fapzoner69018
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Hnstly as I've said many times it's very rare that a scene involving old farts would turn out to be good in my opinion...____________________________________++++++++++++++++++++++____________________________________
It's a good idea in general
However... this game relies on situations, timing, and progression... Just having a nipple nibble and breaking out the cookies to go with the milk as an event doesn't fit the overall themes and plots of the game. Just meaning there has to be some context to the that event. The problem of making that work is one of Anna's character/backgrounds and that of Marvin. Anna comes from a white-collar world, Marvin blue. And there is the age difference as well as education.
One way to make that kind of scene work is for Marvin being willing to show Anna part lower class society and Anna agrees. Sure, the old trope of going bowling maybe... or going to play pool in a rough neighborhood. In such a setting a little history could be developed maybe like Anna finds out Marvin out of high school joined the navy (giving Anna a little more respect for Marvin). Maybe Anna gets a little reliving of her earliest college days when her and her friends would go to "scary" bars and what not...
The main problem between Anna and Marvin now is an in balance of power. Unless somehow Anna finds it thrilling that a dirty old man is hitting on her (yes... it's a thing), there needs to be a path to where there can be any kind of Anna/Marvin relationship
Cuz they're not sexually appealing and they're ugly af and stinky nd i dnt care what social background he might have aside from using it to make the story have some eroticism around the developing kinks of characters...
Thank god he didn't use goro as the main old fart , I hate that stinking bald monkey with hairy thighs and ass euughhh...
If mp made Marvin have a decent sized cock maybe i would've tolerated it (even though it suits his personality to have a smoll pepe xd), at least he would've added some masculinity when trying to seduce anna..
But the whole act of getting pity from her to let him grope her is weird and surprisingly it turned out to be quite good in the bar scene for some reason.. we'll see how it will turn out in this update ig..
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