda real, a lot of women/girls dont actually like being flirted with unless they know a person well or like them.
When you're talking school girls, usually when boys flirt they can go way over board.
So her not wanting it, would suggest she gets it way to much or shes preventing a problem.
If we are going by the image
Rei in my eyes is second place of the school girls image wise, only bested by Yui, third I'd say Shuana(?) Erics stalker.
Vell if I cant pick her.

However its pretty upfront that Rei always liked the M.C.
From her pouncing on him and him cracking his head on the desk.
Which I love the line of him saying he didn't have protection or immunity to tables. I forget the word for word but I always loved reading it. Now I kinda wanna read it again.

Rei has always been forward with the M.C. Almost trying to say hes mine.
She pounces him , sits on his lap, she has the most time with him, it felt like aside from Kate out of all the school girls.
She also outside of Kate is the only one to also have called him (not counting Lynx in this) and more than once I think.

So the bigger picture is,
Rei is the most forward and she isn't shy about it.
A girl sitting on your lap is a huge statement specially at those years.


5.) Kate

That is one of those options mean to make you struggle for sure.

Did you pick Sister, Cousin, Room...... Yeah we only picked Sister or Cousin.
Doubt anyone picked Roommate if I'm wrong correct me, pretty sure no one did though.

Kates overall issue will be she lives with the M.C. and she isnt bold enough.
There is a LOT of minor gloss overs in this game.

Speaking as someone who can change their voice on the fly and has made money from it.
There is nothing saying he doesn't change his voice or even that maybe the suits change their sound.
I'm not saying he sounds like a mouthful of marbles but its a easy conscept to assume, hes hiding his voice.

Its actually not a rare thing either its surprisingly common.


The bigger problem I would say is,
Eric has screamed out your first name after a fight.
Anyone in ear shot knows your first name, as does Whisper because of it.

This previous update, left a confusiing feeling
Lynx a woman who said to you a few times never call her Arya, call her by her Hero name.
By the time you go to her.
She in a crowded area, she speaks about you by name.
If anyone was following her or watching would have heard the M.C.'s name being said.
Short while later she runs towards you, while in your hero outfit and she ....... screams the M.C.'s name
Later to be caught by a guy taking pictures.
Calling you her secret lover.

I get that its over 3 months later but thats one hell of a slip up.
I was all for when Eric did it, as I said before, I am all for mistakes and slip ups.
Were only human and will make mistakes, so I like characters writen that way specially since they are all just starting out
(Eric and M.C.)
Lynx is a bit of a head scratcher, specially what she demanded earlier and she slips up but then you are out of a coma.
I think its easy to ignore the camera guy not knowing you as you're hero life wasnt around long, although somehow long enough to have been in a cosplay event and know.

*scratching head*
Yeah not sure how you got known so far and just as easily forgotten lol.
Though it could be they assumed you died and things got so hectic some people may have forgot your um suit style? lol

There is harder things you could focus on.
Also Kate was probably so much in fear I doubt she could remember anything that was said.
Even in real life when people are around when sometihng bad happens,
they often get details of what happened wrong because their mind is all over.
 
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Blaisdale

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the card game with Matthew, Karin, and Alice. why there isn't an option to have a foursome?

Just a guess but from how the girls seem to have acted.
I think its suppose to come across like the M.C. is protecting him or using him to be with the girls.
 

Finisterrex

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the card game with Matthew, Karin, and Alice. why there isn't an option to have a foursome?
This was primarily because there were already several options, and adding more would have extended the time for just one event. Additionally, you can't double Karin with Matt, or have Matthew have his way with Alice alone, or both girls for him. I selected what I believed to be the most interesting combinations.
 

MythMackay

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Well, I guess before I downloaded this game, I should have REALLY scoured this thread to be 100% sure, but I saw the incest tag, and some posts saying that you can set the relationships (including a post from the dev just last month stating that very thing!), so I chose "sister" for my relationship with Kate, and was happy as I began my journey.

I really enjoyed part 1, and once I reached the end, I excitedly downloaded part 2 to continue the story... Only to be slapped in the face with the blunt declaration that my parents were dead, and I was raised by my father's side piece... oh, and Kate isn't even my half-sister. Which isn't stated anywhere in part 1...
As a matter of fact, right before you're prompted to choose the MC's relationship with Kate in part 1, she states, and I quote:
"We've know each other since we were born... I'm sure I'm a lot more than 'just Kate'."

Apparently, though, in part 2, it's explained that after your parents were killed, you're taken to your father's mistress' house, where you meet your new "mother" and "sister", the latter being several years past being born, by the way, and they become your new "family." A family which the dev makes absolutely perfectly clear, is in name only... Too bad he couldn't have done that in part 1 before I got invested in the story, but hey, maybe that was the plan all along?

Anyways, lesson learned. Cheers!
 
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Krytax123

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Well, I guess before I downloaded this game, I should have REALLY scoured this thread to be 100% sure, but I saw the incest tag, and some posts saying that you can set the relationships (including a post from the dev just last month stating that very thing!), so I chose "sister" for my relationship with Kate, and was happy as I began my journey.

I really enjoyed part 1, and once I reached the end, I excitedly downloaded part 2 to continue the story... Only to be slapped in the face with the blunt declaration that my parents were dead, and I was raised by my father's side piece... oh, and Kate isn't even my half-sister. Which isn't stated anywhere in part 1...
As a matter of fact, right before you're prompted to choose the MC's relationship with Kate in part 1, she states, and I quote:
"We've know each other since we were born... I'm sure I'm a lot more than 'just Kate'."

Apparently, though, in part 2, after your parents are killed, you're taken to your father's mistress' house, where you meet your new "mother" and "sister", the latter being several years past being born, by the way, and they become your new "family." A family which the dev makes absolutely perfectly clear, is in name only... Too bad he couldn't have done that in part 1 before I got invested in the story, but hey, maybe that was the plan all along?

Anyways, lesson learned. Cheers!
very tragic :cry: i feel so sad for you
 

Sayajin2205

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Apparently, though, in part 2, it's explained that after your parents were killed, you're taken to your father's mistress' house, where you meet your new "mother" and "sister", the latter being several years past being born, by the way, and they become your new "family." A family which the dev makes absolutely perfectly clear, is in name only... Too bad he couldn't have done that in part 1 before I got invested in the story, but hey, maybe that was the plan all along?

Anyways, lesson learned. Cheers!
Other way around Kate's mom is the wife of MC's dad and our mom was the mistress and also kate is our half sister most likely it isn't made clear due to patreon but it makes the most sense and kate's mom adopted us.
 
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