VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - A.O.A. Academy [Ch.5 Gold] [TLGGAMES]

Wow, we have a new contender for the best game around here with this one!
Excellent graphics supported by a fitting music and soundeffects.
Beautiful characters and several different storylines to follow.
It´s the classic "guy comes to a college and meets a ton of different girls"-story , but executed in an extremely professional and beautiful way.
I am looking very much forward to all future updates,

10/10 Story and I usually don't care about the story in these games. 10/10 models, Jenny is best girl btw. Amazing posture, scenes, and ambiance.

Overall, one of the best games I've seen on here. Keep up the good work!

CH 2.1

TBH I'm tired of highschool/university settings.

But this one is different. Sure it has some clichés like an "i don't know anything else than my farm" MC.

But for now I'm seeing that as part of the story building.
An there is a lot of that ... Chapter 2 and a few hours playing content, you don't get that often.
There is a lot of story telling and character building.

Adding sexual content is always difficult.
Add it too late, people are complaining.
Add it too fast, people are complaining.

We'll see how this will develop.

My biggest concerns are that all the choices (even in C2) lead to many many different situations.
These must be rendered and scripted ... and that's a lot of work.

Until now I really like it.
The renders are ok, the story is good.
I realy like most of the characters.

this is a AAA quality game as of now.
Pros:
fantastic rendering
great music
great story telling ( This is what make most game failed to do )

Cons:
personally the first sexual encounter at jenny house is just incoherent with the pace of the game.

Will re rate the game when new chapters are being developed.

Really good game
I have played to 2.0.1
I look forward for more content
But it look really promising
It has good renders, good story, and an enjoyable Protagonist
I wish more content with the Korean girl

A very welcome take on a very over used trope. This seems like a great story and I love the characters so far, even the MC is likable unlike most of these college boy stories! I particularly am in love with Jenny of course but all of the girls seem to have some depth to them. Keep up the good work!

Awesome renders and models, intriguing story and characters are very unique. One of 'the' best out there. Though, I think the brightness in the renders are a bit high or maybe its just me.
Jenny is ma gurl .
And its just the beginning , more updates and content to comesneaky
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(v0.3: I am reducing my rating from 5* to 4*, see the reasons below.)

Beautiful girls, great visuals, rich interesting story with intriguing details.

Though now there are just Prologue & Chapter 1, it's obviously a highest quality game, with sense of humor and kind heart.

I'm looking forward to playing more. Keep it up, True Love!

==== v0.3 edited ====

Bugs.

Saggy tits.

Lifeless facial expressions.

Romantic lines are scarce, slow and isolated.

Much content (like dialogs), not so much soul in there.

Repetitions of mostly the same dialog lines. (E.g. why jenny does the most work and how Val doesn't want to endanger others etc - all that was repeated like 5 times.)

In respect for the artwork on beautiful models and settings I got to rate this VN higher than terrible. Their dialogs are no fun to read yet. Not only because it's all about drama right from the start. As if misspelling is the new wave now. Native or not! Please ask for help on this matter. Confidence might be a good thing. However, false pride gets you nowhere.

Really gorgeous renders and characters. Writing is good. This game is taking me in it . I thought story may be a little bit stereotype but the twist in the end was good and hooked me. I love your work dev! Keep working!

This game is really good. I love how the way the dev writing arc of every character. almost every character have an interesting story behind they joining to the academy. and also the women on this game are look gorgeous, especially jenny, she's my favourite one. and last, the music in this game is amazing.
i'll rate this game 5/5 .

The Dev really needs to get an English proofreader. There are sooooo many grammatical errors.
A lot of the dialogue just doesn't make sense and/or it is out of context for the scenario. Additionally the timeframes that are mentioned don't correlate with realistic sequences of events - people have only known each other a short period of time, yet there will be comments where they act like they have known each other forever. The MC grew up with Ashley, was best friends with her - she only moved away a few years, yet she walks right by the MC and doesn't recognize him when she is at the train station to pick him up..
Also the dialogue around dating or whether a particular girl likes him or not is ridiculous; it's like it was written by a 12 year old boy.
Basically the writing is really really poor.
It's too bad because the models are really attractive and the renders are very well done.
I can't really say whether the decisions you make have much impact on the story, as this VN is so early in development. The MC so far is forming relationships with most of the girls, so whether that will form harem options down the road or start causing major issues - we don't know yet.

This is a real gem of a game thus far, I hope the author keeps up. This is both light-hearted fun at times and real deep dive into some of the characters. I came looking for a fap and found a story with interesting characters to think about. I am extremely happy when that happens, there are very few games which even try that and I for one can't see what's to come in this story. Merry Christmas!

I hate this game because all of the girls are 100% wife material and every choice I make is painful since I just want them all. Definitely a game you need to replay a few times. I usually just skip to the hot scenes but not in this game. Fantastic stuff here, hope you don't lose any quality fleshing this out because you've got a great thing going on here.

CH1

It's a nice start but it could have been great with some changes.
Outside of that, i don't have any complains with how the story develops, i think all the characters are interesting, with maybe the exception of Jenny, i her background intriguing but i don't understand much her personality. The renders are amazing and all the girls are beautiful

8/10

This is a great start to an awesome game. First the graphics are fantastic as you can see in the teaser pics. Second the story is very engaging with multiple paths to follow depending on you desires. Everything is moving along at a good pace with the story developing naturally without any of the "forced" feeling you can sometimes get from this genre. Without a doubt this is one I will be following through to its conclusion. Highly recommend you give this one a try and support the dev if you can.

This one is exceptionally good! The facial renderings are better than any I have ever seen. The writing is very good, and the choices make a difference, and make sense. Each of the women has a distinct and complex backstory, and realistic personalities. The hardest part is that the game really forces you to choose between the women at a few critical junctures, and I always tend toward a harem path if I can. Not a problem, though - I will just do multiple play-throughs each focusing on the women I prefer.

High Quality Visuals + Low Quality Imagination combine to make an average experience.

This game is boring.

I would have preferred less time iterating pretty things in boring ways and more time exposing a unique world with interesting interactivity.

Porn games appeal because it's a way to execute themes and situations more convincingly than traditional porn does. it should be a place where boring stories and boring acting doesn't exist, because you can achieve exactly what you're after with exact specificity.

Well..... I can't really think of an original way to say how good this is, so I'll just keep it short and say this is absolutely AMAZING!!!

Renders: 10/10
Not much to add. Everything looks gorgeous!

Story: 9/10
Apart from this being yet another 'school setting' game, it's all flawless. The story has a nice pace. There's enough build-up without it getting boring for even a second. Some emotional and serious scenes are alternated by light and funny ones. Nice dialogue, believable character personalities... it's all there.

Character models: Infinite/10
Freakin' hell mate! I fell in love. 8 times. No joke!

Animations: 9/10
The animations are very very good, but not the best ones I ever seen. Despite them being definitely an improvement to the sex scenes, they feel a bit 'loopy' sometimes.

Music: 10/10
Perfectly adjusted to the different scenes.

Overall: just wow. Simply amazing! The only bad thing I can say about the game is that it is't finished yet. In terms of quality (so not taking the plot and kinks into account) this is probably the best lewd game I ever played.

A very good adult VN with eye-catching visuals and character design that is well-written with interesting and very likable characters each with their own backstories which play a big role in character development and their motives in this game's story.

The story itself is simple but interesting, mostly focusing on emotional interactions between the characters with choices in dialogue and who to pursue or avoid in a relationship and featuring very well made intimate scenes with animations.

For an early version of the game, it already presented itself in all the right ways and each chapter (including the prologue) has a good amount of length and content.