VN Ren'Py Completed A New Beginning [Ch. 1-12] [JJsworld]

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Overview:
A Kinetic Novel
A young man who left everything behind, as a teen. Now has grown up and started to reassemble all the people that he loves.​

Thread Updated: 2022-03-22
Release Date: 2022-03-22
Developer: JJsworld -

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Censored: No
Version: Ch. 1-12
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English
Resolution: 720p
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Chapters 1-12
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Extra: Italian

*This unofficial port/version is not released by developer, download at your own risk.


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[JJsworld]

I am new to this, so I can take any constructive criticism... I plan on animations, so bare with me...

 

[elysium1988]

Shouldnt this be in the game sections though if its a kinetic novel? Kinetic novels are usually added in the games section.

 

[meigame]

Thank you

 

[L3z1l3]

This is clearly a ren'py game. So I think it should be moved to the game section.

 

[JJsworld]

Moderator placed here... I think the rules for Visual Novels now, are that they are placed in the Comic and Still category, as they have no choice bases, nor game ending consequences...

 

[L3z1l3]

Moderator placed here... I think the rules for Visual Novels now, are that they are placed in the Comic and Still category, as they have no choice bases, nor game ending consequences...

Well, I don't think that makes sense. Especially since you plan to have animations in the future. Or even if it has to be in this section at least it should have a separate tag instead of Comic in my opinion. But clearly You are not to blame for this.

As for the game/visual novel I really enjoyed it but there were some things the could be improved.

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These are just my opinion though.

 

[Ozzice13]

A young man, who left everything behind, as a teen, now has started to reassemble all the people he loves.

Sounds almost like the plot of Frankenstein

 

[JJsworld]

Well, I don't think that makes sense. Especially since you plan to have animations in the future. Or even if it has to be in this section at least it should have a separate tag instead of Comic in my opinion. But clearly You are not to blame for this.

As for the game/visual novel I really enjoyed it but there were some things the could be improved.

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These are just my opinion though.

This is what I need... I accept all input... Like I said, I'm new at this... Over all, I like to know how people like it, or dislike... Started Chapter 2, and try to incorperate a few new ideas... If you noticed, I revamped Deanne towards the end, so she is easier on the eyes...

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Needs pregnancy and choices but I'm liking it.

 

[JJsworld]

Pregnancy... Hmmm, lightbulb going off...

 

[e-disfunction]

You *may* want to change your title to prevent confusion ... There is currently 1 other game called A New Beginning (by Zekoslava) and at least 2 others developed in the past as A New Beginning or New Beginnings.
e-d

 

[assman1337]

gave me a headache with the basic spelling mistakes
will play at a later time
also there were 2 save images on the save page
would be great if we get to name the mc in future updates

 

[JJsworld]

gave me a headache with the basic spelling mistakes
will play at a later time
also there were 2 save images on the save page
would be great if we get to name the mc in future updates

Spelling ???

 

[Yankator]

Nice start

 

[rafa30]

good game
beautiful characters
i like

 

[JoeElderLich]

Not bad. Good, solid start. There is a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes and a massive over use of commas. The thoughts should be displayed differently, such as italicized or in brackets. Think of commas as a pause in the sentence. They can also be used to annotate something, separate or list things. Some examples: "It's nice to see you again, Dianne." "Do I need to take care of this trash, or will you handle it?" "With the sun shining, such as it is, why don't we go for a jog?" "I have one carrot, two apples, three pears and a pine cone." There are also a of couple images that could use touched up, such as when in the dress shop. You might consider renaming the project to something more unique as there are already a few games with very similar names.

 

[JJsworld]

Not bad. Good, solid start. There is a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes and a massive over use of commas. The thoughts should be displayed differently, such as italicized or in brackets. Think of commas as a pause in the sentence. They can also be used to annotate something, separate or list things. Some examples: "It's nice to see you again, Dianne." "Do I need to take care of this trash, or will you handle it?" "With the sun shining, such as it is, why don't we go for a jog?" "I have one carrot, two apples, three pears and a pine cone." There are also a of couple images that could use touched up, such as when in the dress shop. You might consider renaming the project to something more unique as there are already a few games with very similar names.

Working on it... I know Chapter 1, isn't perfect, but that is why I ask for the input... Chapter 2 should be better...

 

[JJsworld]

Getting asked for android version... Anyone out there know how ??? Been playing with ren'py, and can't seem to get it...

 

[Famescua]

I for one really liked this story. It isn't a great work of literature but its pretty entertaining. The girls look hot and that brings me back for more, lol. The only problems I have is the mc has a horse dick but ok i can get over that. The 1 thing that I couldn't get over is that my saves wouldn't load. I have no idea why, I had to restart and play it all in one go. Not easy when you don't have a lot of time. But keep up the good work.