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It's a good idea in general

However... this game relies on situations, timing, and progression... Just having a nipple nibble and breaking out the cookies to go with the milk as an event doesn't fit the overall themes and plots of the game. Just meaning there has to be some context to the that event. The problem of making that work is one of Anna's character/backgrounds and that of Marvin. Anna comes from a white-collar world, Marvin blue. And there is the age difference as well as education.

One way to make that kind of scene work is for Marvin being willing to show Anna part lower class society and Anna agrees. Sure, the old trope of going bowling maybe... or going to play pool in a rough neighborhood. In such a setting a little history could be developed maybe like Anna finds out Marvin out of high school joined the navy (giving Anna a little more respect for Marvin). Maybe Anna gets a little reliving of her earliest college days when her and her friends would go to "scary" bars and what not...

The main problem between Anna and Marvin now is an in balance of power. Unless somehow Anna finds it thrilling that a dirty old man is hitting on her (yes... it's a thing), there needs to be a path to where there can be any kind of Anna/Marvin relationship
Hnstly as I've said many times it's very rare that a scene involving old farts would turn out to be good in my opinion...


Cuz they're not sexually appealing and they're ugly af and stinky nd i dnt care what social background he might have aside from using it to make the story have some eroticism around the developing kinks of characters...

Thank god he didn't use goro as the main old fart , I hate that stinking bald monkey with hairy thighs and ass euughhh...

If mp made Marvin have a decent sized cock maybe i would've tolerated it (even though it suits his personality to have a smoll pepe xd), at least he would've added some masculinity when trying to seduce anna..

But the whole act of getting pity from her to let him grope her is weird and surprisingly it turned out to be quite good in the bar scene for some reason.. we'll see how it will turn out in this update ig..
 
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Hnstly as I've said many times it's very rare that a scene involving old farts would turn out to be good in my opinion...


Cuz they're not sexually appealing and they're ugly af and stinky nd i dnt care what social background he might have aside from using it to make the story have some eroticism around the developing kinks of characters...

Thank god he didn't use goro as the main old fart , I hate that stinking bald monkey with hairy thighs and ass euughhh...

If mp made Marvin have a decent sized cock maybe i would've tolerated it (even though it suits his personality to have a smoll pepe xd), at least he would've added some masculinity when trying to seduce anna..

But the whole act of getting pity from her to let him grope her is weird and surprisingly it turned out to be quite good in the bar scene for some reason.. we'll see how it will turn out in this update ig..
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Honestly as I've said many times it's very rare that a scene involving old farts would turn out to be good in my opinion...On the surface that statement is too true. It has to be a special case by case. Now Hank has a plausible path just because he's her boss and basically "grooming" her more training her to replace him some day. Hank's case is one of position and power... but there are other factors. The whole Hank/Anna path has so many ways it can go:

A) Gross path where a helpless feeling Anna feels she has to endure it
B) Reluctant path where Anna doesn't want Hank's attentions, but her body and desire betrays her
C) Emotional mess path because Anna has so many daddy issues, too easily aroused that she is confused about it all
D) Any of the above or... etc.



Cuz they're not sexually appealing and they're ugly af and stinky nd i dnt care what social background he might have aside from using it to make the story have some eroticism around the developing kinks of characters... I want to keep world politics totally out of F95 commentary, but I think you and I can point to certain real world case studies;)

Thank god he didn't use goro as the main old fart , I hate that stinking bald monkey with hairy thighs and ass euughhh... A while ago I just knew of "Christine Watson", but have done a compare and contrast with AMP... Don't get me started with "Christine Watson"... This is AMP's page. But it's not just Goro is an old fart that's the issue, it's THE EVERY VN game tropes, blue balling techniques, plot-character structure. As a wanton woman with no inhabitations Christine works because that how she was made--her character works; just the situations and potential lovers are a mess like 90% of games out there

