VN Ren'Py Completed 23 Sisters [v1.0 Final] [Doc5252]

[ProofreadingRUS]

So if Akeko didn't know it was a Brothel, and we only meet granny... Is she the only prostitute on the grounds? Even more she started it with her husband 26 years ago? So as a Bed and Breakfast or as a Brothel and Breakfast? Also if she is granny would it then have been started when she was in her 40s/50s? Man is granny now also pregnant? Sure we heard about the pharmacy, wouldn't be surprised if granny and Akeko share the pills and boom. That is gonna be a complicated conversation.

If you paid attention to the story like I had to, no.
She wasn't included in the contract.
She also said she was too old or wouldn't care so it doesn't matter even if she does.

 

[MD27]

Setting aside those faces that will haunt me in my nightmares, this update continue giving us good fun shit my friend
Loved the part when Tiff almost spilled the truth about the pills and all the stupid situations

 

[Tyr Unchained]

This... is an actual thing. Wow. All I can say is keep em coming although I'm not sure what's more hilarious. The game or these comments...

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

"patch notes"

Version 0.02c. still has Grammatical errors.
You need a better proofreader.

 

[Joshua Tree]

Version 0.02c. still has Grammatical errors.
You need a better proofreader.

Don't worry, none of the implied characters seems to have completed school....

 

[Doc5252 Productions]

Version 0.02c. still has Grammatical errors.
You need a better proofreader.

I don't have a proofreader. It's just me.

 

[Joshua Tree]

I don't have a proofreader. It's just me.

I took it as he volunteer his services as a proofreader.(free of charge)...

 

[Uthuriel]

I don't have a proofreader. It's just me.

There are plenty people with experience here on this platform.
I would just ask, but not a random person.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

I don't have a proofreader. It's just me.

Send me the script, and I'll try to do it in a day or two. Needs a lot of work.
I assure you it it.
I assure you it is.(better)

 

[Putzi]

Hi the game is awesome!
But the textbox bothers me, so I have something to change that.
You can make the textbox transparent,
change textsize and name size.

Delete the numbers in front of the name (textbox2.rpy)
copy paste the file to the / game / folder

try it

 

[ImperialD]

Version 0.02c. still has Grammatical errors.
You need a better proofreader.

Tiffany is a hillbilly .. probably why you have trouble understanding her

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Hi the game is awesome!
But the textbox bothers me, so I have something to change that.
You can make the textbox transparent,
change textsize and name size.

Delete the numbers in front of the name (textbox2.rpy)
copy paste the file to the / game / folder

try it


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I don't see a difference.

 

[Uthuriel]

I don't see a difference.

The textbox...

 

[ImperialD]

mods urghh

 

[bobdickgus]

I don't see a difference.

You don't see the missing textbox and the black outline around the white text on the second pic?

 

[thundersan86]

pc Mega
mac Mega
linux Mega

Thank you! Keep up the good work!

 

[btrain33]

The characters in this game are not under 18 though. So there is a differance there. In proud father they are. I did not know it was removed though since loli stuff in that game is only from a patch.

Any game dev can say his characters are over 18. That doesn't make it so. If they are not created to look over 18 and look more like a 10 year old that's just blatant child pornography. This game is child pornography. A clear violation of F95's "Rule 7" At least with Proud Father you can have the option to opt out of the loli content.

 

[Doc5252 Productions]

Porn Star "Kitty." Looks really young and is actually in her mid-20s.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

You don't see the missing textbox and the black outline around the white text on the second pic?

I see the background better, less dark.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Any game dev can say his characters are over 18. That doesn't make it so. If they are not created to look over 18 and look more like a 10 year old that's just blatant child pornography. This game is child pornography. A clear violation of F95's "Rule 7" At least with Proud Father you can have the option to opt out of the loli content.

And how do you know how old hey are?
If any woman smokes and or drinks, they age 10 to 30 years.
Maybe they don't smoke and or drink.