VN Ren'Py A Father's Sins [Ch. 35+36] [Pixieblink]

[Pixieblink]

From what I understood from the plot the Mc, Tilly, Karine and Francine weren't taking the zombies/wendigos/demons(?) threat seriously at all, I mean they were literally shopping as if nothing was happening
What happened to Jennifer while unfortunate was necessary...it was a wake up call for them, now they are alert and ready for anything and most important are together in the basement , which is going to be the prelude for the relationship progression between the characters.

You nailed it.

Uh... spoiler alert for those who haven't played the game

 

[c3p0]

You nailed it.

Uh... spoiler alert for those who haven't played the game

And I was sure that this was a Christian game for children.
I mean, what are you doing to the children.

 

[CrazyRabbit]

And was sure that this was a Christian game for children.
I mean, what are you doing to the children.

 

[Pixieblink]

Pixieblink Have sex scenes come yet? You promised that now that you are done with entrance of the story, sex scenes will start to come at next update. You said this at update 0.9. We are at update 0.12... I just really want to try

Yeah, I know. I had this plan for the game. And then I thought I would slip in some nudity and a couple of fap scenes just for the hell of it... but then for the life if me couldn't think of a way to integrate it into the game in the last 3 months.

Hey, if anyone has any brilliant ideas I'm all ears.

Honestly they were supposed to go down to the bunker (where they will be living together) in chapter 10. Maybe 11 at the latest. And here we are at 12 and they're still in the loft.

Right now I'm working on chapter 13, which WILL have a sex scene in it (I can say that for sure as I'm working on it right now). I got a little carried away with the story, but fear not. It's coming in 13.

 

[Piat]

Aftfer 12 chapters... missing asexual, castrati or eunuch tag??

 

[cxx]

Aftfer 12 chapters... missing asexual, castrati or eunuch tag??

not missing.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Aftfer 12 chapters... missing asexual, castrati or eunuch tag??

Um . . . huh? Why on earth would any of those be in this game? I get the Catholic connection, but um, no.

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

The MC goes to his study... rests his weary head on his arms.. and after a restful sleep wakes up to see the Joob-Joob sitting on the desk before him...

Game on ladies... game on.

Loved the action scenes at the elevator! Great work as always Pixie.. great work.

 

[faradhii]

Isn't MC Catholic? If so, then he is DEFINITELY thinking of the children!!!!

 

[merlindec]

Well... yeah.

I did say right from the start this was going to be a horror VN, not a drop your pants and start fapping on scene 1 kind of game.

From the DEV NOTES in the OP.

The history is good, i like it , that is why i write at the thread, maybe you have to set an objective, around 30 min of gameplay, you have to make something special, unless you make a some kind of minigame with an objetive like get money to access to stuff, if you just add text and text it becomes boring, the reader(or at least me) is w8 for something, and never comes, i was reading all the history, how much time? at least around 2 or 3 hours, and just i see 1 hand job, two woman kiss, and 4? or 5? naked girls? and one of the naked girl die?( i was w8 for a blowjob when she knee) , i dont know, maybe i am wrong but i think you must improve all the history with more action i was thinking about the corruption of the main character, im not a writer just i dont know, maybe are you trying to do this, a simply horror novel, and i was wrong w8 for something will never comes.

the best of luck and sorry to bother with my opinion

 

[moskyx]

The history is good, i like it , that is why i write at the thread, maybe you have to set an objective, around 30 min of gameplay, you have to make something special, unless you make a some kind of minigame with an objetive like get money to access to stuff, if you just add text and text it becomes boring, the reader(or at least me) is w8 for something, and never comes, i was reading all the history, how much time? at least around 2 or 3 hours, and just i see 1 hand job, two woman kiss, and 4? or 5? naked girls? and one of the naked girl die?( i was w8 for a blowjob when she knee) , i dont know, maybe i am wrong but i think you must improve all the history with more action i was thinking about the corruption of the main character, im not a writer just i dont know, maybe are you trying to do this, a simply horror novel, and i was wrong w8 for something will never comes.

the best of luck and sorry to bother with my opinion

Well, it's obvious the game just doesn't meet your expectations. This doesn't mean it's doing anything wrong, it only means it's not for you because you want more sex in your games. Other people are just fine with the way this story is been developed.

 

[boobsrcool]

The history is good, i like it , that is why i write at the thread, maybe you have to set an objective, around 30 min of gameplay, you have to make something special, unless you make a some kind of minigame with an objetive like get money to access to stuff, if you just add text and text it becomes boring, the reader(or at least me) is w8 for something, and never comes, i was reading all the history, how much time? at least around 2 or 3 hours, and just i see 1 hand job, two woman kiss, and 4? or 5? naked girls? and one of the naked girl die?( i was w8 for a blowjob when she knee) , i dont know, maybe i am wrong but i think you must improve all the history with more action i was thinking about the corruption of the main character, im not a writer just i dont know, maybe are you trying to do this, a simply horror novel, and i was wrong w8 for something will never comes.

the best of luck and sorry to bother with my opinion

give this a read and see if you can understand what you were trying to say

 

[Pixieblink]

The history is good, i like it , that is why i write at the thread, maybe you have to set an objective, around 30 min of gameplay, you have to make something special, unless you make a some kind of minigame with an objetive like get money to access to stuff, if you just add text and text it becomes boring, the reader(or at least me) is w8 for something, and never comes, i was reading all the history, how much time? at least around 2 or 3 hours, and just i see 1 hand job, two woman kiss, and 4? or 5? naked girls? and one of the naked girl die?( i was w8 for a blowjob when she knee) , i dont know, maybe i am wrong but i think you must improve all the history with more action i was thinking about the corruption of the main character, im not a writer just i dont know, maybe are you trying to do this, a simply horror novel, and i was wrong w8 for something will never comes.

the best of luck and sorry to bother with my opinion

You're not bothering me with your opinion. I actually appreciate you taking the time to to post some feedback.
Yes, the game could use more fap. I understand that not all players are looking for a serious game.
No, I don't know how to slide some in the scenes that have already played out, with out ruining the story.

This game isn't like THE PROFESSOR or THE JOOB-JOOB where the story is that the MC fucks everybody. From the very beginning I set out to make a serious game.

You mentioned that

the naked girl died?( i was w8 for a blowjob when she kneeled)

Uh, great idea. I'm all for it. Except... it being a serious game and all... how can I explain that this woman suddenly wants to give the priest some head?

Especially knowing that in the very next scene she's a good person - who almost abandoned her baby - but sister B showed up and got her to change her mind - to make sure that 20 years later she would be murdered in a horrible way - thus fueling her daughter's unquenchable need for revenge...

It would have been kind of weird, don't you think?

 

[ShamanLab]

damn... weird unisex characters again

 

[cxx]

damn... weird unisex characters again

all femmes are femmes although.

 

[ElNakauo]

I'm playing it in Joiplay but it won't let me save my progress in the game, any solution

 

[cxx]

I'm playing it in Joiplay but it won't let me save my progress in the game, any solution

there's been reports on other games about that, either update joiplay or play native android.

 

[botc76]

Is it still a thing that first we get a censored version here, with a regular version a few days in?

If so, has that already dropped?

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Is it still a thing that first we get a censored version here, with a regular version a few days in?

If so, has that already dropped?

Yes, that's so, but there are exceptions. When a chapter releases with sexual content, there's a censored version here and an uncensored version later that you have to wait for. If a chapter releases without new sexual content, you get the full version (past censored versions were updated to full already).

 

[cxx]

even with censored players see well enuf those titties.