- Thread starter Zemax
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- Mar 13, 2019
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Writing is so bad in this game. The ex-wife is a man I guess... she is often referred to as "he, him", as is the case with the daughter.
- Jun 23, 2017
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So let me get this straight : The step father already took the daughter virginity ? (and it was also rape ?).
Well ain't that a turn off to start with...
Well ain't that a turn off to start with...
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Thanks for this, now I can uninstall this shitty game before I waste my time with it.
I have seen a lot, but never have I ever seen English like this.
This one desperately needs some translation aid.
This one desperately needs some translation aid.
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Yeah, her "step father" raped her when she was drunk.
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With that title using Patron, let's see how long it takes to be called "A Landlord and Tenant".
EDIT: oh well reading some posts I guess the title is the least important thing here.
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Anyways, if dev lurk f95 good luck.
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Assuming it's not abandoned before then.
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Thank you for sharing. I can just skip it.Yeah, her "step father" raped her when she was drunk.
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Incest and Romance tags instant dl
Read the warning from the boyz
Read the warning from the boyz
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If i was the Dev, i would do more about the translation issue before adding more to this VN.
In English, he and him are male pronouns. She and her are the equivalent female pronouns. It's disconcerting to hear a female character referred to as 'he.' You might have your English consultant help you with that.
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And what is wrong it ? If you don't like something about the game you can comment about it . The game is BAD currently shit grammar, back story is taken from avlon . Graphics are below par .you put your work on public platform it is bound get reaction positive and negative.
Complaining about other people complaining is just lame . So you should follow your own advise in ignore those comments.its so SIMPLE . You calling other people's ingonorance, that is just laughable.
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This genre is really cursed, can't have a chill father daughter game, it's always she was raped, or she will be shared with a BBC etc.
Rape is a sexual content tag. There's no scene of it so the tag doesn't apply, it's just a part of her backstory. It's most likely the reason that she ran away from home and is with the MC now but JFC I'm not sure why the dev thought it was necessary, especially since you can actually avoid that piece of dialogue.
MC's also a cowardly piece of shit for sending her home after that. I have no idea how the dev thought any of this would be okay with what would be his core audience. All I can think is that he's only read a bunch of shitty doujins and hasn't played any decent incest AVNs and is developing blind.