Update #5: Main Plot and Side Characters
Before I start with this week's update I want to apologize for taking a tad longer in composing this week's update, I'm gonna try to set up a day to actually release these weekly reports.
Main Plot:
I've begun fleshing out more of the first two Acts for the plot proper so I can see how the narrative will flow and to make sure the side stories are integrated in a way that makes narrative sense rather than being thrown to the wind. This also extends to the five scenes in each Act of the main narrative which we hope to have a healthy balance of visuals and narrative. We will be reusing and changing certain assets of the base game to fit the mods plot. I will be writing some additional throw away dialogue for some characters to make them a bit more reactive to the world's changes. As stated before the story proper will likely consist of Seven Acts, to give players time to explore, interact, and convert characters.
Side Characters:
Something I want to touch on is the notion of removing or changing some side characters. A certain number of side characters within the base game don't really have that much going for them narrative wise at the moment. One of the problems that comes from this is that due to them essentially being a blank slate the temptation for me to go wild with their personal arc and narratives is there. However I want to pose a question to you all would it be better to remove certain characters from the story entirely. For example Brock, and replace him with another character in the current roster? Or would you prefer if certain characters changed due to effects of the Cult's growing power? In this instance taking Coach Fistem and changing him to Coach Fiona Emerson. Understandably we can't do this for every blank slate character in the game but I do want to get your opinions on the matter.
A Small Surprise:
As a thank you for sticking with us so far I wanted to post some of what I've written for the plot proper. Understand that this is just a small excerpt of what's been written and is still relatively raw. So it will likely undergo edits and changes where it is necessary. The scene in question comes from the MC induction into the Cult, let me know what you guys think.
Effie: Hey (MC.name), could you meet at the beach this evening there's something I really need to talk to you about.
MC: Can do will be there shortly.
MC: "Mom, I'm heading out for a bit. A friend asked me for a little bit of help with something."
Mom: "Okay, be safe sweetie. Don't stay out too late."
MC: "Will do, mom."
*Transition to the beach*
Effie: "(MC.name), awesome you made it. Look we're about to start soon, but I want you to promise something, you can't tell anyone about this, okay? Promise me, (MC.name)."
MC: "Uh...Effie this is a little weird. I'm gonna need some more info before I commit to anything."
Effie: "Promise me, (MC.name)!"
MC: "Alright, alright geez. I promise."
Effie: "Oh thank (pagan god/goddess). It's okay Violette, he's promised to keep things a secret."
Violette: "Cool. Would hate to beat a guy with dick that good looking. Hey (MC.name), good to see ya here."
MC: "Violette, what's going on and what's with the body paint and spear?"
Violette: "I honestly would love to answer those questions but we've got to go, just be glad it was me guarding the place tonight. Effie's dad has notoriously less patience than I do."
Effie: "Seriously we need to go now."
Violette: "Alright, just lead the way."
*Scene transition to Cult base of operations*
MC: "What the....why the hell are all these people naked, wait better question why are they fucking like no tomorrow?"
Effie: "This is a less than ideal introduction but (MC.name) allow me to introduce the Followers of (Pagan god/goddess)."
MC: "Followers of who?"
Effie: "Shit Xina's gonna be here soon. We need to get you undressed and on stage."
MC: "I'm sorry what?"
Effie: "Move it!"
*Xina and several other cult members walk onto the stage in robes. She then raises both hands to address the crowd.*
Xina: "Brothers and sisters, the day we've long awaited has finally come. A individual possessing the necessary characteristics has arrived. This individual has only recently arrived to our town, thus he is unfamiliar with us and the secrets of this place. Let us welcome him and with his aid achieve our long sought dream ."
*Crowd cheers*
Xina: "Let him be brought before us, and initiated into our ranks."
*MC is brought forward as Xina discards her robes revealing her scarcely clothed body and the painted tribal markings upon it.*
MC: "Okay, I'm sorry but what the fuck is going on?"
Xina: "Oh, did Effie not tell you? Well the long short of it is that we want your help but we need to know we can trust you. So you've got to fuck me to show that you're willing to join us."
MC: "Again, I'm sorry but what?"
Xina: "Oh, if you've got stage fright we can have everyone look away for a few seconds while you pound my cunt."
MC: "No. Wait--I'm just so confused."
*Xina comes forward and brings MC's head to her chest holding him.*
Xina: "Shhh...don't think about it just do what comes naturally. Tell you what you can fuck my ass if you want."
*Sex scene*
Xina: "Damn, Effie was right you've got a real bitch breaker in between your legs there, I'm honestly tempted to go exclusive."
MC: "Seriously?"
Xina: "Well maybe not exclusive, you might have to work for it if you really wanted to have me as a permanent lover."
*Marking symbolizing the Cult's power appears on the MC's body*
MC: "Okay what the fuck is that?"
Xina: "Holy shit! You really are something. (Pagan god/goddess) hasn't showed anyone that much favor in a long time. On the plus side it also means you're without a doubt one of us. Downside is that that's gonna be hard to explain. Don't worry Effie and I will think of something "
MC: "Okay but who are you?"
Xina: " Alright, alright you deserve some explanation, since Effie failed to mention it. Gonna have to talk about that with her later. Anyway it'll have to be the Mini notes version, we're the Followers of (Pagan god/goddess), and we're trying to return the town and by extension the world at large to a more sexually open state of being."
MC: "Okay that's...a lot."
Xina: "Look if you help us, the town and by extension the world will be a much sexually liberated place."