VN Ren'Py Abandoned 3001: A MILF Odyssey [S2 v0.1.3] [XCentric Labs]

[Joc]

x-centric thanks for the game but I miss Captain Kateway. When, when will she be in my arms? It will be in the next chapter ...

 

[X-Centric]

Could we maybe see some of the girls with some monsters?

Just to make sure I understand, you mean existing girls banging male monsters? Or MC banging monstergirls?
I was going to have the interrogation end with Glob banging T'Nal, but I wasn't sure the audience was ready for that

 

[X-Centric]

I'm the opposite of the person you replied to - the femdom parts are easily the best parts of the game to me and they're pretty well done...congrats on that! I can't wait to see what's next with our dominant ambassador and captain especially

Thank you!
I plan on continuing to have optional femdom scenes in each chapter.
Jessica will have at least one scene next Chapter. IDK about the Ambassador yet. From the poll, it seems like the Klingons are gonna be in, you'll have a choice between maledom/femdom there too.
What kind of new femdom characters would you like to see? I was thinking it might make sense to design a species around it.

 

[X-Centric]

Well, I understand that some characters have domination. That's just part of the story.
Lizzy, Jessica Ward, Luxanal Choi and also Wendy, that's all ok .

But with some characters it just didn't fit in for me.
Lieutenant Nakamoto for example .. she's got a huge crush on us and what do we do? We're an asshole, use her to our advantage and dominate her.`
And she thinks it's all great because she wants to be with us?

Osanna was so happy that she finally has a better life and is no longer treated like a slave.
Before she agreed to the bond, she even specifically asked for it.
And now? The first thing we do after Bondig is to treat her the same as her slave traders before?
I understand that she goes through a change afterwards, but there must be other ways to show her how to behave properly?

Heaven, even Tittyana you are slowly steering in the direction of domination.

The MC is slowly just acting like a power-hungry asshole who wants to dominate everything at all costs.
We are the hero of the story .. why don't we act like that?

Women can fall for us because we saved the damsel in distress, because we are such a strong leader, because we are so resourceful, or simply because we look good.
I just wish that the game doesn't turn into complete domination feast.
And of course, that's all just my opinion. Everyone has their own preferences and that's a good thing. It would just be nice if there was something for everyone.

Thanks for the great feedback.
Osanna is on a fast track to learn everything she missed out on, by not being raised as a proper noble lady. Once she's ready and goes through her final transformation, she'll be a dominant woman. Keep in mind, the bond makes her obedient by choice. I designed that species to have a feudal & matriarchal social structure that led to harem building, with the male effectively owning the whole harem, so there will be some dom/sub play there.
But you're right Osanna could probably use some more TLC. Lizzy deserves a proper date.

Nakamoto is a nice mild-mannered shy girl who fantasizes about being just the opposite. I think those scenes work, but I'd love to hear what you'd like to see happen with her.

Tittyana is discovering sexuality (MC is her first), and in this chapter has had wholesome love making sessions with the MC but has also watched him dom/sub someone AND experienced Bethany's emotional arousal. She's figuring things out.

MC is progressively becoming more dominant, going from the shy robotics nerd he was at the beginning to Captain Kateway's First Officer. But even if he'll twist the rules, and at times be misguided, he will still uphold the ideals of the Federation.

 

[X-Centric]

x-centric thanks for the game but I miss Captain Kateway. When, when will she be in my arms? It will be in the next chapter ...

I'm glad you like her! I think it may take a little while before she falls completely for the MC, but let' just say she's starting to enjoy his company a lot more ...

 

[X-Centric]

Okay, I hate to be negative from the outset, but with how short the early chapters seem to be, and how often it comes up, half of the game feels like an ad. I don't mind the sidenote of "sub to my Patreon if you enjoy the game" at the end of an update, but for the love of god, don't write it up every time some story event happens, it is distracting and makes the game feel like a product and not a story you're trying to tell.
Less of a problem in later chapters, but still...

In terms of other constructive criticism, the story itself is okay, but I wish the chapters lasted longer and more character development took place during them (which seems to be fixed in the latest two chapters, so cool on that front).
Also, this is personal preference, but I would suggest not focusing too much on dom/sub content. It seems to be part of half the storylines right now, and that's a bit much imo.

Everything else seems to be average-good quality. The alien designs do stand out as pretty creative compared to other sci-fi h-games, so good on that front. Dialogue and pace is perfectly fine thus far.

Thank you for the great feedback! An easy way to remove the ads is to get the patrons-only ad-free build!
I am half Ferengi, which means I can't disregard the 18th Rule of Acquisition.

 

[fanboi]

Thank you!
I plan on continuing to have optional femdom scenes in each chapter.
Jessica will have at least one scene next Chapter. IDK about the Ambassador yet. From the poll, it seems like the Klingons are gonna be in, you'll have a choice between maledom/femdom there too.
What kind of new femdom characters would you like to see? I was thinking it might make sense to design a species around it.

