VN Ren'Py A Father's Sins [Ch. 35+36] [Pixieblink]

[c3p0]

You've just described over half the movies I've watched!

You would think that with a $150 Million budget
they could have chipped in a little extra for a writer with some imagination.

Possibly the jobs pays well enough with the standard movie rule book already, so why take the risk and make something new? Also if the studios know that they can make good earnings with the standard movie rule book, why take a risk and go in uncharted territories?

 

[moskyx]

Hmm.... Honestly I'm forgetting my own commandment, "though shalt not forget only a short time has passed in game". You've been writing, and we've been playing for months so it seems like a lack of progress with the girls. In game, MC is doing just fine. None of the girls are sexually aggressive. Also, nicely done with the "healer" who you REALLY don't want to piss off!!!!

She definitely showed some backbone in this update

 

[faradhii]

Possibly the jobs pays well enough with the standard movie rule book already, so why take the risk and make something new? Also if the studios know that they can make good earnings with the standard movie rule book, why take a risk and go in uncharted territories?

Yep, for a while Marvel superhero movies were a license to print money!

 

[Hordragg]

My personal favorite "NOT-#3":
Gert Frobe (sp?) vs. James Bond

Bond: "What do you want me to do?"
Frobe: "I want you to die, Mr. Bond."

Ofc then the rest unashamedly follows the list cited above but well, that was the 60s…

It's Fröbe (German umlaut) and I'm terribly sorry for the below but knowing the exact quote by heart I simply can not help myself:
'You expect me to talk?'
'No, Mr. Bond, I expect you to die!'

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Automatic rifles...pff that's for kids!

Remember those mini nuke launchers in the Fall Out games?
Now those with a full automatic mode!! That would be cool.

What they really need though is the Holy Hand Grenade of Antioch!

Didn't know Michael Bay was writing the new chapters.

 

[cxx]

Yep, for a while Marvel superhero movies were a license to print money!

well so are dc's cartoons.

 

[Pixieblink]

Good, so it isn't just me.

I love series like Game of Thrones.
Shit happens, and you NEVER know what's coming next.
Good stuff, LOTS of bad stuff, some REALLY fucked up stuff...
and in the end it all makes sense. And the good guys win and save the day.

So... yes Jennifer died. Sadie's been beaten senseless and almost died. Celine took an epic ass beating. Maddy DID die, but she got better. Sort of.

Shit is going to happen.
And yes, I promise there will be some nudity and fap material in Chapter 13.

 

[cxx]

well there's been nudity already.

 

[junior366]

First of all, I enjoy the writing, the premise is interesting and there's enough tension to keep me coming back! My one question.... Is MC EVER going to get laid??? You have 3 (possibly 4) (IMO) cuties who need loving!!! (the 2 young nuns and the virgin, plus the barrista). Make with sexy time already

Good, so it isn't just me.

I love series like Game of Thrones.
Shit happens, and you NEVER know what's coming next.
Good stuff, LOTS of bad stuff, some REALLY fucked up stuff...
and in the end it all makes sense. And the good guys win and save the day.

So... yes Jennifer died. Sadie's been beaten senseless and almost died. Celine took an epic ass beating. Maddy DID die, but she got better. Sort of.

Shit is going to happen.
And yes, I promise there will be some nudity and fap material in Chapter 13.

Keep rollin' the way you roll, I'm here for the RIDE!!!

 

[themagiman]

Is there any mind control in this?

 

[Pixieblink]

Is there any mind control in this?

No. Unless you count the Cardinal and Sister Bernadette manipulating events (and our heroes) into doing their bidding.

But no. No magical "Hocus-pocus, now you want to ride my dick-us" spells, or anything remotely like that.

 

[Baalzie]

My personal favorite "NOT-#3":
Gert Frobe (sp?) vs. James Bond

Bond: "What do you want me to do?"
Frobe: "I want you to die, Mr. Bond."

