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Nice start. I like the setting and characters. For a med-fan story, the dialogues sometimes feel a tad too "modern" in the way some of the characters speak. ("awesome!") Oh, also, what's with all the inverted apostrophes?
Yeah, I don't think awesome was a word back then.Nice start. I like the setting and characters. For a med-fan story, the dialogues sometimes feel a tad too "modern" in the way some of the characters speak. ("awesome!") Oh, also, what's with all the inverted apostrophes?
It's still going to be romance based and probably not going to be slow paced and drawn out.It's even easier to do when the dev reuses his assets from his only other game.
If this is just a rehash of Triangle, I'm out. It was much too fast and sappy for me.
I'll wait a couple of updates before I'll try it to see where it goes.
I know some people like slow builds but lets be honest, it never takes that long for people to fuck.I'm a huge fan of romance, but the pace was way too fast in that one.
Condensed version:
I love you. I love you, too. /update/ Poor Jenny... /update/ let's fuck her. /update/ I love you, and you. /update/ Who get's Jenny tonight?
Not quite that bad, but close enough.
Well:I know some people like slow builds but lets be honest, it never takes that long for people to fuck.
They aren't related so no walls to bring down.
About to say the same - and thats not a bad thing at all.also..Alice is the new Jenny
Avaron1974 - Your comments make me laugh; most of the time they are not necessary meant to be funny - but they make me chuckle non-the-less.Yeah, I don't think awesome was a word back then.