The speed of the progress is just fine. Maybe YOU want early sex to stay interested, but please don´t speak for me.
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- Sep 20, 2016
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I have to agree, even though there's just a bit of teasing nudity in the game for now I actually found the approach with building up the story this way very refreshing. Most games tend to just jump straight to everybody fucking everybody, so it's nice to find a game with a bit more meat on it's bones when it comes to the non-sexual content.
No text nothing else?
Sorry wasn't an update just the Ren'PY version and this image. New update out early December I think
- May 6, 2017
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I love the game but since this is patreon and this guy has a life I need to see how long it takes between updates so that I can support him to know I'm getting something in return for my money.
- May 4, 2017
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I agree with @Fadge that something a little spicy would've been good for the demo. To show how the author's writing is in that department. Writing sex scenes is a skill on its own. I've read a disastrous romantic encounters written by otherwise brilliant authors, and vice versa.
There was something a bit spicy, the modeling scene with the wife and husband it was interesting.
- Aug 10, 2017
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maybe I haven't seen this scene due to my choices.
But to be clearer, because some had misunderstood what I'm telling : I don' want sex for sex. I ve read the patreon page, and the dev claims that he wants to create something to new level. I'm very interested in it, and I truly thinks that he can achieve this because there IS potential. Maybe I haven't played the good version of the VN but there isn't erotism from what I have seen. In particular, with the excellent choice to have a female main character there are somme mistakes in my mind in the story.
For an example, I've seen 2 times the husband kissing his wife. I think, it may be better, to have the opposite : the wife kissing the husband, to build the idea of her sexual frustration and the idea that her husband sees her only as the mother of the family, and further the "trouble" she has with other people watching her as a woman.
For female erotism it can be much better. We can for example have a scene where she thinks of someone else and touching herself (nudity not mandatory).
An other example is that the renders are rarely from the POV of the wife (or just back of her)
On a minor scale, the artist have the tendancy to set the camera too high, and provide scenes from above, and not at eyes level.
All of that to say, that for me, it seems that the dev had made the choice of a female main character to be original, but have not "integrate" the female POV of erotism and sensuality.
To conclude, there is a LOT of potential in this game, I just try be constructive in my criticism.
But to be clearer, because some had misunderstood what I'm telling : I don' want sex for sex. I ve read the patreon page, and the dev claims that he wants to create something to new level. I'm very interested in it, and I truly thinks that he can achieve this because there IS potential. Maybe I haven't played the good version of the VN but there isn't erotism from what I have seen. In particular, with the excellent choice to have a female main character there are somme mistakes in my mind in the story.
For an example, I've seen 2 times the husband kissing his wife. I think, it may be better, to have the opposite : the wife kissing the husband, to build the idea of her sexual frustration and the idea that her husband sees her only as the mother of the family, and further the "trouble" she has with other people watching her as a woman.
For female erotism it can be much better. We can for example have a scene where she thinks of someone else and touching herself (nudity not mandatory).
An other example is that the renders are rarely from the POV of the wife (or just back of her)
On a minor scale, the artist have the tendancy to set the camera too high, and provide scenes from above, and not at eyes level.
All of that to say, that for me, it seems that the dev had made the choice of a female main character to be original, but have not "integrate" the female POV of erotism and sensuality.
To conclude, there is a LOT of potential in this game, I just try be constructive in my criticism.
- Oct 22, 2017
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1) My story is very well planned and the hot erotically scenes will come, don't worry! A slowly developing story increases the suspense!
2) And I'm creating not just a simple "porn game". I'm trying to combine erotic and art! An adult game with class!
3) This is just a demo! It's just the beginning of the 3rd day of 30 playable days! So, how can you judge about the eroticism of the story and the female character already now? Just relax and be patient! Again: this won't be a simple "fuck game" what doesn't mean there won't be any hard stuff in it! But all in its proper time!
4) You can read about the reason of my POV style on my patreon site!
5) And why do you think I'm french lol? Only cause two of my game characters are?
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- Apr 22, 2017
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After reading a few of the last number of pages with all the various views, opinions, hopes, etc... I am constantly AMAZED at the time & effort people put in to playing a porn game!! There are some porn games I enjoy playing again & again for their fap value but in the end, it's only my opinion. With regard to AWAM, I found myself really enjoying the story line, imagery, etc... which is about the time my brain started going "I can see lots of people fucking in this game! LOL!! I'll be following this game for sure... only for the "hopes" my imagination has for the game.
FFS Lust&Passion... hurry up with v0.02 will ya?? LMAO!!!
FFS Lust&Passion... hurry up with v0.02 will ya?? LMAO!!!
- Sep 17, 2017
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Hey, @Lust&Passion
Yesterday I played your game an I have to say: I love it. The arts, the character style, the fact that we have a female mc here, the story progression which feels kinda natural (not only "Huh, I'm a faithful woman. You can't treat me like that!"-"Shut up bitch. You let me bang your ass or your husband gets fired."-"Oh, okay, I'm your bitch and I now have to suck every cock out there, too. Because I love it.")
So: Thank you. I'm totally looking forward for future content, can't wait for it! Great job so far.
Yesterday I played your game an I have to say: I love it. The arts, the character style, the fact that we have a female mc here, the story progression which feels kinda natural (not only "Huh, I'm a faithful woman. You can't treat me like that!"-"Shut up bitch. You let me bang your ass or your husband gets fired."-"Oh, okay, I'm your bitch and I now have to suck every cock out there, too. Because I love it.")
So: Thank you. I'm totally looking forward for future content, can't wait for it! Great job so far.
- May 30, 2017
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This game is very nice in every direction. especially a good wife or a sexually addicted bitch. I am burned because everyone is happy. So, maybe they can make a deal with her husband in future versions. I'm looking forward to. But even if the demo is so big, I think it will be a problem.
- Oct 22, 2017
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I'm glad you liked it
I'm working on the next update. I will announce the probable date space of the release of Vers. 0.02 on my Patreon site.
