VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.1b] [Mr Palmer]

[Adolfo]

I think Rafi is some Radom guy, and so is the shop owner. We don't need any more guests for this game, you know how long we would wait for an update. Especially since I don't have them in the poll.It's more like Timothy would fit better than Rafi

Rafi was in one of the last poll with Stenstromber, the Anna's mother and Renaldo as important character. Stenstromber winned.
The boss or the boyfriend before college probably we will hear about it but it is for a future DLC. Mr Palmer said he would make a DLC about Anna youth.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

My mistake, I'm confusing Renaldo with Leonardo

When you said Leonardo, I thought of

And Renaldo this soccer star

 

[Sadowdark]

About Rafi there is a conversation in the meal between Kendra and Anna:

a "And to make matters worse, this intern named Rafi that I have on the Harper case is lazy!"

k "Oh yes, you got stuck with a bad one."

a "But why? The Harper case needs someone experienced. Why would Hank let this happen?"

(…)

k "The rumor is that Hank hired your intern quickly before an investigation happened into his hiring practices, because the kid’s a minority. He wasn't the only one swiftly hired either."

k "Hank barely interviewed the kid, and it turns out this intern didn’t even finish school. He has no degree."

a "That’s hard for me to believe."

k "Is it? Or is it totally believable?"

a "Well, I guess it’s totally believable. But ugh! I get stuck with him on this case?"

k "Maybe our dear pig of a leader is trying to test you..."


About a past relation, previous to College, there are many thoghts of Anna about a bad realtionship. My bet is the boss of the shop where she worked. First there is on Monday a thoughts of Anna whan David ask for a blowjob:


a_ "What's with David asking for a blowjob? That hasn't been a topic in a long time. He knows how uncomfortable it makes me."

a_ "*sigh* Maybe it's time I finally get over my bad memory."

a_ "That was years ago... all in the past... just one experience with a person I've erased from my memory. It's time I move on."

a_ "But it's so hard to shake that old memory. The cum tasted so bad, and his penis smelled of sweat. I get nauseous just thinking about it."

a_ "I've always been weird about putting things into my mouth since then, and I have this crazy fear that I'll vomit if I do it again."

a_ "David's been so patient with me. He's never pressured me, not like my former college boyfriends tried to do."


On Tuesday, when Chris asks Anna about the number of lovers she has had, she answer 4 but thinks another thing:


"David's my fourth."

a_ "There's actually been five, but one of them is dead to me and doesn't count."

And on Wednesday in the meal with Kendra, when Kendra is asking Anna about her life and sex experience:

a "The only time I had to myself was when I worked my job at a department store in the mall, but even then, my boss had to report to my father on whether I was behaving."

a_ "If only my father knew the truth..."

(…)

k "Were you a virgin when you started college?"

a "No... I mean, I had... a boyfriend when I was in high school... who I had sex with... many times."

a_ "Who is dead to me now. But I’m not going to talk about that."

a "It wasn’t fulfilling though... it was awkward and uncomfortable."

Rafi - I forgot he was in the poll. Anyone have this poll?
It is clear to me here that Anna when she worked at the department store had a substitute for freedom, although she was closely watched by her boss and any inappropriate behavior of Anna was immediately reported to Anna's father. So she couldn't be in a relationship with the head of the department store. I think she was in a bad relationship in college where she had a bad experience in bj. And she says these words if my dad knew the truth it's about what sexulane stuff she did in high school.

 

[exazubi]

About Rafi there is a conversation in the meal between Kendra and Anna:

a "And to make matters worse, this intern named Rafi that I have on the Harper case is lazy!"

k "Oh yes, you got stuck with a bad one."

a "But why? The Harper case needs someone experienced. Why would Hank let this happen?"

(…)

k "The rumor is that Hank hired your intern quickly before an investigation happened into his hiring practices, because the kid’s a minority. He wasn't the only one swiftly hired either."

k "Hank barely interviewed the kid, and it turns out this intern didn’t even finish school. He has no degree."

a "That’s hard for me to believe."

k "Is it? Or is it totally believable?"

a "Well, I guess it’s totally believable. But ugh! I get stuck with him on this case?"

k "Maybe our dear pig of a leader is trying to test you..."


