VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Summer Back Home [Day 2 v1.0] [Great dane games]

[Great Dane]

Overview:
A SUMMER BACK HOME is a visual where you are a chemical engineer fresh out of university.
Your mother left when you were younger. This made your relationship with your father a tense one. You discover that your dad has a new family living with him back home one day. This discovery was the last straw. You and your father didn't speak after this discovery.
Then a few days after graduation, you get a phone call from your father's girlfriend inviting you to visit them this summer.
When you return home, you are in for a surprise. Your father's family is not what you expected.

And along the way, you will meet new and old friends.
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Thread Updated: 2022-03-29
Release Date: 2022-03-29
Developer: Great Dane games

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Censored: No
Version: Day 2 - 1.0
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Others: COMPRESSED - ANDROID

Extra: WALKTHROUGH MOD

*This unofficial port/version is not released by the developer, download at your own risk.

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[Hysni]

Hot Milf Nice Good Luck

 

[juan palote]

Any future Tags?

Incest, Harem, NTR, Sandbox, Point and Click, etc, etc?

 

[おい！]

Yes its another motherfucking game.

 

[Maou25]

the father is not dead?? how is that even possible?

 

[modo200]

the mom is the one who gone not the father that's a first . gonna give it a try thank you

 

[sergesan]

better wait till i know wich way this vn will go....if the dad is alife then there is shareing i think and thats not my cup of tea....because of to much speculation,better go for the wait....good luck

 

[bruce555]

the father is not dead?? how is that even possible?

If he's not dead, I hope I don't see him fucking the MILF.

 

[MrFriendly]

Overall not a bad setup, as seems usual the English needs a polish, the renders are about average, and the dialogue needs work. Still, I've seen so much worse, this could develop into a good game but it's too early to know. I hope this will be a slow burn story and not end up with the MC fucking everyone and their dog by the third update.

 

[zeus04]

Nice Good Luck

 

[Matt_88]

So why would you return to a father that cut you off?
And what happened to my room if this has my house before college? why the small room? the girls are off to college too. So why do they get the better rooms(or your old room even)?
After all that when you learn your father is not there, why stay?

The story does not make sense atm.

 

[NyVar]

Following Good luck to the Dev/Devteam

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

You had me at another midget mc with that trademarked grease/Elvis hairstyle
I just wanna know does he also have a 4ft penis?

 

[rbherro]

it not a bad start, however it is quite short. that is to be expected since it just the beginning. the story is easy to follow and the characters look pretty good. ill keep an eye on this one. and im glad it not another my parents are dead kind of game. my only suggestion would be that on the next update have some kind of strong plot hook. since not much happen in this first update, having the hots and barely an eye candy for your "step-mom" isnt going to cut it. especially since this first update nothing even really happen. it was too normal if that make any sense. from what ive seen and notice from other vn is that the first 1-3 update are extremely important and crucial. the first update is just an introduction but the developers has to grab the reader attention soon, otherwise readers are just going to give this game a pass. the first 2-3 update it usually the make it or break it for most new developers. my other suggestion is that at the end of every update, especially if the game is story heavy, have a strong cliffhanger to keep readers invested and returning back. cause literately at the end of this update the mc just sorta woke up the next day or went to sleep, cant remember which, and that pretty much it. nothing to indicate what might happen next or anything. the mc is like im here now what to do, kind of situation. i know this is long so thank you to those who read this. any who keep up the good work.

 

[mrbigchungus]

Before I get into the game:
"
why should you supporting me?
this is my first go at making a complete visual novel. I will in now ay say that I am a expert, but i am very driven to learn new things. "

Try editing your patreon page, if English isn't your first language, get some volunteer help...as reading that made me fearful of what kind of language was on display inside the game.

 

[Hordragg]

I am with MrFriendly on this one. Will keep an eye on it hoping that the girls inherited Charlotte's good looks.

 

[drhotrod]

Need to fix the eldest girl's age. Charlotte states the eldest is 25, then the MC when he trying to figure out Charlotte's age, says the eldest daughter is 21.

 

[Rinbael]

Meh not much to say the renders are O.K and the set up is slightly different with the dad being alive but the English needs some work and you would greatly benefit from a proofreader. My problem is the MC is the usual skinny genesis 8 manlet with the stupid fucking Armani hair that comes free with Daz which I despise.

One suggestion would be to look into getting a better looking, more interesting model for the MC to make him look less generic and for the love of God give him a better hairstyle than that atrocious Elvis hair that comes free with Daz. I don't know why so many devs use it.

 

[Kond]

Meh not much to say the renders are O.K and the set up is slightly different with the dad being alive but the English needs some work and you would greatly benefit from a proofreader. My problem is the MC is the usual skinny genesis 8 manlet with the stupid fucking Armani hair that comes free with Daz which I despise.

One suggestion would be to look into getting a better looking more, interesting model for the MC to make him look less generic and for the love of God give him a better hairstyle than that atrocious Elvis hair that comes free with Daz. I don't know why so many devs use it.

The dad is alive? thats new! haha

 

[xmilteach]

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