@TheDefany Those two chapters were awesome. I become more and more excited about what happens next in the story with each update. It's shaping up to be something like a detective or mystery, which i'm big fan of. And who would've thought that we're not only getting obvious "bad guy" Brad and second who seemed somewhat "evil" (Tyrone) though kinda turned up for the better in the end (still not sure if i trust him even after Brad's scene), but the third evil seem to be in the face of none other than Mrs. Jones with her mysterious list and "handsome" friend. That's something i wasn't prepared for, and i can think of quite a few ways those chosen guys can be used for.
Can't wait to see what's in the next chapter. That was some cruel bad ending indeed. I applaud.
Guess that ending leads to MC's "resurrection" in something what's called "New Game+" in japanese rpgs? With perhaps more possibilities or demonic powers that flying demoness suggesting? Or something else entirely. Interesting.
As for the writing quality, I see that in these updates it's getting noticeably better, with less mistakes. I'll list those sometime tomorrow when i have time. And girls getting sexier and sexier. I loved new touch ups on Mrs. Jones's model, she's pretty much a definition of MILF right now. That push up.
Same can be said about Amy. Claire's new hairstyle is cute as hell just like her whole rework. And Rachel is a damn hot little rebel.
On the "protagonist is a whimp" talk, i'm definitely on the "he's just shy" side. And i'm much more interested in seeing Scott grow from this shy guy to confident and being more dominant instead of just getting control of the alpha wolf like Brad from the start (and many people think so too, which is exactly why games with default alpha protag is almost non-existent here). That, and Scott just more endearing this way, it makes me care about him.
