VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.201] [Lust & Passion]

[yihman1]

One of my favorite games on here, my only real gripe so far is that updates take forever because of the massive number of images.

Character development is good, nice slow build, realistic scenes, good art, interesting choices and I like the corruption system... possibly will fan out into something like GGGB with good/bad routes...

Personally I'd be happier with it if 1/2 the images were in it, but it came out twice as fast. For instance if they are sitting down having breakfast there may be 50 pictures that tell the story there where it goes into great detail where it could be done almost just as good in 25.

It's worth waiting for, but a pain to wait for... It's like if you are going on a date with a rare hot chick with a good personality and she spends 3 hours in the bathroom getting ready sometimes it's like your thinking... "Bitch let's go!"

 

[lynx33]

I rarely download 0.1s, but someone recommended this in another thread, so I went for it and was pleasantly surprised. The girls are damn hot, the story is actually interesting and I love that it's easy to choose to be good or bad (yup, I choose bad). And despite being a dude, I always found it fun to play with a female protagonist and be a total whore. I really look forward to the next update!

I have three (minor) concerns with this game however:
1. Dylan and Sam are a little too short and a little too young. It'd feel less jarring if they looked 18 and not 16.
2. I dug the whole thing where the movers caught her in her robe and I didn't mind the principal scene, but it makes me worried we'll have another female lead game where half the sex is with guys that sorta disgust the MC and where it constantly notes how their breath stinks etc. Please don't be a game like that. I'd like one game where a female MC is corrupted and goes bad where her conflict is about loyalty, taboos etc and not about how the man disgusts her. I want her to be a slut and a happy one. Not saying this game will be like this, it just made me scared it'll become like this.
3. The thing where the game stops so a sound effect can play (like a car sound) is annoying.

 

[stoper]

1. Dylan and Sam are a little too short and a little too young. It'd feel less jarring if they looked 18 and not 16.

That's obviously intentional. It's supposed to be shota, the 18 thing is just the author watching his back.

 

[lynx33]

That's obviously intentional. It's supposed to be shota, the 18 thing is just the author watching his back.

I figured as much. I guess I can rephrase it to, I like the game, I like what it's getting at, but shota is kinda creepy and I'd have enjoted it more if they actually looked 18. That said, it's the maker's game and I'm just along for the ride.

 

[stoper]

@lynx33 , I understand. This type of light shota contend doesn't bother me personally. The age of 16-17 isn't overly young for starting your sexual life. I've had sex at that age. Granted I wasn't sleeping with an older woman, and age gap swing at this age can potentially skew your views and expectation of how relationships work. But as a fantasy thing, I don't think it's something heavy.

 

[lynx33]

@lynx33 , I understand. This type of light shota contend doesn't bother me personally. The age of 16-17 isn't overly young for starting your sexual life. I've had sex at that age. Granted I wasn't sleeping with an older woman, and age gap swing at this age can potentially skew your views and expectation of how relationships work. But as a fantasy thing, I don't think it's something heavy.

I agree with you. I find it a bit creepy, but in no way enough to ruin an otherwise great VN for me. I'll still be playing it. The potential issues in my point 2 is the only thing that could turn me off from this if it's taken to an extreme.

 

[UncleVT]

I agree with you. I find it a bit creepy, but in no way enough to ruin an otherwise great VN for me. I'll still be playing it. The potential issues in my point 2 is the only thing that could turn me off from this if it's taken to an extreme.

Like the dev said, all content will be optional. Everything will depend of your choices.
EDIT: Just hope let the dev get the MC to be slut and happy without blackmailing or humiliations.

 

[lynx33]

Like the dev said, all content will be optional. Everything will depend of your choices.
EDIT: Just hope let the dev get the MC to be slut and happy without blackmailing or humiliations.

yeah, that's more or less what I hope for as well.

 

[fshero]

If the next versions are as good as 0.1 this game for me will be the best.

 

[Ryahn]

Since we can only act like children around these parts. Next person to spark drama will get this thread locked and warnings issued.

You know who you are

 

[Mike Meier]

Just got to play this and it's easily my favorite game at the time.
Characters are likable and they seem like actual normal people which by itself is an achievement in this genre. Great story passing as well.
And these renders, wow. I can't even begin to imagine how much effort it took. Female lead looks fantastic, other girls are pretty hot and males don't look like goblins. Also, facial expressions are on point.
Gameplay could be a little bit more involved, but I'm completely fine with the choices presented.
If the next update is going to be the same in size and quality, I honestly think that it's a revolutionary project that's going down in history.

 

[JJVOODOO]

So i just finished this demo and as we have all noticed it is very long, the length and quality of this was amazing. Stellar renders, great writing, and characters with actual personality. If things continue with this quality this could easily become the best game of its kind. However it was not without its faults, the developer is very obviously not a native english speaker and while its understandable i would highly recommend the dev consider having a native english speaker edit the writing because many times the grammar, word use, and sentence structure is very off you have to decipher what a character is saying at times, but that is hardly a deal breaker. Of the few faults this demo has there is one that is quite large and disappointing, through out this long demo there is absolutely no sexual content or even nudity other then a few ass shots in the shower. There were many many good opportunities for sexual content throughout the demo and i do not understand why none of those opportunities were taken. When i finished the demo i thought i had somehow played it so wrong no sexual content was unlocked but to my surprise there simple is none in this demo. Having a version be that long with no sexual content or nudity was a huge misstep by the dev and while he has gained much attention for his work so far he threw away the opportunity for much more by neglecting to put in what lets face it were all here for at the end of the day. Unless the upcoming updates has plenty of sexual content to make up for the lack of it so far i can see many people loosing interest in this project. If the demo had sexual content i would of given this a 9/10 but i cant justify giving it more then a 6/10 as it is now. This project has a lot of potential, maybe more potential then any other game currently in development, but potential is only good as long as you take advantage of it. I look forward to future updates and hope the quality continues as it is and that he starts the sexual content before people lose interest.

