- Jan 20, 2018
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You took that way out of context. It was a pointless question for someone who had already said they decided to not play the game.
- Jan 20, 2018
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The developer (not f95) is only posting the game on F95. He posted a link for contributing within the last couple of pages of this thread.
- Aug 22, 2016
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Complaining about incest in an incest game is like complaining about interracial sex in Blacked... I know, there are a lot of incest game right now, several have the same basis about the son who returns to see his family or vice versa but I really think this one is pretty unique, of course you have cliches but nothing that can't be fixed/improved in future updates.
Another thing, I agree and disagree with something that some said... yeah, I love when the family wants to fuck the MC from the beginning but I also love a challenge, things go slower, I really hope there's a twist that makes us lose the "winning position" or makes the things more hard for the MC but nothing so serious, I think I talk for a lot people here... I don't want another NTR game xD
And well done for your no-Patreon decision, their rules "ruined" a lot of games, changed a lot of stories, I know people will say that porn games don't have creativity but anything that limits it, big or small, should be repudiated.
Another thing, I agree and disagree with something that some said... yeah, I love when the family wants to fuck the MC from the beginning but I also love a challenge, things go slower, I really hope there's a twist that makes us lose the "winning position" or makes the things more hard for the MC but nothing so serious, I think I talk for a lot people here... I don't want another NTR game xD
And well done for your no-Patreon decision, their rules "ruined" a lot of games, changed a lot of stories, I know people will say that porn games don't have creativity but anything that limits it, big or small, should be repudiated.
- Aug 7, 2017
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The story and script shows better writing ability than 99% of the games on this site. So that's a big plus, and really, it is the most important thing. The models also look pretty good.
Now for the criticisms. There were a few abrupt transitions from one scene to another that could use an additional line or two of text so that the reader doesn't think they missed something. A common rendering error I see is that the text box is not taken into consideration when creating the scene. I was constantly hitting the hide button to get a better look at the scene when important elements of the picture were covered in text. But the biggest issue for me is that the lighting in many of the renders is very poor, creating unnecessarily dark pictures.
Overall, a pretty good effort and I look forward to seeing more.
Now for the criticisms. There were a few abrupt transitions from one scene to another that could use an additional line or two of text so that the reader doesn't think they missed something. A common rendering error I see is that the text box is not taken into consideration when creating the scene. I was constantly hitting the hide button to get a better look at the scene when important elements of the picture were covered in text. But the biggest issue for me is that the lighting in many of the renders is very poor, creating unnecessarily dark pictures.
Overall, a pretty good effort and I look forward to seeing more.
- Jan 28, 2018
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- Nov 22, 2017
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i think you didn't get my point all i wanted is the Info or the play time of this build it's not pointless having information..
a simple answer like it's 1hour play time..if no one can answer it's fine don't reply then lels
a simple answer like it's 1hour play time..if no one can answer it's fine don't reply then lels
- Nov 21, 2017
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looks like you want exactly "another ntr game", not challenge. mc is a fucking millionaire, he's a handsome, he has muscles, he's not another pussy mc , ofc he's "winning"
- Jul 11, 2017
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Probably has something to do with how there aren't any renders for those chapters yet.
- Aug 24, 2017
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Because I write faster than I've been rendering... Also, most of the stuff in chapters 3 and 4 have already changed a lot over the past 24 hours.
It got explained as being a family thing - very open to incest (the author even makes a reference to the biblical story of Lot and his daughters -
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), so pretty much nothing was taboo when it came to family.That would make sense if they'd all lived that way all this time but this is all new to most of the kids.
Not that it really matters anyway. I just thought some of the clothes looked bad/ridiculous.
"Then again, I'm trying to make sense of an erotic game's script...."
Nothing wrong with that. Half of a fuck story should be the story
Nothing wrong with that. Half of a fuck story should be the story
- Oct 4, 2017
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Just to drop my dime on the 'pacing vs. the open incest' ranting. The game goes pretty slow, i hugged every family member by day 1 or 2 and snatched kisses from all but 'big sis', who hands them out for free, because BS already had their taboo moment (which is not so uncommon in 'normal' families with siblings that a gender compatible) so this works well.
