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latex lvr

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I really wish in games like this if they were going to have it be 99% story/dialog that the dialog not be so badly broken as far as sentence structure and what not. If you aren't going to care if its understandable then don't have so damn much of it. The game looked promising until I started reading the boring, broken and way to much dialog.
If you are referring to the poor translation of masculine and feminine terms then that will be sorted for the next update
 

bandyta80

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I really wish in games like this if they were going to have it be 99% story/dialog that the dialog not be so badly broken as far as sentence structure and what not. If you aren't going to care if its understandable then don't have so damn much of it. The game looked promising until I started reading the boring, broken and way to much dialog.
you want 99% of the dialogue but there's too much dialogue?

Can you please explain how to write the dialog correctly
 
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TheUberstuff

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you want 99% of the dialogue but there's too much dialogue?

Can you please explain how to write the dialog correctly
Can you please learn to read? Where did I ever say I WANTED 99% dialogue, I said IF games are going to be 99% dialogue. My GAWD people are lazy.
 
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atrebor68

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nice to read that dev have friends as proof reader, but if it will be abandoned it depends mostly on dev/s. if they are doing it for money or for making game. honestly if money is reason here, than they choiced bad tags....if they like making game than game will be completed even without much patrons....
my 2 cents absolutely unsolicited: the adult games that earn most per month are the longest-lived ones, where players become attached and new players try the game, just because it is still in development. Abandoning the development of a title after a short time is not a smart move. If a dev needs help for to go on, minimum for a year, I am sure that some collaboration (even only economic) is always available.
 

DIRTY FILTHY Animal

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Too much dialogue in this game, really? I’ve played bunch of games that have too much diialogue to the point where your just skipping through cause you don’t care about it and just want to get to something interesting, not the case with this game.
So if there other game is shutdown by Patreon police, what do you recommend they do with their game genius?
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TheUberstuff

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Too much dialogue in this game, really? I’ve played bunch of games that have too much diialogue to the point where your just skipping through cause you don’t care about it and just want to get to something interesting, not the case with this game.
So if there other game is shutdown by Patreon police, what do you recommend they do with their game genius?
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Clearly is the case with this game, I was looking for the skip button within 5 minutes because the dialog was so bad, and boring. I still continued to give it a try but man you have to give people a reason to play your game. This dev clearly does not know how to do that.
 

Lucrezia&Augusto

StefStory
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Dec 25, 2019
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Clearly is the case with this game, I was looking for the skip button within 5 minutes because the dialog was so bad, and boring. I still continued to give it a try but man you have to give people a reason to play your game. This dev clearly does not know how to do that.
Hi guys, pleasing everyone is difficult.
In fact, I am also of your opinion too many unnecessary dialogues are boring.
These dialogues in jargon are to paste the plot of the game.
So there are people who want to see the everyday life of the characters just to get attached to them.
Or there are people like you and me who just want to see erotic dialogues that can make my penis get hard instantly.

Sometimes we devs make different decisions based on market demand and this sometimes makes us wrong.
And I think my wife also made the same mistake I made with SCANDAL.
Another important thing to keep in mind is the originality of the DEV... That is, I am Italian and so I may have different tastes and manners from another person living in another country.
Then for the record, given my experience, I can say that the market of 3D games is in the hands of the companies that are the real and only ones earning money.

Small devs like me and many others always start because they want to show what they have inside.
Of course, this entails great sacrifices and costs, so it is legitimate for a dev to always hope that his game will do well.
The games that do well on this site we know perfectly well and it is in the nature of people to match those who have done well.
And that's an ugly thing to say, but it's a great thing because it puts us all in competition to do better and more.
There are people who will succeed and others who will not.

Stefano.
 

Lucrezia&Augusto

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my 2 cents absolutely unsolicited: the adult games that earn most per month are the longest-lived ones, where players become attached and new players try the game, just because it is still in development. Abandoning the development of a title after a short time is not a smart move. If a dev needs help for to go on, minimum for a year, I am sure that some collaboration (even only economic) is always available.
Your pennies are more than appreciated in fact I have found great friends on this site.
Dirty Animal
latex lvr
angels mazzon
ant007
Darax
and many others.

You have to bear in mind that behind your monitor there is a physical person with their own strengths and weaknesses and, above all, their own ecominical and family problems.
I always hear about my two abandoned games but no one has told me:
FUCK YOU'RE STILL HERE. AHAHAH
It's not important how many times you fall in life, what's important is that you always try to get back up.
It's not a flaw to have flaws what's important is to never give up on your dream.
(A hug to grandpa lele, a Sicilian man I met on this site, who lost his dream. Rest in peace my friend).
 

atrebor68

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Your pennies are more than appreciated in fact I have found great friends on this site.
Dirty Animal
latex lvr
angels mazzon
ant007
Darax
and many others.

