Here is the first try of the mod...
Loved it.
Render's look great - really enjoyed the narrative changes, the way the bus scene changed the dynamic of subsequent scenes in particular was fantastic.
Render count was quite conservative, which is good up to a point but does have some drawbacks.
The Dinner scene for example, we don't need a dozen different angles and closeups for every line spoken so that saves you time - but the dialogue in that scene went on long enough for me to
notice that the render hadn't changed.
Just bouncing that scene back and forth between two separate renders would work well to break up the scene a bit.
Other than that, it was great.
Looking forward to seeing more if you decide to continue