 

[bsjfan69]

Personally I like that the kids are young. Don't get me wrong I'm not a pedophile or even into shota at all but it fits perfectly with the story and her personality of a (rich) soccer mom, and the interactions they have are actually realistic and I could easily see them happening in a TV show for example (without the naughty parts of course), as opposed to games like Dating my daughter in which every line of dialogue makes you go "this is fucking dumb"

 

[secrecy]

I have a bad feeling about this game. High chances that could be abandoned in long term with very few updates.

High level of detail and over the top attention to the story, dialogues and renders could finish to exhaustion or boredom from the developer. Updates are gonna be limited in a long time so this could annoy patreons. This game could not be finished in years at this level.

I was waiting for next update if this game deserved a contribution, but I am afraid no. It is one of that things you wish high success but 3 months -and counting- for an update seems unreasonable. I suppose some times in life you must find a balance between what you can make and you should make.

 

[stoper]

@secrecy , valid concerns, but cut the guy some slack, it's his first update after all. And I think he himself realizes that the current situation is not very sustainable. 6+ years of development is a lot for an AAA title, let alone a lewd VN.

 

[n0b0dy]

So I just played the Ren'py version of the game (had only played the rpgm-maker version before) and it was very enjoyable. The game I played before awam was the last few versions of Dating my Daughter and the contrast could not be bigger. When playing DmD I got bored out of my mind by how unbelievably stupid all the characters acted, even the sex-scenes became bland and boring since having sex with an retarded person is apparently not that exiting. I could not even bring myself to finish with DmD & decided to give up on the game.
In awam all the women feel like real people instead of mindless sex-dolls which makes them so much sexier to me. I can not stretch enough how important it is to me to be able to see the characters as real people in these kind of games and therefore I am really glad there are so many moments in the game where you get to see the characters just "being themselves" in a normal setting without everything being 'pornified'. In a good sex-game not everything is about sex and the casual moments in the game very much humanize the characters and make them relateble and therefore I find them very enjoyable to read and hope there will be many more of those scenes. It does not hurt all the women in the game are gorgeous to look at so I can thoroughly enjoy all these nice shots of their clothed well-shaped bodies. I could enjoy watching these renders for hours without getting bored.
For me moments like Dylan sitting on Sophia lap, the mover flirting with the mother, Dylan and the Sam touching the mother during the basketball-game are a lot sexier than any moment in most games on this site. If the first demo of this game has proven anything it is a game does not need any sex to be sexy.
So unlike others here I hope L&P will be wise enough to not rush anything and to keep doing what he has been doing while making the demo. I feel like people who complain about a lack of sexual content are like people who only watch sappy sitcoms like 'friends' or 'how I met your mother' and then start complaining about a well-made tragicomedy for not being funny. This is not the kind of game you play with your dick in your hand and where you skip through the dialogue to get to the sex-scenes like many of the games on this site. This is an erotic game for adults who can value a well-written story that takes the time for characterization and build-up and I love it for this.

 

[stoper]

@n0b0dy , and here comes the kicker - Are you a patron? Are you willing to support for say a year, without getting a sex scene?

p.s. It's a genuine question, I'm not trying to make you feel bad if you're not backing the guy with money.

 

[n0b0dy]

@n0b0dy , and here comes the kicker - Are you a patron? Are you willing to support for say a year, without getting a sex scene?

p.s. It's a genuine question, I'm not trying to make you feel bad if you're not backing the guy with money.

I like to wait before supporting anybody on patreon until they have released enough content to justify it. When I support somebody on patreon I do it to thank the creators for the work they have already done, not for the work they might do in the future since you can never be sure. So no I have not supported L&P yet cause the game is in a such early stage of development but you can bet on it I will in the future if I will enjoy future updates remotely as much as I did the first.

 

[sentenz]

I haven't played it yet (waiting on the next update to give it a go) so i have no idea what i'm talking about but you guessed it... that doesn't mean that i will not fart out my opinion

If the dev goes all out with sex content with the next update and all that follow i have no problem with the 0.1 just being a very good intro to introduce all the characters in a way that you start caring about them. This way you don't think about "when is the next fuck going to happen" as much as "how and why and to whom is the next situation happening". This will add much more depth and sexuality to those scenes because you care.

There are alot of games out there where the characters are stupid, the story sucks and all there is to keep playing is the next visual support to your fapping... and then there are games like Elena's Life as my personal example (i know some disagree and don't like the game) where i find the main character somewhat likeable, not that stupid and the buildups for the scenes, the scenes themselfes in all their kinkyness and the outcome after made me tingle more than once.. because i cared about why and how and to whom.

In the end all i can say is: If i want to play a game for a good story then i will for sure not play any game that is available here (no offense). But if i want to play a game to calm my urges i really appreciate if it caters to my upper brain aswell as to my lower and engages me in a story i can enjoy and care about... because if it's so stupid that only the pics are left then i can just go and watch some porn or picture galleries and don't need a game.

 

[stoper]

@n0b0dy , I understand.
@sentenz , last I remember, the author was considering if he should add some nudity at the end of the current update. So I'd say, you can scratch those hopes about "all out with sex"