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Stay cool. Please do not be mad at me, or other constructive criticism.
Maybe it's because I'm French, so I can not express myself well enough, but I just reread my 2 posts and there was nothing offensive against you, with the intentions in mind. any case.
I admit that "Porn Game" was not a good choice of words, it would have been better to use "adult game", OK
But admit on your side that your answer is not correct either, and besides your last point speaks of my nationality, so you could have understood from yourself that it was more a syntactic mistake than a desire to to be contemptuous.
I ve said several times that I'm also concerned by erotism and not sex for sex, but you have stop your mind at the word "porngame". For this post, I've spent the time to wrote in French, translated automatically, and then reworks it in English.
But you read what I said in a hurry and you are angry. You pass without quoting them on my compliments, and only attach to what has shocked you.
I do not want to go into a point-by-point fight with your message here, but learn that making an answer like this will push people to do it.
I will take the time to remake a whole playthrough to be able to talk about it better, but as another said in a previous post, eroticism is an art in itself, and in my first passage I did not notice and even if it is a demo, there is a lot of content, and in my mind too much content without erotism, but maybe there is, and i didn't have seen it. Like you, I do not want sex but erotism, especially in a game where the main character is female. Maybe there are too many details in the story that perhaps it would be better to distribute it while making progress in the story because I think there are too many characters and curriculum to integrate. But criticism is more about telling the story than about its content. for example, you can develop your story around the main character as you go along with the progression of her sexual frustration, jealousy, envy ... I have the impression to attend a giant description but precisely without rising the "suspense" and the erotism. The erotism is also in the story. We do not need to know all the rooms of the house, all the details of all the characters at the start. It's a matter of storytelling rhythms.
I am expecting to express some ideas more clearly in this post.
that's what I meant by "catalog". We can have a complex story, complex personalities, but develop them in parallel with the unfolding of the action (by "action" I mean the choices of the character, not sex). But I think anyway, that there are too many characters, it's too ambitious. You will necessarily disappoint the people who will want to see you develop this or that relationship.
I really do not want to fight with you point by point. Really I do not want it, because on the one hand I respect the quality of what I saw, the amount of work in it, and visual quality achieved, that on the other hand, I would not waste my time if I really did not perceive the immense potential .
I would do a post in 1 or 2 days after redoing the game to bring a more specific constructive criticism, but if you answer the players, you must learn to keep calm, read the player, read again before posting and do not respond to the emotion. I admit that it is difficult given the time spent at the work but in your interest it is better to ignore someone than to make a clash .. This is your first development, and I wish you the best, for you, and also for me, because I re-re-say that this game has a huge potential, and I would just like to bring my little stone so that it is the best possible.
best regards
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I'm just a massive pervert so I'll have EVERYTHING on... NTR, beastie, incest,... I dont care! As long as somebody is fucking - & I get to see it - I'm a happy little vegemite! I am so looking forward to playing this game over the coming months... I'm even thinking of stumping up some $$$ and becoming a Patron! (will wait for at least 1 or 2 updates yet).
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Lol why everybody always think that I'm angry when I'm answering to their comments? I'm absolutely not angry! I've just answered factual on your comment cause it was directed to me. So, what I'm writing now is not in an angry way
I've already planned and written the story for 30 playable days. There will be still much eroticism in this game, don't worry! But like I said: all in good time. You're right that in the demo was a little too much divagation but it was on purpose. I want to build up a huge game world and introduce all the characters slowly. Actually the game will even have many, many more characters and various settings with a very, very high level of detail (I actually pay attention on everything: right hair moving, earring moving, breast moving, perfect cloth fitting (especially no shrunken cleavages like in 99,99% of the adult games - even the lesson of passion games don't pay attention on that!), no cloth leaks, perfect poses, realistic sitting poses with ass squeeze and without "characters going through material", realistic expressions, sun/day position etc. etc.! Cause I want to create something absolutely unique in the adult game world! By the way I'm still not angry
I think the best is to wait the next 5-6 updates for a better assessment. And by the way there was already enough eroticism! Eroticism not always manifests itself physically but also verbal! There were many flirts and teasing situations. Many verbal eroticism! Also little groping stuff like in the basketball game etc. Everything develops slowly and realistically.PS
I'm not angry
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(Although I hate the agressive way you always respond to comments (lol, also irony off)) I totally agree with you. Well, I wouldn't mind if there would've been any H content but we can have many of that in other games. Personally, I like the pace you're going. As I said before: it feels more natural.
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Meeting Mrs. Price! One of many, many more new characters! Alyssa Price is the woman Carl told about Sophia on Day 2 who will drive Dylan to his soccer trial on Day 3! Alyssa carpool travels some players, among others her own son, to the soccer club.
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Dude he's not angry, he's just logical like me I too don't understand why people always think I'm angry.
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Keep it that way. It is nice to see something which is not just mindless jumping on every cock around with no reason and especially nice, slow story which is developed realistically instead of " don't know or too lazy to make proper dialogues so here's some mind control pills instead of".
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Wow! @Lust&Passion, that was like a fresh breeze among those hordes of common erogames. I liked it very much! You are very good in building tense between characters. Considering it is only demo... my head is gonna explode by excitement . Thank you for that.
. Thank you for that.
- Aug 22, 2017
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Don't be so negative, negative one!
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You're welcomeWow! @Lust&Passion, that was like a fresh breeze among those hordes of common erogames. I liked it very much! You are very good in building tense between characters. Considering it is only demo... my head is gonna explode by excitement
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when bein' realistic is negative ? bein' overly optemisitc is harmful,it make people delusional.
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Everything depends on how you deal with disappointments in your life. For a very long time I thought like you. After I had a hell of a lot disappointments in my life (I really mean one after another) I simply chose to not letting have those a big impact on me any longer. Now I can even allow myself to get excited about things again and it feels great.
You can be excited all you want, point is not to expect too much cause if you expect something and he/she/they don't deliver you will be disappointed no matter what you say.Everything depends on how you deal with disappointments in your life. For a very long time I thought like you. After I had a hell of a lot disappointments in my life (I really mean one after another) I simply chose to not letting have those a big impact on me any longer. Now I can even allow myself to get excited about things again and it feels great.
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I did not say I will never feel disappointed again, I said I reduced the amount of impact this has on me significantly. You can call it the 'Shit-happens-mentality'.
This is my last response to this matter as it is seriously off-topic.