- Nov 18, 2016
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Nothing says romance like the LI being raped....
Bruh, dev must have just played Avalon.
Bruh, dev must have just played Avalon.
- Thread starter Zemax
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- Nov 9, 2017
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if you are old enough then you should understand that when different opinions come into play there is bound to be some heated conversation. how many times have you verbally spared over sports teams with your bestie over a pint of beer? doesnt mean you hate them. some times it even devolves to personal "attacks" but all participants know, and understand that its all in the context of verbal sparing. most of us dont take it to heart. ( if you were observing some of the deep discussions I had with friends that I know for 30+ years you would think that we are cloe to killing eachother
)you shouldnt delete your opinions. its just that, opinions. everybody has a world view based on their own experiences. its a fact of life. just saying.
people have given their lives so that both you and me, are free to say our thing.
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Damn your poor daughter was raped and your first reaction is to dump her and distance yourself from her instead of trying to comfort her and having lovey dovey sex with her later. Saying that you are going to uninstall this shitty game and not wasting time with it basically says exactly that.
- Jun 23, 2017
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It's a fictional character, nothing is biding anyone to a bunch of pixels. If it's not their preference, they got every rights not to engage in it.
needs some early game text editing. I'm seeing LOTS of duplicate lines of text, in a single dialogue box; and a LOT of misgendered pronouns, using he when she is clearly right and vice-versa
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- Jan 3, 2020
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I also had the feeling that such was the case, but I got triggered by the worst acronym in porn.
The misgendering is almost 100% (early on at least). It's really throwing me off although I can usually overlook quite bad English. Definitely needs some editing.
yeah,m the misgendering is tough to just skip by. It REALLY breaks the idea of any immersion or character connection. That, and the repeated text in the dialogue box...makes reading it difficult
- Aug 13, 2020
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Not a bad start for this VN.
What should be fixed is though the translation to English, it weird to indicate she as he, or her as him, also some sentences are repeated after eachother, like say "i'm saving up for an air conditioner. saving up for an air conditioner", there several of these kind duplications.
For the renders, pictures, they could use a bit lighter version, they pretty dark and gloomy, ofcourse it a sad story but that doesn't mean it has to be all dark, it feels like there is no light at all in their vicinity.
About the context story, I like the sadness and how bad some women can be by cheating on their husband and then ruin their lives till they totaly broke and wreck, I know some guys deserve it if they scumbags and drunks, but not every guy does. In this story it all about a bad mom who don't care about others their feelings but her own and love to make everybody miserable. The rape part should though need a fresh up, her real dad sound to casual after hearing her tell all that, he still want to send her home, if that was my daughter and I heard that, first thing I would do is go to Hospital and the Police with her and file in a rape case against that man and my ex wife.
If you fix the bad translation and use a bit lighter pictures this could become a real great VN, it could be competing with some other VN in the same theme I know.
What should be fixed is though the translation to English, it weird to indicate she as he, or her as him, also some sentences are repeated after eachother, like say "i'm saving up for an air conditioner. saving up for an air conditioner", there several of these kind duplications.
For the renders, pictures, they could use a bit lighter version, they pretty dark and gloomy, ofcourse it a sad story but that doesn't mean it has to be all dark, it feels like there is no light at all in their vicinity.
About the context story, I like the sadness and how bad some women can be by cheating on their husband and then ruin their lives till they totaly broke and wreck, I know some guys deserve it if they scumbags and drunks, but not every guy does. In this story it all about a bad mom who don't care about others their feelings but her own and love to make everybody miserable. The rape part should though need a fresh up, her real dad sound to casual after hearing her tell all that, he still want to send her home, if that was my daughter and I heard that, first thing I would do is go to Hospital and the Police with her and file in a rape case against that man and my ex wife.
If you fix the bad translation and use a bit lighter pictures this could become a real great VN, it could be competing with some other VN in the same theme I know.
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- Sep 16, 2020
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- Nov 22, 2017
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are you sure it is english?The english in this VN sure is interesting
- Jan 28, 2022
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Interesting story but man that Engrish is hard on the eyes. At least have some one proof read the script before releasing it.
Will see if this improves cause as it stands currently, it needs a lot of work.
Will see if this improves cause as it stands currently, it needs a lot of work.
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This for me, I come to games for escapism, I want wholesome romances without the turbulations that I experience IRL. Unless I want to play a story specifically for some very uncommon turbulations that I can't experience IRL. But rape is not an uncommon turbulation, there is enough of that IRL.
