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LGM

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Three things irritate me:
- Tenses are a bit messed up.
- Names are often not capitalized.
- Lots of "the" where they don't belong.

Also, there's a bit of confusion about Vicky and her brother. If you don't ask about their relationship on the train, the MC will seem to know they're siblings before talking to Vicky, and then she tells him they're siblings, which surprises him.
 
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Canto Forte

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Every gurls fire has to start somewhere .. this is a build up .,.
some needs spice, some need charcoal, some need ensence ...
MC better be there at the end of that rainbow ... 4 some sweet release.
 

Lady Aspen

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Jengis

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Just Fucking Awesome!!! Brilliant images and story so far! Tongue in cheek jokes linking to another famous game! Hilarious!

Going to be gutted if you have to chose! Harem hopefully if possible please!!!
 

The Bush Diver

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Amazing signs! I'd love to pick the one with Jenny right away, but can you make one with all the girls?
 
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Just played it.
I am really impressed. I think this is a good Romance.
Choices seem to matter which is good. A lot of games are more comics than interactive VNs. At least in the past weeks.
I definitely appreciate this over something where I just have to be a passive reader.

Playing this I got "Season of Sakura" or "True Love"vibes from this (A Compliment. Because you know the good old days). Did anybody know this game, and I am the only one? Ah good old Japanese style VNs.:)

Anyway good job TrueLoveGames.
 
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