About a past relation, previous to College, there are many thoghts of Anna about a bad realtionship. My bet is the boss of the shop where she worked. First there is on Monday a thoughts of Anna whan David ask for a blowjob:


a_ "What's with David asking for a blowjob? That hasn't been a topic in a long time. He knows how uncomfortable it makes me."

a_ "*sigh* Maybe it's time I finally get over my bad memory."

a_ "That was years ago... all in the past... just one experience with a person I've erased from my memory. It's time I move on."

a_ "But it's so hard to shake that old memory. The cum tasted so bad, and his penis smelled of sweat. I get nauseous just thinking about it."

a_ "I've always been weird about putting things into my mouth since then, and I have this crazy fear that I'll vomit if I do it again."

a_ "David's been so patient with me. He's never pressured me, not like my former college boyfriends tried to do."


On Tuesday, when Chris asks Anna about the number of lovers she has had, she answer 4 but thinks another thing:


"David's my fourth."

a_ "There's actually been five, but one of them is dead to me and doesn't count."

And on Wednesday in the meal with Kendra, when Kendra is asking Anna about her life and sex experience:

a "The only time I had to myself was when I worked my job at a department store in the mall, but even then, my boss had to report to my father on whether I was behaving."

a_ "If only my father knew the truth..."

(…)

k "Were you a virgin when you started college?"

a "No... I mean, I had... a boyfriend when I was in high school... who I had sex with... many times."

a_ "Who is dead to me now. But I’m not going to talk about that."

a "It wasn’t fulfilling though... it was awkward and uncomfortable."

I've noticed that some of the dialogue in the game is full of Anna's sexual background. It's usually a fine thing. I just think it's a pity that not even one or the other small scene from it is built in as a flashback. That would add a lot to the atmosphere, make Anna even more loveable and sweeten the waiting time for the real content

 

[JorellMartis]

when's the next update?

 

[Chaosguy]

when's the next update?

Month or two. I'm hoping.

 

[JorellMartis]

make it under 2 weeks, and this time want a large one

 

[garret64]

too many cooks spoil the broth

each new character will cost us months of waiting time.

I can do without Stornblabla and rinaldinho in this VN

 

[exazubi]

too many cooks spoil the broth

each new character will cost us months of waiting time.

I can do without Stornblabla and rinaldinho in this VN

I think we've only seen a tiny fraction of the game. And one way or the other, it will take years until the full version, as always. I assume that the script for development has been set for a long time.

 

[garret64]

I think we've only seen a tiny fraction of the game. And one way or the other, it will take years until the full version, as always. I assume that the script for development has been set for a long time.

This is exactly what I would avoid if I were the dev.

Nobody needs an AGOT disaster again.

I don't think the story is finished, why else would the dev start the polls?

 

[exazubi]

This is exactly what I would avoid if I were the dev.

Nobody needs an AGOT disaster again.

I don't think the story is finished, why else would the dev start the polls?

First of all, this game is based on an erotic novel. This has been mentioned several times here. And i am a private author myself. This should be published one day, next to my real job. This will take many years. This may be something different than a game, but the effort is similar. You have no idea how much work goes into such a complex work. And the way the dialogues are written in this game is not possible without preparatory work. There definitely is a script. Never in life are the routes
written spontaneously.

 

[Puma1978]

I think we've only seen a tiny fraction of the game. And one way or the other, it will take years until the full version, as always. I assume that the script for development has been set for a long time.

And dont forget to mention that the script will never contain full nudity or close up penetration to show..its a softcore fake porno....so no need to wait until finished.
Better look out for games like A Life worth living, Lost in Paradise, Babysitters, A Couples Duet, Special Request, The Motel, Because I Love Her, My Wife's a Star, Wifey's Dilemma, Exciting Games, TACOS, Happy marriage, Culture Shock etc...that are real adult games. This one here deserves the "censored" tag.