If mp made Marvin have a decent sized cock maybe i would've tolerated it (even though it suits his personality to have a smoll pepe xd), at least he would've added some masculinity when trying to seduce anna.. cock size in VN games are a trope in themselves. Personally, if he was just normal and not go down that rabbit hole to begin with.... now I forget is David normal sized? Doesn't matter... it's already part of the game

But the whole act of getting pity from her to let him grope her is weird and surprisingly it turned out to be quite good in the bar scene for some reason.. we'll see how it will turn out in this update ig.. The bar scene works but leaves a person wonder why. At the time I wrote it off as Anna being caught up in the moment because it was thrilling and naughty (and mostly harmless). What made it work was Anna's cleavage tease. The swimming pool scene could have been better with less whining and pleading with an aggressive Marvin just not taking a no for an answer and make his move while telling Anna just how much a goddess she is

Every game, story, plot isn't totally perfect... if it was then there would be once a year releases. I can't think of a better game out there then AMP
 
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The old fish has nothing to offer Anna. She's as poor as a church mouse. He's poor, he doesn't have millions in his bank account. He has a small dick:eek::ROFLMAO:.Besides, Anna had known the old fish before and thought him a weirdo. She avoided him like the plague. When the maniac stubbornly tried to invite her to dinner, she politely declined. Anna treats the old fish like a toy that Kendra forced into her hand + Fetish for submitting to old geezers. . Then Anna gets bored and throws the toy old fish in the corner. It's a perfect comparison to those 90s horror movies where a young girl has a nice old, slightly weird, retarded neighbor in her neighborhood. Sometimes she's nice to him, he imagines she'll marry him. Or to humiliate him for fun, she pretends to be nice to him. And then we have a bloody revenge on the girl and everyone involved in this conspiracy.
 
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It's a good idea in general

However... this game relies on situations, timing, and progression... Just having a nipple nibble and breaking out the cookies to go with the milk as an event doesn't fit the overall themes and plots of the game. Just meaning there has to be some context to the that event. The problem of making that work is one of Anna's character/backgrounds and that of Marvin. Anna comes from a white-collar world, Marvin blue. And there is the age difference as well as education.

One way to make that kind of scene work is for Marvin being willing to show Anna part lower class society and Anna agrees. Sure, the old trope of going bowling maybe... or going to play pool in a rough neighborhood. In such a setting a little history could be developed maybe like Anna finds out Marvin out of high school joined the navy (giving Anna a little more respect for Marvin). Maybe Anna gets a little reliving of her earliest college days when her and her friends would go to "scary" bars and what not...

The main problem between Anna and Marvin now is an in balance of power. Unless somehow Anna finds it thrilling that a dirty old man is hitting on her (yes... it's a thing), there needs to be a path to where there can be any kind of Anna/Marvin relationship
Here, the real one is marvin's story, I think mp was inspired to make his background in insipid stories, reluctantly, for someone of such an age as marvin, for example; removing the one of being a vain old man, or sex offender, he could have Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder, Narcissistic, Antisocial Behavior, that is to say that he appears to be a nice person when he is not, that would be a key piece for a narrative for Marvin, besides increasing him from a few years, about 70 years would be the right one.
 
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Hnstly as I've said many times it's very rare that a scene involving old farts would turn out to be good in my opinion...


Cuz they're not sexually appealing and they're ugly af and stinky nd i dnt care what social background he might have aside from using it to make the story have some eroticism around the developing kinks of characters...

Thank god he didn't use goro as the main old fart , I hate that stinking bald monkey with hairy thighs and ass euughhh...

If mp made Marvin have a decent sized cock maybe i would've tolerated it (even though it suits his personality to have a smoll pepe xd), at least he would've added some masculinity when trying to seduce anna..

But the whole act of getting pity from her to let him grope her is weird and surprisingly it turned out to be quite good in the bar scene for some reason.. we'll see how it will turn out in this update ig..
You do realize that you're not the one that's gona be fucking Marvin right?? Hahaha.
Always makes me laugh when I hear people say no old men and they want a good looking guy to be with in the game lol. Who cares what the guy looks like! As long as the scene is well written and we get good action.

