VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Summer Back Home [Day 2 v1.0] [Great dane games]

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Gleemer

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Here is the Italian translation
of A Summer Back Home Day 1 v1.0

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.

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Ecco la traduzione italiana
di un fan A Summer Back Home Day 1 v1.0

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

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Here is the Italian translation
of A Summer Back Home [v0.1.2]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.

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Ecco la traduzione italiana
di un fan A Summer Back Home [v0.1.2]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

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HansDampf788

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Ok the MC looks better now and the dialogue is fixed but every other problem is still there or worse why does the MC feel bad for his dad? Choices don't seem to matter and the MC is already horny for Charlotte. Why didn't Charlotte pick him up at the airport? Why no confrontation when the MC learned that the dad already started something with her while still being with his wife?
 
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Haremm lover

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Changelog is for version 2.1 and story change but the download is for version 1.2 and when I downloaded it and I started playing from last save it ended exactly same place as last time so I thought maybe it was a bugfix but changelog is giving other picture so I am a bit confused.
 
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Skeltom

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One thing I noticed right from the start is there is a huge disconnect between the player and the events. You are asked what your name is but the story is told in a way that you are just watching yourself as just another npc.

The game starts out with the lines "This is (Your Name). (Your Name) was born in a little town named Wingston. He is 22 years old. There is no player inclusion with this method, It's (Your Name) or He, not "You" as a player character.

The other thing that is a bit off to me is the different sized text to portray emotion or loudness. That can be done with proper punctuations. Also the low volume font is very small, I play on a 47' TV but I can see the size as a problem on smaller screens.

Edit: Never mind any of that. I just got to the part where this guy is about to get a boner completely out of the blue and out of context of the situation. He is talking to a completely clothed woman about his father and he is turned on? I think I can see how this one is going to play out already.
 
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Reese286

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Well done Dev (y) The choice of model for MC is a welcome change and definitely an improvement imho. Cant wait to meet and greet Charlotte's daughters :p hehe.
 
kartolas

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Not bad, besides the cliche and the MC thoughts like "what am I thinking...", I'm looking foward to the next update. I was scared for a while in the dream scene as I thought the MC was getting laid without giving me the choice. You got me there.

Thank you and good luck.
 
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ProofreadingRUS

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Your father's new family?
what happened to the old family?
Do we get to see his old family in this update or the next.
 
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ProofreadingRUS

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mrbigchungus said:
Before I get into the game:
"
why should you supporting me?
this is my first go at making a complete visual novel. I will in now ay say that I am a expert, but i am very driven to learn new things. "

Try editing your patreon page, if English isn't your first language, get some volunteer help...as reading that made me fearful of what kind of language was on display inside the game. :)
Click to expand...
I think he's just asking for help with the script.
Since it's only a Gb, I can probably fix it in a day or two if interested.
 
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