NovaBlast@99
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- Mar 25, 2018
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Agreed. There is no consistency in the writing of female characters. After each few chapters they take a 180° turn. That second girl Minha's character is a complete joke. During the beginning, she was all over the MC and after one fuck session with antagonist she completely forgets about MC and falls for the Antagonist lol. And then now she again wants to be back with the MC. Good thing the MC rejected her coldly in the recent chapter.be warn, this follows the whole story (current chapter) so spoilers:
mx wife have the biggest personality change throughout the story, she felt guilty when the mc found out about her affair, yet she still pursued the antagonist and made a plan to overthrow the new love interest and be able to return to her husband. when that happen what did she do? stay with the antagonist. Found out she was pregnant and had plenty of time to tell her husband, what did she do? stay with the antagonist and not tell him until she felt she dislike her poor lifestyle, and that baby might not be the mc baby. I can go on, but those are the ones that stand out the most about her.
the ex-girlfriend (artist favorite hence the cover art), Her initial introduction was supposed to be that she was the female version of the antagonist, and seemed hesitant about pursuing a romantic relationship with the mc, when the mc found out about her "affair," she tried to explain herself instead of moving on, and decided to execute order 66 on the antagonist, just to fall over the antagonist and completely forget about her plan and even had a competition with the mc and his girl. The best part of it, she didn't like sharing the mc with other woman, yet she is fully aware that the antagonist is sleeping with others and tries to get herself pregnant so she can baby trap him (it is unclear if the antagonist hada a vasectomy)You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
The boss lady. she is a swinger through and through, was fucking other man, and was/is jealous of the mc when he was with the ex-girlfriend/current girlfriend even tho she have other side piece too. The funniest thing I still don't comprehend is how did she get the antagonist phone number, it was never established she just magically have it and was able to contact him. Yes, she was willing to throw her marriage for the mc, but she is throwing her company to keep the antagonist working for her and is upset that the man she wanted to see suffer is willing to resign the company, while her husband is letting her the destroy the company HE built for some dick.
The current girl, is honestly a hit or miss, depending on how the story goes she may or may not get taken away, the second writer gave the impression that she was going to be taken away, but I don't know what the third artist will do.
The antagonist, there is not much I can say besides magic sun dick (hence his blonde hair). I do can say that his character doesn't really have a reason to stay this long in the story (just my opinion), my reason is that he likes causing friction in couples hence the reason he said that the mc and his wife downfall was boring. Onto that point, he could just left and search for another couple to cause trouble, but he didn't. There is also the fact that the mc and the antagonist didn't know each other prior their first meeting at the pool, so what did the antagonist had for the mc? gay feelings lol? since he keeps comparing himself to the mc when sleeps with the other girls and as I say on my previous comment trying to one up him. The best part is that he might not had a vasectomy
The protagonist wasn't written well either, he went from I'm a chad I can even bang your mom, to I'm happy with my marriage, to now that I'm divorced I can do whatever I want and be a chad again but I am depressed, to I'm really depressed, to I need to move on
I don't think I've seen so much inconsistency in a story, maybe is just me and the people that read it that may see it as incosistency, and you may be right.
The boss lady's character is also stupid. She gets jealous because the MC was fucking her current girlfriend because she wanted him to only be with her while she has side pieces. She's a bigger hypocrite than Laura in some routes of APBLU. And now the boss lady doesn't have any issues with a Playboy like Douche antagonist who's involved with other woman. Great writing there !!! :/
And the ex wife...ughhh, the less said about that dumb character, the better. In the latest chapter she says the antagonist it's her first time having anal while she had anal with him in the earlier chapters :/ Another inconsistency.Funny thing is all three wants to be back with MC again but forgets about it once the antagonist gives them the D.
I think all this 180° turn and plot inconsistency is because of different writers being involved in the story. The past few chapters have only been sex scenes of antagonist with Ex wife, second girl, boss lady, MC with his current gf, rinse, repeat with story not moving ahead in any positive manner. With the new writer, there is a hope of redemption for MC and the story moving forward. Took him late but he has stopped giving fucks to them. With how clueless the antagonist is about work related stuffs unlike Luca in this game, the boss lady is gonna regret hiring him which is already hinted in the story now. This is either setting up to be the biggest redemption arc in pornhwa or another trash bait foe the readers. Let's see. Btw, i still don't understand why the antagonist is after the MC? Was there any backstory I missed or was it never mentioned?