 

[TeamEquipe]

And dont forget to mention that the script will never contain full nudity or close up penetration to show..its a softcore fake porno....so no need to wait until finished.
Better look out for games like A Life worth living, Lost in Paradise, Babysitters, A Couples Duet, Special Request, The Motel, Because I Love Her, My Wife's a Star, Wifey's Dilemma, Exciting Games, TACOS, Happy marriage, Culture Shock etc...that are real adult games. This one here deserves the "censored" tag.

How do you know the script will never contain full nudity etc?
Are you hot-wired into the Developer's mind?
Do you have exact knowledge of what is to come?

No - of course you don't. No-one does except Mr Palmer.

Your list contains games I follow too. This one is slightly different to those.

And don't forget we are in a replay of WEEK 1 so there is much more content to come and lots of threads to develop.
But if you've aready made your mind up then why bother following it.

 

[Puma1978]

How do you know the script will never contain full nudity etc?
Are you hot-wired into the Developer's mind?
Do you have exact knowledge of what is to come?

No - of course you don't. No-one does except Mr Palmer.

Your list contains games I follow too. This one is slightly different to those.

And don't forget we are in a replay of WEEK 1 so there is much more content to come and lots of threads to develop.
But if you've aready made your mind up then why bother following it.

Thats obvious, just look how eager Dev is to not show any nudity until now, the first short sex scenes perspective, then the clothed masturbation and finaly how Chris Penis was always covered in the final updates shower scene...i bet we even never see naked boobs in this game. Its not only about sex but in real adult games we would have seen already some nudity in bedroom or shower to initiate some sort of slow burn.
I asume Dev comes from a country where it is forbidden or so...like the japanese with pixel orgy...
Its good written and obviousley dev is a great artist with renders and taste, but since there is even no vaginal sex or blowjob tag i am pretty sure this VN is practically censored.

 

[Ass Fan]

Mr. Garrett Stormberg -nickname old fox should now be skinny

I'm hoping that's the case like Darren's body shape

I've noticed that some of the dialogue in the game is full of Anna's sexual background. It's usually a fine thing. I just think it's a pity that not even one or the other small scene from it is built in as a flashback. That would add a lot to the atmosphere, make Anna even more loveable and sweeten the waiting time for the real content

Yes, we need a flashback to her college days at least some important parts. And with the ex-boyfriends I also know she told a little bit about it but it would be cool to see how it happened in Part:1 of her remembering the dinner she had with Hank, I even think it would add more emotion to the game than we already have.

 

[TeamEquipe]

Thats obvious, just look how eager Dev is to not show any nudity until now, the first short sex scenes perspective, then the clothed masturbation and finaly how Chris Penis was always covered in the final updates shower scene...i bet we even never see naked boobs in this game. Its not only about sex but in real adult games we would have seen already some nudity in bedroom or shower to initiate some sort of slow burn.
I asume Dev comes from a country where it is forbidden or so...like the japanese with pixel orgy...
Its good written and obviousley dev is a great artist with renders and taste, but since there is even no vaginal sex or blowjob tag i am pretty sure this VN is practically censored.

Yeah, Chris' penis is WELL covered

 

[Puma1978]

Yeah, Chris' penis is WELL covered

...i think i really have a censored version then...

 

[TeamEquipe]

...i think i really have a censored version then...

Beginning to think you've not even played it tbh

 

[Puma1978]

Beginning to think you've not even played it tbh

...not this update...but its sad that the first nude in game is a male..lets see what happns 3 updates later..

 

[Ass Fan]

Thats obvious, just look how eager Dev is to not show any nudity until now, the first short sex scenes perspective, then the clothed masturbation and finaly how Chris Penis was always covered in the final updates shower scene...i bet we even never see naked boobs in this game. Its not only about sex but in real adult games we would have seen already some nudity in bedroom or shower to initiate some sort of slow burn.
I asume Dev comes from a country where it is forbidden or so...like the japanese with pixel orgy...
Its good written and obviousley dev is a great artist with renders and taste, but since there is even no vaginal sex or blowjob tag i am pretty sure this VN is practically censored.

I don't know if you looked at the homepage but the sexual stuff will only be possible in CH3 right now about Dev not showing us Anna naked yet or the scene of her masturbating it's because he doesn't want to spoil anything interesting that we'll have later on I think. I believe that Mr Palmer has his reasons for not showing her naked until now.