Ranxerox

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i keep getting this error message.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

After loading the script.
PermissionError: [Errno 13] Permission denied: 'C:\\Users\\Owner\\AppData\\Roaming/RenPy/tokens\\upgraded.txt'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "G:\Entertainment\CGGs (Computer Generated Games)\RenPy\Miscellaneous\A Wife And Mother\Main Game\AWAM-Part2_0.190-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 275, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "G:\Entertainment\CGGs (Computer Generated Games)\RenPy\Miscellaneous\A Wife And Mother\Main Game\AWAM-Part2_0.190-pc\renpy\main.py", line 536, in main
renpy.savetoken.upgrade_all_savefiles()
File "G:\Entertainment\CGGs (Computer Generated Games)\RenPy\Miscellaneous\A Wife And Mother\Main Game\AWAM-Part2_0.190-pc\renpy\savetoken.py", line 251, in upgrade_all_savefiles
with open(upgraded_txt, "a") as f:
PermissionError: [Errno 13] Permission denied: 'C:\\Users\\Owner\\AppData\\Roaming/RenPy/tokens\\upgraded.txt'

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.1.23060707
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.190 0.190
Sun Aug 27 18:06:27 2023

please fix
I also got the error.
I just loaded one of the saves of V0.185 (a couple before the ending) and started to play from there, then re-saved the saves 'til the end, and then V0.190 started just fine.

Hope it works for you..
GL
 
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wzelisen

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Yep, thats all we got out this update. They should of changed it from handjob scene to a blowjob scene instead, because this update really blows, literally.
I agree with you that the cat licking scene is more shocking than the passionless masturbation, and I personally think this update is not at all as good as Sophia's orgasm in Sam's scene, looking forward to day 21 when she can have a deeper communication with her son
 

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trashcop

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demand that he return the money with which you have supported him during all this time... and stop paying him for something that makes you so angry..... Take care of your health brother
I'll do it, mate. I shared my ideas here to open your eyes. Instead of throwing stones at me, show this performance to the producer who cheated you. If you don't, he'll make money from you for another 6 years without finishing even 1 playable day in a whole year.
 
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maybes4

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You would get rid of Patricia but keep Aiden? Patricia is essential to all the Filthy routes (to different extents), whereas Aiden only matters to the Dylan route. She has a far greater influence in corrupting Sophia than Aiden so far. I don't believe Sam or Ellie even know who Aiden is.

Plus she's hot, and her dialogue is often hilarious.
I know that mom ntr stuff revolves around an intimate mom son relationship then a bully appears, stealing his mom and humiliating the son. Ellie is also his sister. Aiden fucking sophia and ellie could mutiple the humiliation so we shouldnt rule out that option so soon
 
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DylansMoM_001

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The next update is the alternative evening event "party at Christens house". I think it'll be the same old thing like every other game some dance, drinks and bottle spin truth or dare game. But I think Dylan and Christian will have some fun while Ellie watches secretly and gets jealous .
 
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hu lover

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I'll do it, mate. I shared my ideas here to open your eyes. Instead of throwing stones at me, show this performance to the producer who cheated you. If you don't, he'll make money from you for another 6 years without finishing even 1 playable day in a whole year.
Dude, its just an update. But I can understand your frustration. I don't think you will get a refund for the subscription you made for this game via patron, worth a try though.Best of and Good luck to you sir, and calm down. :)
 

zenlimbo

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Long post incoming, skip if reading is a chore for you:

I'm never in a hurry to play the latest updates. Again, not a fan of the story as is, more interested in the development drama (never a good sign as I'm not alone). That said, I heard good things so I checked it out today.

This update? I don't see it as being good or anything more than the same old bullshit. I don't see what's so good or a turn in the right detection for the VN. It still felt lifeless and like a writer doing EVERYTHING he can to have his cake and eat it too.

There seemed to be 2-3 actual choices to be made and none that anyone would have to think about. It's all "do you want to see new content or not" decisions. Maybe 5% play the good wife route so save time and stop catering to such a small group when the dev himself clearly means to tell a story of AWAM gone bad.
Yet, even I have to admit that I have long been on the side of limiting them so that's not a bad thing in and of itself. Also, I'll finish on a positive note and say that my old idea of adding a couple renders of "fantasy"....does work! Who woulda thunk it, diehard L&P defenders?! It turns out it DOES work because, again, it's not real within the story. It's a quick fantasy. A reader that's not an actual moron can see that Dylan is imagining pulling her pants down and fucking her for 3 renders/frames. You don't suddenly think it happened and now the story is ruined. Turns out the dev agreed with...me on that. Odd, lol.
Good on him there, whether he heard the 3 of us saying it here for the idea or not. Good on him.


