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abc123xyz

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Jul 7, 2019
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I need to learn to read tags before looking at preview screenshots. The preview screenshots look good and get my interest, then I read the tags and there's half a dozen "hell naw"s in there and then I'm just disappointed.
 
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Bob-of-Rovia

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Apr 25, 2018
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I need to learn to read tags before looking at preview screenshots. The preview screenshots look good and get my interest, then I read the tags and there's half a dozen "hell naw"s in there and then I'm just disappointed.
if you're talking about furies, rape and mind control, this is practically not there (1/3 of all scenes).
 

Cendash

Newbie
May 30, 2021
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Nice little game. I will keep an eye on it. A lot of the tags hint at dark content, but it is presented in a way that the MC is not an evil douche.

Edit: Played through the game and it got weird. The MC has wild personality shifts that prevent me from rooting for him. Once the plot is basically mangled by the MC's sudden insane behavior, it seems the project is abandoned and a hurried ending is slapped together.

I would not suggest bothering with this one. Better to just check out the dev's newer "the Mist". It is far superior and worth seeing.

It needs editing and proofreading. There are a many awkward word choices and many incorrect uses of 'then' and 'than'. Remember: 'Then' is sequential. 'Than' is preferential.
 
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rance4747

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May 25, 2018
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The rape stuff was stupid. Looking onto the scene from a superficial level I thought it was popular, so I put it in. A stupid move, It was neither that kind of story, nor am I the kind of writer for that. I know how bad that was. Now I am not writing to apologize or to say the criticism is wrong. It is the opposite. I wanted to let everyone reading this know that I am conscious of the mistakes I made. I should have handled it differently and I didnt. But I find the sentiment that all of my work must be bad because of the ending of this game to be a bit unfair. I think it is the opposite. You learn from mistakes and I have learned that I need to approach my games differently.
While I know im late to the party, please do keep in mind that people disliking domination, slave trainer and rape games to the point of being vocal about it are usually a loud minority that like to feel moral high ground even while visiting a porn sites.
Pretty much all of "i wished to play it until I saw X" and "yuck you aded X" was said about most genres at some point. Its just that the mods are a bit lazy when it comes to punishing moral trolls that come after "rape" or "slave" tags compared to any "LGBT" ones.

Its fine that if you abandoned the genre due to disliking them personaly (which I have my doubts about since you originally went for it in the first place) but if you decided to abandon those themes just because some jerks cant stop shitting in comment section about "i dont like it thus its bad", please rethink it. The genres ARE popular, vocal puritans that can no longer attack sexual minoritises and switching to other fetishes aside. You have succes stories of Something Unlimited, Ravager, and pretty much all related to ISCTOR to prove just that.

As for financial support you originally had, to be honest you just did a way better job marketing wise as well as design wise when it came to MIST than what you did here.
This, while good, looked generic, which is why I only even noticed it now. With MIST you got creative and it shows.

Thank you for both games.
 

Bob-of-Rovia

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Apr 25, 2018
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Pretty much all of "i wished to play it until I saw X" and "yuck you aded X" was said about most genres at some point. Its just that the mods are a bit lazy when it comes to punishing moral trolls that come after "rape" or "slave" tags compared to any "LGBT" ones.
to be honest, I can't agree with you in this regard. quite a good game with a great ending. I didn't like only the last 2 scenes (maybe, if I remember the order of the scripts correctly. well, or I just translated them in this order). this is sex with Cat and the Alchemist
 

rance4747

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May 25, 2018
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to be honest, I can't agree with you in this regard. quite a good game with a great ending. I didn't like only the last 2 scenes (maybe, if I remember the order of the scripts correctly. well, or I just translated them in this order). this is sex with Cat and the Alchemist
What are you disagreeing about?

I never said that the game is bad.
What im saying that this seems to be the case where author was discouraged, by a group of moral trolls from, certain working with certain genres at the start of his work, which is why the game was dropped with the ending it has in the first place.
And that im kinda dissapointed that mods let comments that show open disqust to some fetishes pass. You will see almoust any game about sexual domination having comments like "I wont play cause it has rape/slave" or "please remove non-con and then im in".
Just imagine that those two tags are replaced with any of the LGBT or NTR ones and the outrage at the same commentors then.
 

Samhill

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Nov 2, 2020
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Nice little game. I will keep an eye on it. A lot of the tags hint at dark content, but it is presented in a way that the MC is not an evil douche.

