For a 97mb download, damn it has a lot of content already in there. Pretty solid start and certainly going on my "watch list"
- Mar 25, 2018
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I'm really liking the game so far, especially since we seem to be a competent MC. The only thing I would change (besides fixing the coding so that we can get that blowjob from the mom), would be to fix the text around the whole Alex situation to show that MC is playing along with her "blackmail", but already planning to turn the situation around on her.
He knows her blackmail material is bullshit, and he knows that the mom would take his word over Alex's about it, so Alex has NO power.
However, he is basically been giving her the rope that she needs to hang herself with, and I think that needs to be made more clear in the writing.
He has been manipulating the situation from the start, because now (for just a song and a dance) he's got Alex in a sexual position. All he has to do now is threaten to reveal the "blackmail" to the mom and Alex will fall in line to avoid punishment.
Easy peasy control over a willful sub for the small price of doing some laundry.
He knows her blackmail material is bullshit, and he knows that the mom would take his word over Alex's about it, so Alex has NO power.
However, he is basically been giving her the rope that she needs to hang herself with, and I think that needs to be made more clear in the writing.
He has been manipulating the situation from the start, because now (for just a song and a dance) he's got Alex in a sexual position. All he has to do now is threaten to reveal the "blackmail" to the mom and Alex will fall in line to avoid punishment.
Easy peasy control over a willful sub for the small price of doing some laundry.
- Nov 16, 2018
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- Apr 8, 2020
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Yeah that scene was a No for me, I'll follow the game to see if the author changes it though, if they do what you recommended I'll be game again.
- Mar 25, 2018
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Kinda sucks that you'd throw away the whole game because of one scene, but you do you, I guess.
- Apr 8, 2020
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I don't like not having a choice on how the character reacted.
Edit: Also, not just a scene, someone blackmailing you affects the whole dynamic of the game, and can be a way to take control away from the player, which I really don't like.
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- Mar 7, 2019
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- Oct 10, 2018
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Just finished playing this game for the first time and enjoyed it for the most part. I'd love to the option to dominate the girls and not be dominated. The girls look amazing and the story is pretty cool, with lots of possible women to choose from. I'm hoping to see a harem tag in the future added to this and NO NTR. One other thing needed is a incest patch to make this game totally awesome. Keep up the great work I will definitely watch this one.
- Aug 28, 2017
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Nice start for a new game.
there is a story....
and the pictures all look good.
However, dev needs to pay a bit more attention to his texts. There are some translation type errors, but far more type errors. poeple is an example.... but there are quite a few.
maybe dev needs a proofreader. to correct the script before publishing.
on the other hand, this game has a real chance if it stays this novel . a bit more depth in the conversations, and switching between scenes and I bet people will support this game.
So my advice to the dev is you might want to play your game at least once before publicizing it. Or let someone help you with reading through your script to correct eventual errors. You are on the right track.
there is a story....
and the pictures all look good.
However, dev needs to pay a bit more attention to his texts. There are some translation type errors, but far more type errors. poeple is an example.... but there are quite a few.
maybe dev needs a proofreader. to correct the script before publishing.
on the other hand, this game has a real chance if it stays this novel . a bit more depth in the conversations, and switching between scenes and I bet people will support this game.
So my advice to the dev is you might want to play your game at least once before publicizing it. Or let someone help you with reading through your script to correct eventual errors. You are on the right track.
- Jan 31, 2019
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I don't know if this is a bug or not, but I have done everybody's chores for the past 2 days and she is talking like I have not done any chores. Help?
I didn't get the Blowjob ...
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I didn't get the Blowjob ...
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- Aug 31, 2019
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Got this on my maybe list. Code needs fixed, no way to get mc_chores >=4. Will keep a watch on this though.
- Aug 31, 2019
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Agreed, but you shouldn't have to, a variable that affects an H scene should have been accounted for in testing. I can see one affecting only dialogue being missed but...
- Aug 31, 2019
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I didn't look at much but the images and code TBH. The overview seemed interesting to me, but I would have to read more to be sure.
- Aug 22, 2018
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I just got dropkicked by cliche.
I was going to make a comment about how i've seen all this before but I haven't.
This is new and that excites me.
It's usually 5 years.
We're in uncharted territory boys and girls, anything could happen.
