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DarthSpitz717

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I find it strange that in almost every game we hardly see any kissing. When I have cheated or been around others that have cheated. The first thing that happens is a kiss. Maybe the Devs watch too much porn. Kissing is the act of passion and if you cheat thats the first step. Not groping someone's ass until they cave in.

I love having a few characters being over the top creeps. I think there should be some who are normal though. Or even one?! lol.

Anna in the shower is happy to jerk Chris off but she or him have absolutely no interest in kissing, no passion shown. Felt a little empty and clinical, even the dialogue felt like she didn't care. Yet if you play the Chris path, she is into him. So if she's going to go so far to jerk him off, why not kiss him? If someone is going to cheat with someone they know, they will kiss. Its one of the fundamental steps. Seems like so many Devs forget this, the women are not prostitutes or pornstars. Mr Palmer for writing so much realism in his story seems to have forgot this too.
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I can agree with the kissing (or lack of it) ... Can you have sex without kissing--OH YAH, you can. Kissing has a different level of importance to everyone. For some it involves emotional commitment--something I don't think Anna and Chris will ever have. Could Chris have kissed Anna to get her passion up? Sure! But likely it would have devolved to neck nibbles and good old breast play.

Sadly, with most games, breast play is lacking. But in real life its often the cat's meow that leads to other things.

Going back to breast-- finally settling the question what Anna looks like topless it's both a Home Run hit and a total strike out if you can follow the oxymoron of that statement. You have Anna with puffy nipples that indicate she is breast feeding {am so glad the renders of Anna isn't your silicone queen type) ... that is your home run. Problem is Anna is lactating. And in there is the strike out. At what time did Anna pump or breast feed her daughter? Anna was in a hot shower and had her breast squeezed-- Now I am thinking Mr. Palmer isn't angling the story that way or its just overlooked
 

danokyzu

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All of this is going to unwind when MMC visits Anna again. Kendra will be sitting there and MMC says what the fuck. Shocked faces except Kendra she has already damaged their marriage. She laughs and reveals that MMC never slept with any one, but Anna slept with alot of people. Chaos give me chaos don't make me wait:devilish:
ngl this sounds preaty funny xD
 

danokyzu

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But if we think about it David had it coming dude is too blind xD how can you trust a dude thats after your wife from man to man you now when a man is after a women and chris is not that sneaky both anna and david are not the smartest I know Chris didn't plan everything but a normal person would put one and one together and think that chris is the one.
Think about it Chris comes back into David's life and boom he gets accused of cheating and if that's not enough Chris is against hiring a detective David should have woken up by then If I were David I would have called in a detective the next day without saying anything to anyone because he doesn't know who is on his side
same goes for Anna kendra is giving her all this tips and shit but it only brings Anna more to the streets and demages her marriage
 

rocco11

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Phenomenal story and definitely the best game on the forum! Initially, I didn't like that the game deviated from the story 'A Perfect Marriage Ruined Pt. 01' and that it didn't provide an ending to this story, which I had long hoped for. Also, I don't like the introduction of too many characters as predators towards Ana. I believe that the fewer male characters there are, the better the dynamics and character development of the story. In my opinion, besides David, Chris, and Jake, there was no need to introduce other 'predators'. Of course, I understand the author's desire to cater to different tastes by including older, grotesque, or dark-skinned characters, but I think it's unnecessary and superfluous. Regarding the speed of updates, I completely understand the author. This is not his full-time job, nor one that earns him a huge amount of money. Simply put, anyone with a normal life including family, work, and friends knows how difficult it is to fit in any hobby or side job. Of course, I too would like everything to happen faster, but I've always been an advocate of the idea that it's better to wait longer for something of quality. And this game is indeed quality. The way the characters are developed, their relationships reflecting real-life relationships of real people, the slow-burning pace, which is actually the only possible and logical pace since rarely (or never) do marital breakdowns and infidelities occur suddenly and impulsively, all of this gives a special weight to the game. The graphic details are also very good, and that's another thing I congratulate the author on. This is especially evident now after the latest update and the situation where we finally saw Ana naked. The only critique is her perfectly shaved pussy. I prefer a little hair, or at least not so perfectly trimmed landing strip, but this is not even an issue.

Once again, thanks for everything Mr_Palmer , and just keep going!
 

Jstforme

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Yeah that would be cool i am tired of those losers mc David need to man up and grow some balls that's the best way to save he's marriage and dignity
I really hope that really happens. I can't think of a single VN where the MC actually says ENOUGH...grows a pair, mans up and takes control of his future by dolling out justice to those who have wronged him.
 

Adhdclassic

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I really hope that really happens. I can't think of a single VN where the MC actually says ENOUGH...grows a pair, mans up and takes control of his future by dolling out justice to those who have wronged him.
Agree I don't think I have ever seen the nuclear option done in a visual novel. For those who don't know what nuclear is. It's when the victim of infidelity plays dumb while building a case of revenge against spouse and all those who were involved. Revenge could be financial, mental, physical(usually the person who cheated with the spouse). Basically the most damaging thing you can think of mostly legal, occasionally illegal. There is one game out there that is close to doing it if you go down one of the paths.
 

drakov

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I really hope that really happens. I can't think of a single VN where the MC actually says ENOUGH...grows a pair, mans up and takes control of his future by dolling out justice to those who have wronged him.
Pineapple Express have the option , to confront his fiance and after which MC punches her lover, and then leaves her.
 
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DIRTY FILTHY Animal

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Agree I don't think I have ever seen the nuclear option done in a visual novel. For those who don't know what nuclear is. It's when the victim of infidelity plays dumb while building a case of revenge against spouse and all those who were involved. Revenge could be financial, mental, physical(usually the person who cheated with the spouse). Basically the most damaging thing you can think of mostly legal, occasionally illegal. There is one game out there that is close to doing it if you go down one of the paths.
David needs to make a phone call to him
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