Edit: Played through the game and it got weird. The MC has wild personality shifts that prevent me from rooting for him. Once the plot is basically mangled by the MC's sudden insane behavior, it seems the project is abandoned and a hurried ending is slapped together.

I would not suggest bothering with this one. Better to just check out the dev's newer "the Mist". It is far superior and worth seeing.

It needs editing and proofreading. There are a many awkward word choices and many incorrect uses of 'then' and 'than'. Remember: 'Then' is sequential. 'Than' is preferential.
I got myself stuck, but after reading your post, forget it.
 

Bob-of-Rovia

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Apr 25, 2018
258
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What are you disagreeing about?

I never said that the game is bad.
What im saying that this seems to be the case where author was discouraged, by a group of moral trolls from, certain working with certain genres at the start of his work, which is why the game was dropped with the ending it has in the first place.
And that im kinda dissapointed that mods let comments that show open disqust to some fetishes pass. You will see almoust any game about sexual domination having comments like "I wont play cause it has rape/slave" or "please remove non-con and then im in".
Just imagine that those two tags are replaced with any of the LGBT or NTR ones and the outrage at the same commentors then.
Yes, apparently I misunderstood you.

You will see almoust any game about sexual domination having comments like "I wont play cause it has rape/slave" or "please remove non-con and then im in".
Just imagine that those two tags are replaced with any of the LGBT or NTR ones and the outrage at the same commentors then.
it all depends on the plot, the same NTR and dominance can be well served. The main character is another matter. As an example, I really like "innocent witches", but I can't go back to the game, because I'm disgusted with this type of hero (an egoistic asshole).

Here, the hero, though he uses mind control magic, but he falls in love with girls with his actions. But when he becomes a scum, there is only a little bit left until the end of the game and it leads to a logical ending
 

Spider_man

Newbie
Jan 31, 2022
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have you corrected typos in the code? I do not know if they affect the performance, but checking the scripts Renpy complains that the game does not have several arts + in some places typos in the tags (about the original version)
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 531, in execute_call_screen
  File "game/custom.screens.rpy", line 324, in execute
  File "game/custom.screens.rpy", line 324, in execute
  File "game/custom.screens.rpy", line 328, in execute
Exception: Imagebutton does not have a idle image. (auto=u'buttons/manor/suchbild01/schl\xfcssel.%s.png').

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "manor.rpyc", line 252, in script
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 1949, in execute
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 1937, in call
  File "renpy/statements.py", line 277, in call
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 531, in execute_call_screen
  File "renpy/exports.py", line 2905, in call_screen
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 297, in interact
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2702, in interact
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3094, in interact_core
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 541, in visit_all
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 541, in visit_all
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 541, in visit_all
  File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 430, in visit_all
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3094, in <lambda>
  File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 440, in per_interact
  File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 625, in update
  File "game/custom.screens.rpy", line 324, in execute
  File "game/custom.screens.rpy", line 324, in execute
  File "game/custom.screens.rpy", line 328, in execute
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 946, in _imagebutton
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 940, in choice
Exception: Imagebutton does not have a idle image. (auto=u'buttons/manor/suchbild01/schl\xfcssel.%s.png').
I got this problem in the manor and don't know what to do, and the problem is that I'm stuck and can't get past it
In the android
 

bolondro2

Active Member
Oct 12, 2018
593
641
How the bloody hell can I get the key to the roof???

I have bought the cards, I have to keep my menace below cero, but I´m completely stuck. The teacher and the biblio don´t want to talk with me.

Clearly not being able to go to the roof it´s keeping me stuck. But I can not find the "··$%"%" key!!!
 

SezRaipiffar

Member
Sep 14, 2022
142
84
are you sure you fulfilled the other conditions for passing?
-the loli/Cordelia still is mad at me, for some reason
-i still dont know how to get to that rock..thing left from the castle/school
-the shady guy in the hidden shop, asked for money.. im not aware if there is anything else
-Morgan is too busy, as always
-the loli is too busy, as always
-the mushroom fucker, has nothing new
-Ivan has nothing new
-the cat has nothing new
-the alchemist/hilde makes my game crash, if i try to look at old scenes
-Hilde has nothing new, and is as social as a rock
-the cat also never ever spends time with you, as usual
but apparently i can now fuck her at night
...
idk what to do.
all i know for certain, is that i need money
idk how much money -since i already grinded up hundreds, and kept checking but he still claimed it was not enough
so i grinded past a 1000 and STILL was not there yet (day 288)

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