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No ellipsis used in the original quote, and even if one was used, "do" versus "does" is still dependent upon the subject. Did you even look at the original post?

If you're referring to what I posted, the use of the asterisk is an indicator that an edit is being suggested to correct the grammar of the original poster, much like this: *ellipsis.

You really shouldn't jump into conversations without understanding the context - it makes you look foolish.
His response was:

"Doesn't bother me and doesn't detrack from the experience or the story for me."

to the original statement that was:

"The last few updates are riddled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences. Really disappointing and totally ruins the mood of the story."

Here is the definition for ellipsis: ( "Ellipsis happens when we leave out (in other words, when we don’t use) items which we would normally expect to use in a sentence if we followed the grammatical rules." )

As I already explained, the omission of the subject "It" in his response is ellipsis. Instead of saying "IT does not bother me" he said "Doesn't bother me." It is nobody's fault that you can't make a simple correlation and need everything spelled out to understand a simple sentence.

You should get off your high horse, it makes you look foolish. Also, choosing to display your intellectual superiority on a porn site, in the comment section of a game about a guy fucking his gf's mom, is one of the saddest things I saw in my life.
 
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His response was:

"Doesn't bother me and doesn't detract from the experience or the story for me."

to the original statement that was:




Here is the definition for ellipsis: ( "Ellipsis happens when we leave out (in other words, when we don’t use) it which we would normally expect to use in a sentence if we followed the grammatical rules." )

As I already explained, the omission of the subject "It" in his response is ellipsis. Instead of saying "IT does not bother me" he said "Doesn't bother me." It is nobody's fault that you can't make a simple correlation and need everything spelt out to understand a simple sentence.

You should get off your high horse, it makes you look foolish. Also, choosing to display your intellectual superiority on a porn site, in the comment section of a game about a guy fucking his gf's mom, is one of the saddest things I saw in my life.
I WOULD NOT bother arguing with him mate, it is only himself that he is making look foolish. Regardless I explained my post. It does not bother is a statement, it doesn't bother is a reaction and my post was based on a reaction not a statement so what I posted was correct. In any regard what is the point of arguing over one letter and a space? Lol

Back to the thread at hand.

Thank you Raminita for yet again bringing us these updates. You work tirelessly for this game. Cannot wait for Ch.13
 
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Used to be good, but the update ruined the entire game. I thought the option of not corrupting her would lead to her rejecting John but no he cucks the MC anyways. No point, also the story drags on and on. 8\10 if you wanna play for porn but 0/10 if you invest in story. Also NtR happens either way so fuck the author for lying.
 
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Used to be good, but the update ruined the entire game. I thought the option of not corrupting her would lead to her rejecting John but no he cucks the MC anyways. No point, also the story drags on and on. 8\10 if you wanna play for porn but 0/10 if you invest in story. Also NtR happens either way so fuck the author for lying.
Think you are in your own there. CH12 is brilliant.
 
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I WOULD NOT bother arguing with him mate, it is only himself that he is making look foolish. Regardless I explained my post. It does not bother is a statement, it doesn't bother is a reaction and my post was based on a reaction not a statement so what I posted was correct. In any regard what is the point of arguing over one letter and a space? Lol

Back to the thread at hand.

Thank you Raminita for yet again bringing us these updates. You work tirelessly for this game. Cannot wait for Ch.13
Think you got it mixed ("does not bother me" vs "do not bother me"), as that's how it was in the original argument. And tbh, both are correct here, depending on which subject you use (singular vs plural), as in: "These things do not bother me/ They do not bother me" or "It does not bother me.", which is "This fact does not bother me", "it" or "this fact" being X, Y and Z combined. But yeah, this is not the place to discuss the grammar prowess of the userbase so I won't continue arguing.
 

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Used to be good, but the update ruined the entire game. I thought the option of not corrupting her would lead to her rejecting John but no he cucks the MC anyways. No point, also the story drags on and on. 8\10 if you wanna play for porn but 0/10 if you invest in story. Also NtR happens either way so fuck the author for lying.
john and nicole are still married so it's mc cucking johnand if you neglect their daughter and she jumps on beaman's dick is your own fault for not paying attention on her not breaking up with her.
 

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His response was:

"Doesn't bother me and doesn't detrack from the experience or the story for me."

to the original statement that was:




Here is the definition for ellipsis: ( "Ellipsis happens when we leave out (in other words, when we don’t use) items which we would normally expect to use in a sentence if we followed the grammatical rules." )

As I already explained, the omission of the subject "It" in his response is ellipsis. Instead of saying "IT does not bother me" he said "Doesn't bother me." It is nobody's fault that you can't make a simple correlation and need everything spelled out to understand a simple sentence.