You have to bear in mind that behind your monitor there is a physical person with their own strengths and weaknesses and, above all, their own ecominical and family problems.
I always hear about my two abandoned games but no one has told me:
FUCK YOU'RE STILL HERE. AHAHAH
It's not important how many times you fall in life, what's important is that you always try to get back up.
It's not a flaw to have flaws what's important is to never give up on your dream.
(A hug to grandpa lele, a Sicilian man I met on this site, who lost his dream. Rest in peace my friend).
Good mindset. How I described ago, making an adult game is a nightmare (like to drive in A8 every fuking morning, cazzo :ROFLMAO: ). I think that to create a very good product only one person at some point is no longer enough, unless he is a Finnish nerd who lives alone in the snow for seven months a year. If then the dev is also married, the homeworks are double and the time is half. If one day you will want to create a sort of "team" to share the work for the game, let me a whistle.
 
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sphynks80

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I'm Italian here. This new game is certainly promising. A moot point may be the dizzying speed with which the mother-child dynamic proceeds. The game has just begun and the little boy is already groping her butt and, moreover, the mother is not wearing panties. Of course, the opposite example, A Wife and Mother, can equally arouse discontent because the excessive anticipation of hot events is somewhat frustrating. A happy medium might be the right balance point for this story. Ok, now Alessio has touched her well. It's up to her to recover some resilience and rationality and calm him down by slowing the pace of his advances. However, this certainly does not prevent her (for Sandra, I mean) from developing a feeling of attraction and complicity towards Alessio, only diluted in a reasonable amount of time. Otherwise between two updates we'll'find them already in bed. That would be a bit premature. Another recommendation I would like to make to the developers is to moderate the proliferation of characters to a reasonable limit, otherwise the possible paths and combinations become too many and slow down the course of the story.
 

Lucrezia&Augusto

StefStory
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Hi guys, I didn't think I had a troll for a wife.
Yesterday with a poll he practically wiped out three years of hard work ahahahah
He wiped me out as Dev with a simple poll.
Please go vote for me please ahahahahah
This makes me feel bad. :LOL:
 

rudy007

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Hi guys, I didn't think I had a troll for a wife.
Yesterday with a poll he practically wiped out three years of hard work ahahahah
He wiped me out as Dev with a simple poll.
Please go vote for me please ahahahahah
This makes me feel bad. :LOL:
Don't worry, She will in exchange do something nice for you. Probably. If she don't forget about it...
 
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Lucrezia&Augusto

StefStory
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nah i promised that i will not be posting here, but when u mentioned me.....

u r definitely picturing yourself as seriouse developers good work.
You promised not to write, it is true, but you keep following my page and that makes me happy, it means there is something in me that attracts you.
Do you think that one day we will be able to converse as two friends?
Or do you have something personal with me?
Or are you one of those who contacted me on Discord a while ago?
No, how stupid of me, you are not one of those people.
Yet I find it hard not to think of you as a troll and do you know why?
You have been on F95 since August 2022 That is six months ago.
And with all the great games on this site you are here wasting your time with me....

Sorry maybe it's me thinking wrong.
I remember that the first few months that I signed up on this website I kept downloading games at will and my penis had turned as red as a pepper by dint of touching myself.

So if you have constructive criticism or a fair and honest opinion I can accept it, if not I will always think you are a troll.
 

kokos94

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You promised not to write, it is true, but you keep following my page and that makes me happy, it means there is something in me that attracts you.
Do you think that one day we will be able to converse as two friends?
Or do you have something personal with me?
Or are you one of those who contacted me on Discord a while ago?
No, how stupid of me, you are not one of those people.
Yet I find it hard not to think of you as a troll and do you know why?
You have been on F95 since August 2022 That is six months ago.
And with all the great games on this site you are here wasting your time with me....

Sorry maybe it's me thinking wrong.
I remember that the first few months that I signed up on this website I kept downloading games at will and my penis had turned as red as a pepper by dint of touching myself.

So if you have constructive criticism or a fair and honest opinion I can accept it, if not I will always think you are a troll.
man/or woman (idk who is using this acc right now :D )

i dont take u as enemy nor the friend....yep i am folowing more threads (simply cause curiosity- maybe there is realy something in u)

i did not even know that u have discord :D (silly u)

u can trust me that i am here for more than august 2022 :D (had some problems with bad uncle few years before :D )

i dont know what exactly u take as constructive critisim.... ok i am troll and u can continue trying to do what u r doing with new found friends...

btw most ppl came here for story/porn (mostly steal it) not to see couple "comedy" but some can like it (your few new found friends for example)

troll Out
 
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3.20 star(s) 26 Votes