As for the 'Alpha male versus the underdog corruptor' You really want another of these i have to 'level up', 'grind' big sister down, 'open' up little sister('s pussy) and 'find' moms dirty secrets / leverage games?. Unless your game goes anal on resource / time management (Glassix, Superpowered) just establishing a good VN with some clear paths ahead is far more rewarding than the 'gather points', 'crack character decision-maze' garbage.
and lets not forget the 'Corruption Bottleneck' rant. Why does the corruption part ALWAYS need to be the main (70% of plot) story ark? Imagine a queer ero VN, were the main character had to convince every fucking potential partner to turn fag or dyke. I'd rather try and turn queer in real life. So surprise all characters have already crossed the rubicon and set up shop, no take backs but maybe some bipolar citizens to organize that romantic threesome with your best black buddy and your tomboy lady friend? Yes please!.
I am not saying the 'corruption tale' isn't worth telling but i heard it so often, starting this at phase two 'enjoy corrupted partners, yay', has some serious appeal. Because these stories need to be told, too. Yes how does living with your morally degraded partner actually work out? We could even throw some NTR in there which is not lobotomized masochism.
If i'd fuck my mom and sister, my ex-girlfriend doesn't magically shut up, that education / social ladder thing doesn't disappear and the entire slice of life / sope opera drama that is my job no matter how much 'bling-bling' it buys me or how high i climbed already doesn't walk on hold so i can micro manage my harem. What happens to my partners when i get to sleep? Do they also sleep thinking of me or are they dreaming of each other? If they jumped on the foursome bandwagon why not trying the slimmer threesome model while i am doing laundry? Whats wrong with 'post-corruption Slice-of-Life'?
TL DR, Why not start a game post corruption and go from there? I curse the story, the moment it ruined the game so hold your horses.
As for the 'Alpha male versus the underdog corruptor' You really want another of these i have to 'level up', 'grind' big sister down, 'open' up little sister('s pussy) and 'find' moms dirty secrets / leverage games?. Unless your game goes anal on resource / time management (Glassix, Superpowered) just establishing a good VN with some clear paths ahead is far more rewarding than the 'gather points', 'crack character decision-maze' garbage.
and lets not forget the 'Corruption Bottleneck' rant. Why does the corruption part ALWAYS need to be the main (70% of plot) story ark? Imagine a queer ero VN, were the main character had to convince every fucking potential partner to turn fag or dyke. I'd rather try and turn queer in real life. So surprise all characters have already crossed the rubicon and set up shop, no take backs but maybe some bipolar citizens to organize that romantic threesome with your best black buddy and your tomboy lady friend? Yes please!.
I am not saying the 'corruption tale' isn't worth telling but i heard it so often, starting this at phase two 'enjoy corrupted partners, yay', has some serious appeal. Because these stories need to be told, too. Yes how does living with your morally degraded partner actually work out? We could even throw some NTR in there which is not lobotomized masochism.
If i'd fuck my mom and sister, my ex-girlfriend doesn't magically shut up, that education / social ladder thing doesn't disappear and the entire slice of life / sope opera drama that is my job no matter how much 'bling-bling' it buys me or how high i climbed already doesn't walk on hold so i can micro manage my harem. What happens to my partners when i get to sleep? Do they also sleep thinking of me or are they dreaming of each other? If they jumped on the foursome bandwagon why not trying the slimmer threesome model while i am doing laundry? Whats wrong with 'post-corruption Slice-of-Life'?
TL DR, Why not start a game post corruption and go from there? I curse the story, the moment it ruined the game so hold your horses.
- Oct 5, 2017
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I get an error when mom is on the balcony with me.
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/c1.rpy", line 77, in script
$ m_trust += 1
File "game/c1.rpy", line 77, in <module>
$ m_trust += 1
NameError: name 'm_trust' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/c1.rpy", line 77, in script
$ m_trust += 1
File "D:\New folder (2)\Renpy\A New Home 0.5\renpy\ast.py", line 848, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "D:\New folder (2)\Renpy\A New Home 0.5\renpy\python.py", line 1804, in py_exec_bytecode
exec bytecode in globals, locals
File "game/c1.rpy", line 77, in <module>
$ m_trust += 1
NameError: name 'm_trust' is not defined
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.14.3135
A New Home 0.5
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/c1.rpy", line 77, in script
$ m_trust += 1
File "game/c1.rpy", line 77, in <module>
$ m_trust += 1
NameError: name 'm_trust' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/c1.rpy", line 77, in script
$ m_trust += 1
File "D:\New folder (2)\Renpy\A New Home 0.5\renpy\ast.py", line 848, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "D:\New folder (2)\Renpy\A New Home 0.5\renpy\python.py", line 1804, in py_exec_bytecode
exec bytecode in globals, locals
File "game/c1.rpy", line 77, in <module>
$ m_trust += 1
NameError: name 'm_trust' is not defined
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.14.3135
A New Home 0.5
- Jun 2, 2017
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