Now for the bad...

Everything else.

The bending of logic that still has to happen because the dev cannot write a coherent story is insane. This woman is - BY THE HOUR - fondling boys/men and being fondled by boys/men but turns into a prude when it suits the story for her not to go forward. Everyone rightfully mocks the "they were interrupted" move but almost nobody mentions (in comparison) how Sophia's morals change solely on whether the story can progress sexually or not. What she does in a scene has no connection to logic, common sense or emotion.

She's giving her son a weak handjob (more on that later) in the hot tub. She's topless. Her son is sucking on her tits and fondling them. He touched her pussy. Etc.
She can:
Go out with son (or Sam or whoever, it's all the same regardless of person and scene) in a skimpy outfit.
Pretend to be his actual date/girlfriend.
Get drunk with them.
Get into a hot tub topless or lay on a bed topless with them.
Let them play with and suck her tits.
Let them remove her panties.
Now give a weak handjob to them.
Let them cum on her chest and stomach.

And we're just talking about the two teen boys. This list is so much longer if we add the SE kids or old men or....the list is long.

Ok, so she can do all that but...when the desire to drag the story along requires it...she develops a conscience that defies all realities of how the human body and sexuality works. Every time.

"Well, it's a porn story"

1) He talks about and brags about realism all the time.
2) Even within the world of porn-logic it makes no sense. It treats Sophia like a weird robot, an emotion-LESS psycho that is down to fuck until it's time to fuck.

No, falling back on "she's an emotionally vulnerable or ignored housewife" does not cut it here. In fact, those things make it even more unrealistic in this argument.
Yes, a person feeling neglected can misbehave for attention. However, there is not this bipolar ABILITY (it is one here, it seems) to regulate good decisions and bad/naughty decisions in the heat of the moment.

The fact that this is all happening in 3-4 hour spans (each update) makes it all the more ridiculous. Let us imagine she is a real person for a second:
Sophia is clearly already predisposed to sexually misbehaving. This didn't begin with a move or the first time her husband neglected her. The Sophia we see would have already been cheating on her husband BEFORE the story began. Yet, it's a story so let's focus on it when I say that she then would already be cheating now. Clearly...if the writer didn't want to prolong it for as long as possible for money.

"They were interrupted" is actually nowhere near as bad as "Sophia magically grew a conscience while getting her tits sucked or whatever else" when it comes to ridiculousness.
How do you avoid it? You avoid the ridiculousness by writing in a way where you don't need logical insanity to avoid what you don't want to give. It's that simple. Write around it. IF WRITING AROUND IT MAKES A BAD PORN STORY...there ya go! It's telling you what we already know and what I'm saying here. It's self-evident.

I'm sorry but a weak handy and getting hit with cum doesn't suddenly make this the best scene/update. For anyone that wants a decent story, it kinda makes it worse due to how little it makes any sense. Beyond that, both Sam scenes were better from a believability sense and those were rife with nonsense, lol.

**Also, if you're just in it to cum ignore this. Ignore all this. Ignore the entire thread and just cum every 4-8 months. I'm not talking to you. Plenty of you exist, go on in peace. Have fun.
I'm talking to those that cannot check out this VN and ignore how obvious it is that it's a money grab. Not just an enterprise that makes money but literally on par with Apple secretly making your old phone slower, lol. It's nonsense. **

Now the dev is claiming he WANTS to hire a team AFTER he makes a Steam release?! Lmao, ok. He has claimed to want to hire people for 5 years without doing it and he now makes it clear that your support is going toward helping him get on Steam...which is an admission to only wanting money. If it happens naturally, great! If you have to nickel and dime your supporters by dragging out your story to make it happen I don't know wtf to say to that beyond saying it's scummy.

I'll end by saying that L&P almost certainly reads this forum. He has threatened specific posters from time to time with litigation (good luck with that, lol) so we know he comes here. It even seems he may be using some ideas posted here so good on that.
If he sees this, let me say to him that it's time to completely rethink this story and your approach to it. The high that some have from finally seeing her make a person cum after 6 years will fade in a week and they'll fall back to realizing this is a giant mess of a VN. So don't bank on the good will you feel in the immediate aftermath.
Don't wait until you're on Steam to fix this. Fix it BEFORE you go on Steam. Even if you think new Steam users can replace those old-time supporters that bail on you after 6 years of only getting a weak handjob, those new Steam users will bail (and issue chargebacks) when they also realize you aren't serious about progression or inadequate to do so effectively if you are serious.

