- Thread starter TrueLoveGames
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Three things irritate me:
- Tenses are a bit messed up.
- Names are often not capitalized.
- Lots of "the" where they don't belong.
Also, there's a bit of confusion about Vicky and her brother. If you don't ask about their relationship on the train, the MC will seem to know they're siblings before talking to Vicky, and then she tells him they're siblings, which surprises him.
- Tenses are a bit messed up.
- Names are often not capitalized.
- Lots of "the" where they don't belong.
Also, there's a bit of confusion about Vicky and her brother. If you don't ask about their relationship on the train, the MC will seem to know they're siblings before talking to Vicky, and then she tells him they're siblings, which surprises him.
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There's no ch 3 yet buddy. The Ch 2 Public/gold release is for the 15th but you can try the beta version.
- Nov 3, 2020
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So what was the last update? I thought it was chapter 3, since 2 came out at Christmas
- Apr 16, 2020
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Chapter 2 beta version.
No that was chap 1 with a special christmas epilogue.
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This is just beta version. In 4-5 days, we will get the final release then probably, the android port will come.
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Every gurls fire has to start somewhere .. this is a build up .,.
some needs spice, some need charcoal, some need ensence ...
MC better be there at the end of that rainbow ... 4 some sweet release.
some needs spice, some need charcoal, some need ensence ...
MC better be there at the end of that rainbow ... 4 some sweet release.
- Feb 19, 2019
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Signatures updated
Links:
Links:
Code:
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2021/03/1100918_A.O.A-00.gif
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2021/03/1100924_A.O.A-01.gif
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2021/03/1100930_A.O.A-02.gif
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2021/03/1100934_A.O.A-03.gif
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2021/03/1100937_A.O.A-04.gif
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https://attachments.f95zone.to/2021/03/1100939_A.O.A-06.gif
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2021/03/1100943_A.O.A-07.gifJust Fucking Awesome!!! Brilliant images and story so far! Tongue in cheek jokes linking to another famous game! Hilarious!
Going to be gutted if you have to chose! Harem hopefully if possible please!!!
Going to be gutted if you have to chose! Harem hopefully if possible please!!!
- Feb 21, 2020
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Amazing signs! I'd love to pick the one with Jenny right away, but can you make one with all the girls?
- Feb 19, 2019
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Sure thing!,whenever it's ready i will update my post.
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Just played it.
I am really impressed. I think this is a good Romance.
Choices seem to matter which is good. A lot of games are more comics than interactive VNs. At least in the past weeks.
I definitely appreciate this over something where I just have to be a passive reader.
Playing this I got "Season of Sakura" or "True Love"vibes from this (A Compliment. Because you know the good old days). Did anybody know this game, and I am the only one? Ah good old Japanese style VNs.
Anyway good job TrueLoveGames.
I am really impressed. I think this is a good Romance.
Choices seem to matter which is good. A lot of games are more comics than interactive VNs. At least in the past weeks.
I definitely appreciate this over something where I just have to be a passive reader.
Playing this I got "Season of Sakura" or "True Love"vibes from this (A Compliment. Because you know the good old days). Did anybody know this game, and I am the only one? Ah good old Japanese style VNs.
Anyway good job TrueLoveGames.
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