Congrats on getting Chapter 2 out!
BTW, and this is why I hate Kinetic Novels being grouped into the Games section, but to be clear for those that may have missed the tag, this is a Kinetic Novel, not a game. Renpy at it's heart is a Visual Novel engine, and this is very much a visual novel. There are no decision forks in this novel, at least as far as Chapter 1 and 2 are concerned, it is 100% linear.
Just wanted to reinforce that point for people that are new to this thread that might otherwise be expecting an actual game.
And yeah, for the rich guy and his growing harem having harem sex fans, and that like watching the babymaking, this may be the VN for you! The one thing that bothers me is the 'wham bam, I'm in a harem now' approach to the relationships, which falls under the trope "
Hypnotized by the (Monster) Cock", which I feel compelled to point out. For those looking for more 'prelude' before the sexy stuff happens, this may not be the story for you. But if for those looking for no excuses lots of sex between the main character and his bevy of sexy gals...
There's an angle to the harem building which ties into this a bit which somewhat explains how quickly the gals accept the harem, but for myself, a bit more build-up, with possibly one notable exception in the story, might have been nice. That ship has sailed though, and these sorts of erotic visual novels are mainly about the sexy pics and sexy situations. Just want to set expectations for those that might be curious.
I'd like to see more expressiveness with the gals during conversations in the next chapter. I get that since it's a VN and since the same pic is used to cover both/multiple sides of a given conversation that having one gal talking while the other isn't might look weird if the dialogue is coming from both/all, but personally I'd prefer having multiple pics showing each gal conversing in turn. Of course, that'd add considerably to the render count, so I get it, but I'd still like to see more expressiveness in the gals faces going forward. Just my personal preference.
With that out of the way, if you like busty blondes with round asses and tiny waists, and watching each of them getting nailed in turn, this is probably right up your alley! I'm looking forward to the full on orgy stuff with the male MC which presumably is coming in Chapter 3...
Looking forward to chapter 3!