Hire people NOW. Fuck that, hire them 2 years ago. Fix this mess of a story. There are a ton of redeemable qualities here but it's ruined by this weird, insane "script" that anyone with a brain can see isn't real, or at best is a very loose framework. Fuck off with this playable day bullshit. End that. It makes even less sense when every update is just 3-4 hours of her life. When played in full it shows a psychotic woman living a totally batshit insane daily life, lol. It's not good storytelling.

A quick fix:
1) Change days to months.

2) Stop putting her in situations where she WILL go further but is interrupted or suddenly grows a conscience. That can happen once, maybe twice. Three if pushing it. This shit is in every update, lol.

3) In a massive sign of how NOT planned it all is, cut the storylines that aren't wanted or needed or cared about. Clearly, the lofty plans you had when you imagined this story aren't conducive to finishing a dumb porn story in under 30 years. CUT THE FAT.

4) Add more moments of fantasy to give fans something to look at as you turn the ship around. It was good to add it this update and it's basically free content in that it shows a FAKE imagining of what people want to see one day. It's all upside as long as it's kept short.

5) Make Sophia wake up soon and have a coming to reality moment. Either she wants to fuck XYZ or she doesn't and if it happens it'll be reluctantly (blackmail, coercion, etc). Basically, get rid of her back amd forth logic. Get rid of her putting herself in positions she later backs out of as if she didn't know where it was going. By now she should know if she wants to fuck Sam or anyone else she has met. The ONLY person she should feel any of that iffy-ness with is her kids. Sure, leave that as is. Everyone else? She does or doesn't and will act accordingly when put in the situation.
"Well, so she's just supposed to fuck Sam when she sees him next?"
No, not necessarily. Just don't write them into a scenario where he's sucking on her tits and rubbing her pussy if she isn't down to do something more. That's not hard. Sexual tension can exist in scenarios where they outright can't start fucking, lol.
Just stop the back and forth bullshit as a way FOR THE DEV to not show what he doesn't want to show yet. It's easy with any effort at all.

I'll end by saying that Daz is not quick or easy. I've always said that. All the more reason to hire help.
I'll also add that even writing a story is not easy, all the more reason to hire help.
I'm even add that writing the Python/Renpy code is easier but still a bit of work...all the more reason to hire help.

L&P, you recently said that you wanna finish this to start something new. Great! However, you say a lot of shit that you don't do.
IMHO, your handling of AWAM in the next year will determine if you're just a milking clown or an actual creator that can see his mistakes, fix them to tell a truly terrific story and then build on his legacy (and fortune) with OTHER, good stories. Literally, righting this ship and finishing it before 2035 is better for your financial future than milking this story. It may not seem like it but it is. You can ruin your reputation here...or build it for future success. Up to you.

As is now, you seem like a cheap, power hungry egomaniac that can't admit when he's fucked up or may need some help. You have time to change that view of yourself but it's running out and Steam won't save it if you don't make necessary changes.
I talk a lot of shit but it's all been deserved and I'll happily take it back and praise you if you turn this thing around. As is, that last update wasn't some great new direction as much as a magnifying glass exposing the flaws in your story and style.

Edit: Fixed a few autocorrect errors
Based.
 

multiplex1

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i keep getting this error message.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

After loading the script.
PermissionError: [Errno 13] Permission denied: 'C:\\Users\\Owner\\AppData\\Roaming/RenPy/tokens\\upgraded.txt'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "G:\Entertainment\CGGs (Computer Generated Games)\RenPy\Miscellaneous\A Wife And Mother\Main Game\AWAM-Part2_0.190-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 275, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "G:\Entertainment\CGGs (Computer Generated Games)\RenPy\Miscellaneous\A Wife And Mother\Main Game\AWAM-Part2_0.190-pc\renpy\main.py", line 536, in main
renpy.savetoken.upgrade_all_savefiles()
File "G:\Entertainment\CGGs (Computer Generated Games)\RenPy\Miscellaneous\A Wife And Mother\Main Game\AWAM-Part2_0.190-pc\renpy\savetoken.py", line 251, in upgrade_all_savefiles
with open(upgraded_txt, "a") as f:
PermissionError: [Errno 13] Permission denied: 'C:\\Users\\Owner\\AppData\\Roaming/RenPy/tokens\\upgraded.txt'

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.1.23060707
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.190 0.190
Sun Aug 27 18:06:27 2023

please fix
I found the solution. All I had to do was delete the tokens folder.
 

