You keep using the word "realistic" but I dont think you really know what it means, nothing about the whole Monica situation is realistic at all, it is a convoluted mess that the only thing it accomplishes is to make the players dislike the MC, Monica, and the game as a whole, since this situation is a big part of it.Thank you for taking the time to comment on that.
I think my game is realistic in the sense that the characters are intelligent; Monica would not leave her husband to be the protagonist's secondary love interest. To me, that is intelligent.
Not to mention, you admitted you added this clown show of a situation because it would be 'too boring' to have the actual realistic option, which is a woman leaving her husband if she is unhappy and wants to jump on someone else's dick.:
Theres nothing fun about being at the mercy of a cuck, to have the woman the MC is interested in telling him how she cares more about her husband and thats the only reason she is with MC is because the cuck allows it. Not to mention she will still be fucking her husband, to add salt to injury.I would have had Monica simply leave her husband, but it seemed a little simple and boring to me; I thought it was more exciting and hot for MC to sleep with a married friend and have her husband give his approval.
This only makes the Mc look awfully pathetic and retarded for going along with it, he is not some broke fat loser with low selfsteem who cant get laid, she isnt his only option, so why would he accept those terms?
And Monica accepting this situation is also not realistic. She says she is unhappy with her marriage, already cheated on her husband with MC even before this whole weird ass arrangementt ....but still, her husband is the first choice? over a millionarie MC who she likes and who she calls the "love of her life" ??
Actually she tells the MC how she "loves" her husband just seconds after getting buttfucked by him. You realize how stupid that is yeah? It really paints her character in a really bad light, even more, and thats sucks for a character that is such a big part of your game.
Her bullshitting about loving the guy doesn’t make her feel realistic, just make her seem psychotic and bipolar. She has cheated on the guy repeatedly, talked shit about him making her unhappy, but she will let him decide how she spends the rest of her life? How is that realistic?
People assume she is a MAIN love interest because she is a big part of what is in the game, if she is supposed to be a whore that the Mc just fucks ocasionally then ... BROTHER,check the OP, whos face is that?Besides, at no point did I make it clear in the story that the protagonist and Monica are dating.
As the protagonist and another character are.
Many people believe that; even Monica is not included in the MC's potential harem.
I wrote a scene where the two characters talk about it.
Perhaps because Monica is the most developed character so far, it seems like they are dating, or perhaps because they treat each other very affectionately, it seems that way, but no, they are not.
I don't want to give any spoilers, but in the future, it will become clear what the protagonist will really do with Monica, but that will be several chapters later.
That's the problem; as I said before, my mistake was thinking that people would play and wait to find out what happens in the next chapter, but no, they already think the story is about NTR.
But hey, it's my fault for creating a very long story that I can't explain and make everything clear in each chapter.
As I also said before, I should create more of a season than an episode, so that nothing is left unexplained or leads to misinterpretation.
Not only that but Monica says she loved the MC, and the MC says he loves her as well? Did you write that or did ChatGPT did? And there a bunch of other dialogs that would make people believe she is a LI and part of the harem later on, they have a history, they love each each other, etc.
If you wanted to build up her story more slowly so people had curiosity to find out more about what happens with Monica then you shouldnt have had them fuck in the first place, or wasted so much time with her story.
By having her give priority to her husband after she already fucked the MC, and letting us know she keeps fucking her husband in a sort of "swinging" type situation, you've already killed any kind of interest a player would have with her, it doesnt matter what you reveal later because she is dead as a LI already.
Her saying it is ok for her to fuck both the MC and her husband and trying to justify it saying the MC will fuck other women is also stupid. Because she is basically stating the reasons why the MC doesnt need to agree to her bulshit cuck/swinging deal, he can just go fuck someone else. Why would he want the cum filled leftovers of some cuck? does he enjoy having anoither man's cum in his women? Mc says he doesnt, hell he even seems to have a virgin fetish, so him accepting that deal is UNREALISTIC, stupid, moronic, etc. With all that virgin talk, the realistic option would be to laugh in her face and tell her to go be miserable for the rest of her life with the husband she 'loves so much,' but still cheats on for some reason.
What even is "love" for this woman?
Does any of this nonsense make her "intelligent" or "realistic" as you claim? which part, please explain, because all I get from her actions is that she is very selfish lunatic, psychotic and sadistic, she knows the dude is pathetic so he will accept, and she will keep him around for convenience, while allowing him to fuck her, even when she says she has never orgasmed with him, almost like a prostitute. So when she says she "loves" the MC I cant take it seriously either, seeing what she does to the other dude she, supposedly, also loves.
To reduce the face of your game to that is not a good idea for a harem game, anyone could tell you that.
The husband does nothing but damage to your game, there is no reason for him to exist at all, well I guess there is, to make Monica one of the worse LI I've seen in these type of games, hell, even some NTR heroines have a better moral compass than her, at least they have the decency to leave their man instead of forcing him into cuckoldry while delusionally claiming to love him.
I stopped playing after that conversation so I dont know what else happens, and I dont care to know, thats all this situation accomplishes. It is not fun, or realistic or interesting or well written. It just doesnt make any sense.
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