Well, for me I'd always want to see a hot BBW (dominant or not, although dominant is the best . You've got several wonderful mature characters who have a dominant streak and those characters are what I enjoy the most about the game. I noticed Admiral Zala's dialogue and wondered if we'd have a chance with her too in that regard, but honestly you've got a lot of good stories going on already and a lot of characters to pay attention to. Sometimes creators let that get a bit out of hand and then people are always asking for more with their favorites while they necessarily get ignored for a long time.

 

[TheHonet]

Just to make sure I understand, you mean existing girls banging male monsters? Or MC banging monstergirls?
I was going to have the interrogation end with Glob banging T'Nal, but I wasn't sure the audience was ready for that

Existing Girls getting banged by monsters

I mean if you would ask me I would also love to see some NTR stuff but I can see how that could scare away a lot of people on here

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Did you get a new writer? What's with this lame consent fetish dialogue?

 

[juan palote]

Just to make sure I understand, you mean existing girls banging male monsters? Or MC banging monstergirls?
I was going to have the interrogation end with Glob banging T'Nal, but I wasn't sure the audience was ready for that

Yeah, no, that would have been a big mistake. Do not introduce NTR or anything similar, you will lose a lot of audience

It would be a huge mistake to make existing girls being fucked by monsters, i for sure would abandon the game inmediately and i know many more would too

 

[punisher2099]

What would you like to see more of?

More scenes like with Choi and Smusher where it's just raw passionate sex with no domination from either side and a way to turn the tables and dominate the ambassador.

 

[fredfredburger]

Can you send me the error?
Thanks.

Sorry for the late reply. Here's what I get when applying both patches and the gallery mod.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 3, in script
init python:
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 3, in script
init python:
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 105, in <module>
galaxyMapObj = GalaxyMap()
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 54, in __init__
self.currentX = galaxyDeepSpace69.x
NameError: global name 'galaxyDeepSpace69' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 326, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "renpy/main.py", line 515, in main
renpy.game.context().run(node)
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 3, in script
init python:
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 3, in script
init python:
File "renpy/ast.py", line 922, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2218, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 105, in <module>
galaxyMapObj = GalaxyMap()
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 54, in __init__
self.currentX = galaxyDeepSpace69.x
NameError: global name 'galaxyDeepSpace69' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.5.1648
MilfOdyssey 0.0.5
Sat Jan 1 21:30:21 2022

 

[fredfredburger]

Sorry for the late reply. Here's what I get when applying both patches and the gallery mod.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 3, in script
init python:
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 3, in script
init python:
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 105, in <module>
galaxyMapObj = GalaxyMap()
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 54, in __init__
self.currentX = galaxyDeepSpace69.x
NameError: global name 'galaxyDeepSpace69' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 326, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "renpy/main.py", line 515, in main
renpy.game.context().run(node)
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 3, in script
init python:
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 3, in script
init python:
File "renpy/ast.py", line 922, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2218, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 105, in <module>
galaxyMapObj = GalaxyMap()
File "game/chap6.rpy", line 54, in __init__
self.currentX = galaxyDeepSpace69.x
NameError: global name 'galaxyDeepSpace69' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.5.1648
MilfOdyssey 0.0.5
Sat Jan 1 21:30:21 2022

Just tested something real quick. I get the same error when I only add the gallery mod, no errors when I only add the patches. My guess is the gallery mod needs to be updated or something.

 

[X-Centric]

Just tested something real quick. I get the same error when I only add the gallery mod, no errors when I only add the patches. My guess is the gallery mod needs to be updated or something.

Thanks for testing this. Play Chapter 6 without the Gallery Mod for now, I'm sure an update will come.

 

[JJDrakken]

Straight up didn't know what to expect from this. Been trying find some decent to good sci-fi stuff on here. Been failing hard, when I started this, I was like ok, meh.

But after Choi's mother bullshit, I was about to give up, but bam you hit your stride, I was like ok...ok...yeah...alright, I can get behind this. Thank you for work, I hope this continues for a long time.

I enjoy the mix of Star Trek/Stargate you got going on, with some Babylon 5 influences it seems. I wish you well with your work and look forward to more content.

 

[SecretSal]

Fun update, quite a bit of content as well. Also, that Kobayashi Maru scenario was more entertaining than the Abrams version.

 

[saddlface]

This is a really hot game. For DS lovers the humiliation in the scenes very sexy. I choose the femdom paths every time. Great job

 

[Jamezu]

Just to make sure I understand, you mean existing girls banging male monsters? Or MC banging monstergirls?
I was going to have the interrogation end with Glob banging T'Nal, but I wasn't sure the audience was ready for that

I know that I personally am I nobody, and my opinions don't matter in anyone but I still am gonna say it anyways. I will like more MC banging monster-girls.

 

[Humlebien]

Well this is right up my jam. Renders are good. Plot is..... well thought out (as porn games go). Humour fairly on point. Tags 9/10. Now just to have both Kateway and the Admiral in the patch for.... enjoyment, will be the last 1 point needed for 10/10. Earned yourself a Pat supporter. Keep it up.

 

[X-Centric]

FYI...