DarthSpitz717

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A big reason why I sincerely think he needs to trim the fat.

Don't worry about the characters and relationship very few care about.

Rough list of those I'd keep as mainline characters/scenarios:

1. Dylan and Ellie (for the incest lovers)

2. Sam and his family

3. The HS kid (Aidan is his name, IIRC) and his one buddy. Drop the idea that he's a teenage boy with a posse of adult, tattooed thugs (lol).

4. Maybe one I'm forgetting or maybe have a fan vote.

These people get the most time and 90% of the rest of the VN involves them.

The side characters that you see for small bits and may even knew day get what they want are:

1. Her sister

2. The postman

3. The principal and/or teacher that's blackmailing her

4. Sex Ed kids

5. Old dudes in the retirement home

6. Mob boss

That's about it but admit I may be missing or overlooking some.
These all get no more than 10% of the story and time to make it. Forget the museum dudes, randoms met at a sauna, randoms met at a bar with your daughter and randoms in general. Drop them entirely.

Focus the story by trimming the fat but I'm not sure he's capable. He's too tied to his claim of having it all pre-written (total BS) or too poor/unwilling of a writer to change what needs to be changed.

As is, there are currently people that have waited years between the characters they like. Years, lol. Years have passed since they got to see Sophia with a character they play the game for.
Currently, a lot of pretty mainline players are going to wait...3 or 4 updates...for someone they like. At his pace that's at least a year. A LOT of people are going to be out for a while unless he trims the fat. I don't think you're alone.
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A big reason why I sincerely think he needs to trim the fat.

Don't worry about the characters and relationship very few care about.

Rough list of those I'd keep as mainline characters/scenarios:

1. Dylan and Ellie (for the incest lovers)
...that rout would take at least 2 updates and wouldn't be all that good. So more like 4 would be needed
2. Sam and his family
...Yes, and is the easiest for Dylan and Sam's mom is an easy catch. Also a good plot devise in that if he can get Amber, he would develop the courage and self-confidence to make the real move on Sophia
3. The HS kid (Aidan is his name, IIRC) and his one buddy. Drop the idea that he's a teenage boy with a posse of adult, tattooed thugs (lol).
...Thats whole Aidan rout is the weakest of all. He has the teacher pretty much under his control and ought to be working at getting Sophia for himself
4. Maybe one I'm forgetting or maybe have a fan vote.

These people get the most time and 90% of the rest of the VN involves them.

The side characters that you see for small bits and may even knew day get what they want are:

1. Her sister
...Agreed! But not for the reasons you're thinking of. Yes, Patrica is good plot build tool to "corrupt" Sophia, but mostly Patrica is the best developed character, and a lot of interesting scenes can come out of it. It's not just the possibility of a lesbian scene, but the two sisters getting into a mutually shared experience.
2. The postman
...Oh Hell No! Keep him around as just side plot fixes but no, the mailman need not knock on Sophia's door.
3. The principal and/or teacher that's blackmailing her
...Have to say no to that. Those characters are so far back into the past and would take serious updates to reestablish their relevance to the story. It would be better if someone beats up or runs off those two or by doing so, it strengthens other storylines
4. Sex Ed kids
...I really don't know how the developer is going to pull off this rout. I'd keep it just because I want to see how the developer solves this problem. IF I was the story writer, I have some ideas on it--ideas that are plausible, but I am not on the team which is better because I am curious how someone else will pull it off.
5. Old dudes in the retirement home
...Nope! There are too many better story routs to focus on. First Amber's Daughter working her way through her newfound sexual identity as well as Sophia's. The maid, it's interesting but not that well developed so just makes for an interesting scene. The rest of the other possible routs can just be of interest and filler material to further the story line.
6. Mob boss
...Why? The only way you could get the boss more involved is for him to do more favors for Sophia. Worst Sophia hasn't built that much attraction for him to be that interested
That's about it but admit I may be missing or overlooking some.
These all get no more than 10% of the story and time to make it. Forget the museum dudes, randoms met at a sauna, randoms met at a bar with your daughter and randoms in general. Drop them entirely.

Focus the story by trimming the fat but I'm not sure he's capable. He's too tied to his claim of having it all pre-written (total BS) or too poor/unwilling of a writer to change what needs to be changed.

As is, there are currently people that have waited years between the characters they like. Years, lol. Years have passed since they got to see Sophia with a character they play the game for.
Currently, a lot of pretty mainline players are going to wait...3 or 4 updates...for someone they like. At his pace that's at least a year. A LOT of people are going to be out for a while unless he trims the fat. I don't think you're alone.
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Thing is there are still things left undone that were introduced earlier. The movers, the janitor, the two college boys, the maybe wife-swap Liam has brought up, the pregnancy angle if there is one...etc.

