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- Sep 12, 2017
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I know this is a dumb reason to like the game but I like it cause of the god awful dialogue lmao
I don't mean to make fun of you, game dev, but the whole game just feels like a strange sitcom with all the weird valley girl speak and ridiculously typed dialogue
I realise English is not your primary language but I find it funny
I don't mean to make fun of you, game dev, but the whole game just feels like a strange sitcom with all the weird valley girl speak and ridiculously typed dialogue
I realise English is not your primary language but I find it funny
So after you do the Dick Bats with the other sister and the Accidental slip onto your dick with the other. Is that all?
That’s very helpful. Thanks. Love the game!! You might want to post this in a Dev note on main page.
- Jan 29, 2020
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Great. It is good to see an enthusiastic developer with skills and good idea.
About the english spelling/errors, I personally find non-perfect english (the so-called engrish) a "feature" in games that have a comedic tone. It gives it a charm. So, I really do not mind and if I could give you my two cents, I would not give it an utmost priority right now.
I am not a specialist in RPG MAKER MV, although I do have a experience. Furthermore, I know my ways in programming in general, so I would be glad to help without any obligations, either with some small part of the development or as a beta tester.
Some ideas:
-You probably noticed that people here would rather have a Ren'py game than a RPG maker one, for a myriad of reasons. Ren'py gives the player more freedom in how to control the flow, with rollbacks, quick text skips, and so on. In your case, you choose to put turn-based combat in your game, something which is also not very popular around here, so RPG MAKER is a better choice. Personally, I do not mind either (with or without combat), but if you want to have, maybe it is a good idea to invest some time into making the combat fun and engaging other than a chore, specially if it will be around the entire game. I could help you with that. Not necessarily you have to integrate sex and porn into this feature, but it would be nice to improve it nevertheless.
-UI (user interface) also needs an overhaul. You use standard RPGMV UI right now, but it would be great to customize it. Also, this UI should have a hint system and something that allows us to track the girls' statistics.
-I agree with some here that, as it is right now, the Goblin earns control of the girls too fast. As a wise man once said, part of the fun is not in the destination, but in the travel itself.
-Customizing the sprites a little bit so the girls look closer to their 3D model is also a nice touch.
So I've tried your update out for a bit and I must say that I like the way it's going.
As for my feedback, there isn't much to add aside from what others have already told you.
Considering the spelling part, I do recommend you check that a bit more before you put it in the game.
As a suggestion, it might be an idea to simply put the text in your own native language and then translate it through Deepl.
That particular translator rarely makes mistakes and also ensures the sentences remain coherent.
Of course, it does depend on whether Deepl works with your native language, and I'm not even sure if it would fit in your development process. However, it might be worth trying as it could easily prevent little mistakes like missing letters or incorrect spelling (which are most of the mistakes I see in your dialogue). It's just a suggestion, do with it as you wish. Keep up the good work and best of luck!
As for my feedback, there isn't much to add aside from what others have already told you.
Considering the spelling part, I do recommend you check that a bit more before you put it in the game.
As a suggestion, it might be an idea to simply put the text in your own native language and then translate it through Deepl.
That particular translator rarely makes mistakes and also ensures the sentences remain coherent.
Of course, it does depend on whether Deepl works with your native language, and I'm not even sure if it would fit in your development process. However, it might be worth trying as it could easily prevent little mistakes like missing letters or incorrect spelling (which are most of the mistakes I see in your dialogue). It's just a suggestion, do with it as you wish. Keep up the good work and best of luck!
- Nov 10, 2017
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- Nov 5, 2017
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looks u already asked what i want to know how to loose chicken in traing the young daughter after she got goblin cock in her mouth in yoga for now ages no chat 2 pm she out side i think there bug she will never talk to me again only talks inside before 2 pm
update - There is also no way to get rid of the chicken, this will be adjusted in the futere versions
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- Nov 5, 2017
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you cant yet its a place holder for now also pupsi...... you might want to add "[Not implemented yet]" to the girls we can not Train yet so you do not keep getting question like this one and keep up the awesome work! although if i wait a month for new update i think i will drive myself crazy from all this waiting lol
Kudos to the reply! It was driving me crazy looking for anything to move the chicken. By chance: do you know how far the main story goes? I've gotten as far as feeding everyone "Milk" lol
- Nov 21, 2017
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Surprising diamond in the rough here. Was very much pleased with the appearance of such a title.
Found it fairly intuitive, not too much of running around not knowing what to do. I do agree with the comments that a quest log is necessary as of right now you cannot tell when you've reached the end of some events. I kept on adding supplements to the breakfast for days on end until I realized I was getting nothing for it. Same with the night events, you can repeat them but they serve no purpose as of yet.
A suggestion I would make is we need more mother/daughter corruption options in the town. Give us a proper "Goblin Walker" scenario, let us enslave the whole town to our mercy!
Also some dinner events would be nice. Since we're already improving their diet at breakfast it is only natural that they'll require more eventually. By the way there doesn't seem to be an updated slide for when you've impregnated Linda and she's milking you in the morning. She still shows up as not pregnant.
Looking forward to more updates, I'll be keeping this thread under watch!
Found it fairly intuitive, not too much of running around not knowing what to do. I do agree with the comments that a quest log is necessary as of right now you cannot tell when you've reached the end of some events. I kept on adding supplements to the breakfast for days on end until I realized I was getting nothing for it. Same with the night events, you can repeat them but they serve no purpose as of yet.
A suggestion I would make is we need more mother/daughter corruption options in the town. Give us a proper "Goblin Walker" scenario, let us enslave the whole town to our mercy!
Also some dinner events would be nice. Since we're already improving their diet at breakfast it is only natural that they'll require more eventually. By the way there doesn't seem to be an updated slide for when you've impregnated Linda and she's milking you in the morning. She still shows up as not pregnant.
Looking forward to more updates, I'll be keeping this thread under watch!
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