VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Series Of Fortunate Events [v0.8] [Agnaricson]

[Agnaricson]

DAMN, nice start, right down to business!.
I find both Tina and the Mom (specially her face) very HOT.. my only "complain" is that Mom's boobs are too big. but well, I can deal with that eventually!

Boobs too big = check .Thanks for the feedback!

 

[david123]

Short, simple, and straight to the action - I love it! The animations are fantastic!

 

[david123]

Boobs too big = check .Thanks for the feedback!

Plez dont make them smaller! I think they are fine the way they are plus this is how you envisioned the mom to be so go with it.

 

[jaytee01]

Good game thanks. I agree mums boobs too big but also can get used to them.
Looking forward to heaps more content....:FeelsGoodMan:

 

[Catares]

Yep i agree with david123 the Boobs are awesome please leave them it's fit for character or do whatever you want. First of all i love your game, ofcourse sex scene was to quick or not? In my opinion little bit, but it depends of mother feelings. Models are really good in my opinion, story not much but i want to see more. If you consider start patreon you can be sure i will pledge, it's really good start in my opinion. Keep doing with your idea of the game. I cannot wait to meet autnie and the other's to see them corrupting more and more. I will be glad to see more characters with smaller, bigger boobs, diffrent height etc. Aunt, cousine, old friends and other MILF's. It was short cause it's demo but i see potencial here, I cannot wait to see more, if you want more feedback or help write here or something . Good job, keep up great work

PS: Sorry for bad english

 

[William Da Bob]

Got a chance to play it. For a first effort, very nice!

So here's my feedback.

What I liked:

• The fourth-wall-breaking in the prologue.
• Your sense of humor
• The dialog was well written and the characters' behavior was fairly believable, especially the GF and the MC.

One thing threw me:

• The mother's behavior is just bizarre. It was just like BAM out of left field with on justification of her motivation or backstory or anything to explain such atypical behavior. It killed my suspension of disbelief and made the game go from 'story' to 'senseless porn.'

Things I didn't like:

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[William Da Bob]

She just gets reeeally horny when she sees his schlong. Might fix this part later on. Thanks for the feedback!

This is your game, but I've got to tell you, this is how typical male arousal response works. There are always unusual cases, but most women's libido doesn't work this way, even though it's a common porn mistake.

I could see a realistic woman who was already highly aroused getting interested, but seeing that isn't what usually kicks off the process, or most guys would just all wear trenchcoats and skip all the romance bother.

 

[Popoff]

Love the game don't listen to anyone complaining about huge breasts Hopefully the next version will include aunt with huge breasts also Great work

 

[jaytee01]

Love the game don't listen to anyone complaining about huge breasts Hopefully the next version will include aunt with huge breasts also Great work

I wasn't complaining just expressing an opinion. I like the game and look forward to an early update with more content...

 

[HornyYoshi]

Looks promising + like the art style. Any chance for a mac version in the future? :biggrin:

 

[RedPyrate]

I've played Games that took weeks that were not as much Fun as this. Just got straight to the point with no grinding. Character art was good. This is a winner.
REDPYRATE

 

[Armorer]

ok good start but very little content. Yes the breast physics was kinda funny... maybe dial the boob sizer down a little? The collision math was causing trouble it looks like. Eagerly awaiting the next couple of versions.

 

[General F. Apper]

those boobs were ginormous and when they were bouncing like balloons they literally looked like balloons.. reduce their size.

 

[HornyYoshi]

I'll send you the link for the mac version a bit later today, mate!

Can you send me the link for mac as well plz?

 

[perseus420]

Love it. don't make boobs too much smaller (if at all ,please) they fit well with story. Good opening scene. Look forward to more.

 

[Satorius]

Look nice. Will download the game later

 

[berserker698]

very promising bro,it's a good start and art style

 

[AGoodDay2Die]

The mom's airbags are either just too damn big or she's planning to cushion the next Mars lander... The MC not only looks like a girl with a bad haircut, he has the torso of a 10 year old: roughen the features a bit and give him some biceps & pecs!

One thing I haven't seen mentioned - 'cause maybe no one noticed - his "inner thoughts" at the dinner table when imagining Mom pulled up her shirt - "What the hell is wrong with me...!" - were almost invisible in the dialogue box. You need to darken them up and perhaps use italics or a different font than the dialogue to denote that they are thoughts instead of speech or story.

 

[PurpleTyger]

Can you send me the link for mac as well plz?

I would like a link to the Mac version as well.

 

[Agnaricson]

mac?

Can you send me the link for mac as well plz?

I would like a link to the Mac version as well.

Here you go, Mac's!

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