the only official renders are done from developer and developer only, am pretty sure you're not L & P. So no it's not an official render, just because you edited an official render, doesn't make it official
end of the day, you posted an adjusted render and the original render, then asked for opinions in a thread which its attended purpose is not for that.
however do apologize for assuming you were promoting in here to gain interest for own VN, got that part wrong and also, I linked in the wrong thread I think it belongs in, is a daz help thread somewhere on this forum.
But as I said, I ain't a mod, so do whatever the hell u like. am done with this.