VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Long Summer [v0.04] [Ardanos]

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lordfridge9

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I think that the problem that he is describing has to do more with the fact that something like 95% percent of female protagonist games are ones where they simply get fucked by everything and everyone, sometimes with no story or one that ends up being repeated from other games (most cases in corruption). When its the same thing you getting over and over, it's not hard to dislike or be against such games or even think that every fempro is always gonna be like that. Just look at furry games here. Whenever a new one gets added or there's an update, you can almost subcontiously know that it has the Gay tag, as that it almost always present with a furry game. People end up memeing on furry games that don't have it, thinking its some kind of God given gift lol
 
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88Michele88

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For this one I try it one only becous I play as Female MC so but for male I pass for another one.
 

HandofVecna

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Good start. Keep going. It's short right now. Art is middling but hopefully improves over time as Dev gets more practice.

I am looking forward to:
Sex with friends Dad
Sex with my Dad
Sex with Professor and other professors some who are fat
Sex with other old dudes who harass me and take advantage of their positions of power.
Sex with Dad's G/F, our BFF and BFF's Mom.

For me it would fall flat if it's just sex with fellow students around my age.

It will be a disaster if we get the porn trope of the hood rat black guys gang bang foreshadowed. Please come up with something more original.

Overall good start and really do encourage the Dev to stick to it!
 

Creeping Death

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Tags looking good, pretty ginger with a hot realistic body (all female chars without ridiculous exaggerations), good looking renders! I mean you see there has been put some work into! (y) Constant regular updates and this could become a top game. Following you now :) I already like it more than Lust Campus ...

I wish you good luck and me good entertainment (incest tag, many possibilites going maybe in a GGGB direction ... *hoping*).

Is there one of our graphical talented forum members in this thread to create a nice signature?! :)
 
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Nutluck

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Just posting to remind myself to come back and check out the game when it has a few more updates with a bit of content to explore.
 

Frenchtopus

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Just finished the playable content and it's really nice ! I'm glad the female protagonist is not a saint who decided to be a slut overnight. I like the slow building, but please do not make it slow like A Wife and Mother either lol

MC has a good personality and a very good but realistic look, I like it.

As for what I would like to see personally, can't wait for the MC to discover her lesbian side while dealing with her daddy issues. In fact I hope the game will allow me to do that, the others dudes aren't that interesting to me for now (it's totally subjective of course, they're just not what I'm looking for in this game in particular but it could totally change with time).

Anyway, very good job. I will definitely follow the progress of this game :)
 
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Arisushi

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A great start to what I hope will be a long-running story.

Emily is definitely one of the prettiest characters I've seen in recent times. Also, really liked the environment designs and the way those locations were showcased. They made Brightwood feel very 'lived in'.

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My only critique for this would be - the writing could use some more polishing.

I know it is easier said than done, (especially if modelling is the developer's main thing and not writing) but slow burns like this tend to shine best when the dialog and the narration are strong. And I really think this game can reach much greater heights with a tighter script.

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Really looking forward to the future updates.
 

caxhub

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Download android v0.02 APK
P/s: Request Link Android Game at my
 

TheBigWater

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Story is cool. Sadly its still game for 15-20 minutes. But its cool. I like our female protagonist already. I bet her future is awesome too
 
4.40 star(s) 11 Votes