Nice story so far, but ouch getting kicked out of it halfway through a day was a bit rough. If you wouldn't mind a bit of advice, end an update at the end of a day when she goes to bed, hopefully not alone! It is nice when an update ends at a logical place. I know it is a visual Novel, but a few well chosen words are always better than a wall of text. It is a bit like packing a ruck sack for a long journey, pack it, then take everything out and remove half, then repack it. Wait a bit and remove all the stuff and then half it again, what you end up in your rucksack is what you really need to carry with you