Sounds like some people take the female protagonist way too seriously. News flash - its not you! Hey maybe all these players against the old guys and hobos want to be the girl, so they can see themselves with the hunky dude to fuck lol. I dont know....
 

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Here, the real one is marvin's story, I think mp was inspired to make his background in insipid stories, reluctantly, for someone of such an age as marvin, for example; removing the one of being a vain old man, or sex offender, he could have Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder, Narcissistic, Antisocial Behavior, that is to say that he appears to be a nice person when he is not, that would be a key piece for a narrative for Marvin, besides increasing him from a few years, about 70 years would be the right one.
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That certainly is another way to make a Marvin

How I see Marvin currently as a hollow failed man lacking empathy.

Now, there are a few people who age well and others who don't... Marvin is in the latter category. It doesn't so much have to be about looks, but it helps. I suspect Marvin is the same person as when he was in his prime (shallow). But there still is plenty of room in the story to evolve Marvin based on his current characteristics, behavior patterns, and character build and still keep Marvin, Marvin. There is one trait that bests describe Marvin is he is treacherous. So however you evolve his character, Marvin will in the end serve his own ends.

All that means Marvin could ally with Anna, show compassion, and play into whatever Anna wants (like teasing him) or do her favors so long as he figures he'll get something out of it. He'll be loyal only as far as he sees he's getting something out of it. The other main trait that describes Marvin is he's not very tactical or strategic nor has his life experiences taught him how to read people. Otherwise, he should pick up on Anna's clues and exploit them.

For now, Marvin has allied with Kendra because that gets him what he wants... but Marvin needs to realize he has nothing to really offer Anna and should realize Kendra has no real way to deliver what he wants. I doubt Kendra even takes serious that Marvin would have a chance with Anna. At least he ought to realize he's outclassed with a woman like Anna because likely Marvin has throughout his life been shot down by such women. So the best plan Marvin can do is play Kendra against Anna because he's onto Kendra and would know Anna is being blindsided by Kendra... and play Anna against Kendra to score points with Anna {doesn't mean Marvin would tell Anna what Kendra is up to but wait for openings and opportunities that wins points with Anna at the expense of Kendra's Plans).

Thing to remember is I doubt Marvin wants to share Anna with anyone in the office and wants just a little more than a cheap thrill--he can find and pay for that on the streets.

All that is left is for the story to unfold where Anna becomes her own worst enemy when it comes to Marvin-- that quirky little thing that allows herself to want to tease Marvin and get a cheap thrill out of goading Marvin
 

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as much as i'd love to,goodluck with that,we can't even see anna's asshole after two years.it'll definitely abandoned before we can even see tank rekt that sweet asshole.
Especially the situation currently quite fluid with all the tariff and craps. I can smell the fluid liquid is coming like tsunami.
 

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You do realize that you're not the one that's gona be fucking Marvin right?? Hahaha.
Always makes me laugh when I hear people say no old men and they want a good looking guy to be with in the game lol. Who cares what the guy looks like! As long as the scene is well written and we get good action.

Sounds like some people take the female protagonist way too seriously. News flash - its not you! Hey maybe all these players against the old guys and hobos want to be the girl, so they can see themselves with the hunky dude to fuck lol. I dont know....
That is an amusing take and has crossed my mind on occasion. Freud would have a field day with it. I do not care very much who rails her, just so it is a good scene with plenty of build up and a great payoff. Not just a 10 second, one position looping animation. Now, to provide another take - I think some are offended by Marvin (and hobos) because they self-identify with whoever they think is going to get some. So, they don’t want to view themselves as Marvin or a fat guy. It ruins their immersion I am guessing…or they themselves don’t want to be stuffed by an old dude. Lol
 
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