You should get off your high horse, it makes you look foolish. Also, choosing to display your intellectual superiority on a porn site, in the comment section of a game about a guy fucking his gf's mom, is one of the saddest things I saw in my life.
Bless your heart. You have missed the whole damn context of the conversation. Your attempted application of ellipsis is pure non sequitur - by your use of that definition, you would suggest all poor grammar is "ellipsis" - you are attempting to justify what is poor and incorrect by saying poor and incorrect is just fine if you apply this term to it. Just admit you're another troll like the other guy and be done with it.
 
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Bless your heart. You have missed the whole damn context of the conversation. Your attempted application of ellipsis is pure non sequitur - by your use of that definition, you would suggest all poor grammar is "ellipsis" - you are attempting to justify what is poor and incorrect by saying poor and incorrect is just fine if you apply this term to it. Just admit you're another troll like the other guy and be done with it.
Oh, so you actually can't comprehend what you read. You said "I can run circles around you" but you gave no examples of why it is the way you say it is while I gave multiple examples. Your only arguments so far were: "na-uh, it is the way I said it because I said so", "I'm really smart, like really really smart, like smarter than everybody around here combined. Extra smart." and "Source: I said it." Maybe you should stop "licking your own dick" and jerking off to how intelligent you are and start looking around you. If I missed the context, you had ample opportunity to explain it but you keep regurgitating the same stuff over and over again. What is funnier - after you say that I did not understand the context, you argue exactly the same context that I supposedly "didn't understand". Yes, my application of ellipsis is incorrect because you say so, even when there is an example that is quite similar to this one in the link I posted. Of course. I mean, I gave you all the links and I explained multiple times that the implied subject is singular here. Ellipsis is used to omit words that can be easily understood from the context. The implied subject "it" or "this" can be easily understood from the context of that sentence. If this was an academic thesis, it wouldn't be right to use it because it is informal, but this is a porn forum. The technique exists for a reason. If the omission of a word/group of words (the subject here) that can be understood from the context, which is literally the definition for the ellipsis is a non sequitur for you, then there is nothing else I left to say. Like I said, I provided examples and on a quick google search you can find others, you just want to close your eyes and pretend you are right and the other stuff does not exist. Because there is no way I could make this simpler, in order for your brain to be able to understand it. As I said, the implied subject is "it" or "this" in that sentence and its omission is an ellipsis. Actually, let me try and draw it for you, maybe then, oh you "intellectually blessed" being, will be able to understand it.

X, Y, Z (multiple separate things) -(create)-> A (the whole that is made of X, Y, Z). So X + Y + Z (plural because multiple) = A (singular whole). But A (the singular whole) =It/ This/ This thing/ This fact, etc.
P(erson) 1: I dislike X,Y,Z.
P(erson) 2: [A] doesn't bother me. -> A = IT/ THIS (the singular). A - omitted because any being with a modicum of intelligence can make this correlation and understand it from context, just like I did. Well, any being except an "intellectually blessed" being such as yourself, of course.

SO "[A] doesn't bother me" = "X, Y, Z don't bother me."
So if you say "[IT] doesn't bother me" it is like saying that all those things don't bother you. Only that you are expressing it through the singular whole instead of repeating the multiple subjects. Furthermore, the ellipsis could have also been used on another part of the sentence, such as "[IT] doesn't bother me [that X,Y,Z exist.]"

But as the other guy said, there is no point in arguing with you, you are just a sad troll and bully who wants to feel superior by attacking people for (allegedly) not speaking proper English while hiding behind a computer screen. Oh, and speaking proper English does not necessarily make you smart or "intellectually blessed", nor throwing Latin words into the conversation does. Other people might have another native language and be way smarter than you while not fluent in English (so prone to mistakes). Still, he did no mistakes in his spelling. You are not worth any more of my time and we are also going off topic, you by talking about people's grammar prowess instead of talking about the game, and me by responding to that.
 
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It's impossible for me to get past the mothers room. The speed of clicking is absurd, does anyone have any suggestions?

I can't believe the game ends for me after a minute of gameplay.

After the third mouse click I'm already toast.
Go to the game folder. Load up "script.rpy" into a text editor, then search (CTRL+F) for "label menuprolouge1:"
Once you find it, add the following text to the line above it...
jump WalkSafe

So your code should now look like...
Code:
jump WalkSafe
label menuprolouge1:
This will cause the game to skip the clicking part.

