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I think it escalated too quickly, it would be fine without the whole husband set-up thingy, the wife is already horny , the husband did some bad stuff with the company and not telling her about, let him do one more stupid thing but it did not need to be a set up. Make the wife disappointed in a few more instances and increase the flirting by outside parties to make her want to take the next step voluntarily instead of this revenge fuck scenario that we have now. Granted it is heartbreaking for the husband in the current set up but i don't like the whole psychotic villain in the background thing
 

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I think it escalated too quickly, it would be fine without the whole husband set-up thingy, the wife is already horny , the husband did some bad stuff with the company and not telling her about, let him do one more stupid thing but it did not need to be a set up. Make the wife disappointed in a few more instances and increase the flirting by outside parties to make her want to take the next step voluntarily instead of this revenge fuck scenario that we have now. Granted it is heartbreaking for the husband in the current set up but i don't like the whole psychotic villain in the background thing
Unfortunately, his being set up by his psychotic ex is the entire plot. It is the secret sauce that makes all the different story branches possible.
 
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I was wondering, since Anne doesn’t want to listen to David’s explanation of what’s been going on about being sabotaged, does he have good or trusting relationship enough with Anna’s mother to explain to her what he’s trying to tell Anne, to see if she can tell her for him & if she trusts him enough maybe she invites him to stay at her place until he can go back if Anne lets him back
 

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I think it escalated too quickly, it would be fine without the whole husband set-up thingy, the wife is already horny , the husband did some bad stuff with the company and not telling her about, let him do one more stupid thing but it did not need to be a set up. Make the wife disappointed in a few more instances and increase the flirting by outside parties to make her want to take the next step voluntarily instead of this revenge fuck scenario that we have now. Granted it is heartbreaking for the husband in the current set up but i don't like the whole psychotic villain in the background thing
It wasn't the husband who did bad things in the company, it was David's father-in-law who did bad things in the company.
 

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I was wondering, since Anne doesn’t want to listen to David’s explanation of what’s been going on about being sabotaged, does he have good or trusting relationship enough with Anna’s mother to explain to her what he’s trying to tell Anne, to see if she can tell her for him & if she trusts him enough maybe she invites him to stay at her place until he can go back if Anne lets him back
Only that should be at the end of Ch2 and the beginning of Ch3
 
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It wasn't the husband who did bad things in the company, it was David's father-in-law who did bad things in the company.
Yes, but he telling/not telling the wife about was a nice first steppingstone to get the wife disappointed in the husband. If you add some more of the sort you could have a quite disgruntled wife, add that too all the attention she gets from other men, her hornyness and you soon have a nice believable cheating (in porn game terms) story. no need for psychopaths' and elaborate plots.
 
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When is next update coming?
We (gold patreons) got his answers to Q&A today, and next update in november, a small update where we start Monday for Anna... But he also said 1-3 months for updates, but so lets see, then we are into December and we get holidays, new years hangovers for 20days, so a complete part2 (Anna's week) could be march 2023, but nobody knows other than Mr. Palmer, he makes this game alone tho, so we need to stay cool..... So theres a long way to go. Maybe the Q&A will be public at some time, there were some very good questions...
 

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We (gold patreons) got his answers to Q&A today, and next update in november, a small update where we start Monday for Anna... But he also said 1-3 months for updates, but so lets see, then we are into December and we get holidays, new years hangovers for 20days, so a complete part2 (Anna's week) could be march 2023, but nobody knows other than Mr. Palmer, he makes this game alone tho, so we need to stay cool..... So theres a long way to go. Maybe the Q&A will be public at some time, there were some very good questions...
Understand you can't put them here?
 
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