TrueLoveGames
Hey mate I just replayed your game from start to finishing and I am still loving it def one of my favo on the forums.
If I can give a little constructive feedback though. First off I love the atmosphere of the game. Feels very mature with each character dealing with their own issue and having their own distinct personality. Really makes me feel/sympathize for each character. I have extremely hard time who I want to pursuit in the game because all the girls are so awesome. However I feel that the game has bit of a dark undertones that not everybody might be able to handle so I would suggest maybe giving a warning at the start of the game similar to what DIK did at start of their game. Just a suggestion though.
Also after you cleaned up the house in the beginning of the game and you proceed to talk to Jenny, she out of nowhere, decides to let you feel her tits. Even if you don't proceed to follow up on this the timing felt really weird with how realistic most of the characters are + you just continue on with your conversation instead of having maybe a awkward atmosphere between the character. Overall I feel like this scene needs a mini rework and you should remove fondling her boobs as the timing is also weird as you have only met that day and she isn't even drunk. When Jade does the sexual stuff in the beginning I get it because its obviously in her character with Jenny it felt out of character and resulted in me putting my suspense of believe aside.
One last minor thing. I am no English native speakers but I seen a few spelling mistakes here and there + some sentences were kind a weird. Like I understood what you meant but felt like the way the sentence was formed could have been more clear. Edit: If you want a clear example ill have to play the game again to showcase one.
Just my two cents though. Take it or leave.