Save the file, overwriting the old one (you may want to back up the original to be safe, but this is very simple) and rerun the game. It will automatically read in your changes and use them.

The way I do it is when that button comes up, I just keep clicking on the same spot rapidly until done and it will zip on by.
 
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Go to the game folder. Load up "script.rpy" into a text editor, then search (CTRL+F) for "label menuprolouge1:"
Once you find it, add the following text to the line above it...
jump WalkSafe

So your code should now look like...
Code:
jump WalkSafe
label menuprolouge1:
This will cause the game to skip the clicking part.

Save the file, overwriting the old one (you may want to back up the original to be safe, but this is very simple) and rerun the game. It will automatically read in your changes and use them.

The way I do it is when that button comes up, I just keep clicking on the same spot rapidly until done and it will zip on by.

Thanks so much!
I'll try this.
 
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I don't like how I have to chance upon decent games. There should be a definitive list page of games showing their ratings with a link for their main download pages. I feel like I'm spending ages looking for gold, only finding it by sheer luck.
 

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I don't like how I have to chance upon decent games. There should be a definitive list page of games showing their ratings with a link for their main download pages. I feel like I'm spending ages looking for gold, only finding it by sheer luck.
This is a very good game, one of my favourites for story. It's mostly trial and error. Many other people who comment have signatures with their favourite games listed in them (there's two at the bottom of my posts, with links if you click them taking you the game pages), but not everyone's tastes are the same. Just keep looking, trying out different games. There are reviews and ratings for each game on here. Just scroll to the top of this page and there's a tab named "REVIEWS" with up to a 5 star rating and people's comments on the game.
 

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Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's Love Part 13.

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Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
Thank you very much for your share, Raminita.

LOL Marilyn is on her bullshit again. I can't tell if she is riding MC or just telling him off while he is recumbent.
i think marilyn is letting mc to lick her pussy.
As for the first new screenshot, it seems that MC and Nicole will have fun in the school bathrooms taking advantage of the fact that they will both meet at the high school for MC and Chloe's graduation ceremony (if I'm not mistaken, the Day 22 of the game, the day after the one shown in Part 12, will be when MC's class graduation will be celebrated).

As for the second screenshot, my first impression is that the person Marilyn seems to be mocking is Beeman, taking into account both the background of the image (which has vegetation similar to the one that appears in the previous preview where Beeman appeared) and what seems to be his bald head and the collar of his shirt.

However, although I still believe that person is Beeman (perhaps during/after a magical process performed by Marilyn to end the spell that binds Chloe to him), it's very possible that NewTricks and cxx are right about the second screenshot of this preview and that person is actually the MC himself, involved in some of the nonsense devised by his crazy psychic friend.
 

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Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's Love Part 13.

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Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
Thank you for sharing again Raminita!

Theory time:
For picture #1: Looks like Nicole and MC (Us) are about to have some bathroom action again. Or it could be one of those situations where Nicole and MC are just fooling around and both of them having sex doesn't happen.

Thank you J0K3RXXX for pointing this out. I wouldn't be able to guess this take place during MC (Our) and Chloe's graduation ceremony. May I suggest it might take place before the graduation ceremony? Because MC (Us) is wearing his usual attire. If it take place during, MC wouldn't have a lot of to have sex with Nicole (if it does happen) and MC would have to rush and change pretty quickly.

I would like to point out also that MC (Us) has a very visible small red bruise on his left forehead. This is the first visual bruise we've seen since his fight with Beeman in Part 11. Or this bruise could be related to MC's (Our) headache episodes. Or it could be from Nicole's lipstick, perhaps she kissed MC's (Our) forehead. But I like to think it could be the first two I mentioned in this paragraph.

Another thing I like to mention is that, Nicole is wearing the same outfit she had on where we had dinner with MC's (Our) parents for the first time. I wonder why she wore the exact same dress? And I can't wait to find out.

For picture #2: I'm surprise Marilyn is fighting Beeman one on one but after reading what NewTricks and cxx said I still find it hard it to believe it's MC (Us) in the picture. If it is MC (Us) in the second picture, I'm guessing Marilyn is training our mind for our round 2 with Beeman.

However, although I still believe that person is Beeman (perhaps during/after a magical process performed by Marilyn to end the spell that binds Chloe to him), it's very possible that @NewTricks and @cxx are right about the second screenshot of this preview and that person is actually the MC himself, involved in some of the nonsense devised by his crazy psychic friend.
Can you further explain to me on how is the second WIP picture is MC, instead of Beeman?
 
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