Ofc then the rest unashamedly follows the list cited above but well, that was the 60s…

Well, the true quote would be:

Bond: "I assume you expect me to talk?"
Frobe:"No Mr. Bond, I expect you to die!"

But I guess the spirit of the dialogue remains largely the same, if a bit simplified, in your version...

 

[merlindec]

mmm, i think, in a erotic movie, you could see more action than in this VN, better improve this or dont waste you time, and stop killing girls before at least see them naked

 

[c3p0]

mmm, i think, in a erotic movie, you could see more action than in this VN, better improve this or dont waste you time, and stop killing girls before at least see them naked

Care to explain? I simply don't understand what you are trying to say.

 

[Hordragg]

mmm, i think, in a erotic movie, you could see more action than in this VN, better improve this or dont waste you time, and stop killing girls before at least see them naked

How about they don't 'improve' nothing and instead continue delivering a compelling story full of mystery, horror, and intrigue? That being said, they do realize that the action is mostly gun-focused in the early chapters and did ask for opinions on where and when precisely they could sprinkle in more lewds. So, any ideas? As for the last part: first, they already admitted to being a fan of GoT the series (thankfully not the books though, elsewise this would turn into a super-slow-mo of The Phantom Menace with the odd sex scene thrown in… ) and second: Aspectum. That is all.

 

[Pixieblink]

mmm, i think, in a erotic movie, you could see more action than in this VN, better improve this or dont waste you time, and stop killing girls before at least see them naked

Well... yeah.

I did say right from the start this was going to be a horror VN, not a drop your pants and start fapping on scene 1 kind of game.

From the DEV NOTES in the OP.

With a real story and choices that influence game play. There will be nudity and sex, when the story calls for it. Unlike my other games this one is NOT a gratuitous fap'per, but rather a serious, story driven 18+ game.

 

[Pixieblink]

Well... yeah.

I did say right from the start this was going to be a horror VN, not a drop your pants and start fapping on scene 1 kind of game.

From the DEV NOTES in the OP.

If it isn't your kind of game, I get it.

 

[preskerd]

Pixieblink Have sex scenes come yet? You promised that now that you are done with entrance of the story, sex scenes will start to come at next update. You said this at update 0.9. We are at update 0.12... I just really want to try to play the game to see how it's but since I love your previous work but if there is no sex it's pointless for me. I like story based porn vn's but porn is also important for me as well. Maybe you should get a 'no sexual content' tag if the game still doesn't have a sexual scenes yet even to so much time in development. In that way people stop asking for sex scenes since there it seems like there won't be any at this point

 

[Catherine♡]

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[-CookieMonster666-]

mmm, i think, in a erotic movie, you could see more action than in this VN, better improve this or dont waste you time, and stop killing girls before at least see them naked

Number one, this isn't an erotic movie or game. This is a VN with some erotica in it; there's a big difference. I assume you're referring to Jennifer, but that's already been discussed a fair bit in this thread. You can look at the posts w/in the past week to see the conversation. It is a harsh reality of the situation in this VN and won't be changed. Some people will die, and you don't always get to see naughty bits before (or even after) they are killed. It's something added to a fictional story called realism.

Pixieblink Have sex scenes come yet? You promised that now that you are done with entrance of the story, sex scenes will start to come at next update. You said this at update 0.9. We are at update 0.12... I just really want to try to play the game to see how it's but since I love your previous work but if there is no sex it's pointless for me. I like story based porn vn's but porn is also important for me as well. Maybe you should get a 'no sexual content' tag if the game still doesn't have a sexual scenes yet even to so much time in development. In that way people stop asking for sex scenes since there it seems like there won't be any at this point

Well, except that there's a handjob already (and the tag for it), so no sexual content doesn't apply. What's more, there have already been multiple posts about Pixie's intent to add more in to what's already come. If you have suggestions for that where it won't be obviously forced and disrupt the flow of the story, please post them here.