The movers, not so much unless Sophia bumps into them again on the streets...just like the ones who assaulted Sophia in the subway. Rather weak and maybe just to build more back drop to Sophia's
corruption. The Janitor, naw, not really. The janitor was so long ago and how would you make that happen; more important, why would Sophia go down that rabbit hole. The two college boys, sure that one is a one-night stand sort of adventure Patrica and Sophia can both take part in.

Then you have side events like Dylan, Ellie, etc. And you can reintroduce characters like Tyler (he actually has gone the furthest with Sophia save for Liam...had they been left alone or had the ability to go somewhere more private it is likely he would have been the first to tag Sophia
 

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A big reason why I sincerely think he needs to trim the fat.

Don't worry about the characters and relationship very few care about.

Rough list of those I'd keep as mainline characters/scenarios:

1. Dylan and Ellie (for the incest lovers)
...that rout would take at least 2 updates and wouldn't be all that good. So more like 4 would be needed
2. Sam and his family
...Yes, and is the easiest for Dylan and Sam's mom is an easy catch. Also a good plot devise in that if he can get Amber, he would develop the courage and self-confidence to make the real move on Sophia
3. The HS kid (Aidan is his name, IIRC) and his one buddy. Drop the idea that he's a teenage boy with a posse of adult, tattooed thugs (lol).
...Thats whole Aidan rout is the weakest of all. He has the teacher pretty much under his control and ought to be working at getting Sophia for himself
4. Maybe one I'm forgetting or maybe have a fan vote.

These people get the most time and 90% of the rest of the VN involves them.

The side characters that you see for small bits and may even knew day get what they want are:

1. Her sister
...Agreed! But not for the reasons you're thinking of. Yes, Patrica is good plot build tool to "corrupt" Sophia, but mostly Patrica is the best developed character, and a lot of interesting scenes can come out of it. It's not just the possibility of a lesbian scene, but the two sisters getting into a mutually shared experience.
2. The postman
...Oh Hell No! Keep him around as just side plot fixes but no, the mailman need not knock on Sophia's door.
3. The principal and/or teacher that's blackmailing her
...Have to say no to that. Those characters are so far back into the past and would take serious updates to reestablish their relevance to the story. It would be better if someone beats up or runs off those two or by doing so, it strengthens other storylines
4. Sex Ed kids
...I really don't know how the developer is going to pull off this rout. I'd keep it just because I want to see how the developer solves this problem. IF I was the story writer, I have some ideas on it--ideas that are plausible, but I am not on the team which is better because I am curious how someone else will pull it off.
5. Old dudes in the retirement home
...Nope! There are too many better story routs to focus on. First Amber's Daughter working her way through her newfound sexual identity as well as Sophia's. The maid, it's interesting but not that well developed so just makes for an interesting scene. The rest of the other possible routs can just be of interest and filler material to further the story line.
6. Mob boss
...Why? The only way you could get the boss more involved is for him to do more favors for Sophia. Worst Sophia hasn't built that much attraction for him to be that interested
That's about it but admit I may be missing or overlooking some.
These all get no more than 10% of the story and time to make it. Forget the museum dudes, randoms met at a sauna, randoms met at a bar with your daughter and randoms in general. Drop them entirely.

Focus the story by trimming the fat but I'm not sure he's capable. He's too tied to his claim of having it all pre-written (total BS) or too poor/unwilling of a writer to change what needs to be changed.

As is, there are currently people that have waited years between the characters they like. Years, lol. Years have passed since they got to see Sophia with a character they play the game for.
Currently, a lot of pretty mainline players are going to wait...3 or 4 updates...for someone they like. At his pace that's at least a year. A LOT of people are going to be out for a while unless he trims the fat. I don't think you're alone.
-________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thing is there are still things left undone that were introduced earlier. The movers, the janitor, the two college boys, the maybe wife-swap Liam has brought up, the pregnancy angle if there is one...etc.

The movers, not so much unless Sophia bumps into them again on the streets...just like the ones who assaulted Sophia in the subway. Rather weak and maybe just to build more back drop to Sophia's
corruption. The Janitor, naw, not really. The janitor was so long ago and how would you make that happen; more important, why would Sophia go down that rabbit hole. The two college boys, sure that one is a one-night stand sort of adventure Patrica and Sophia can both take part in.

Then you have side events like Dylan, Ellie, etc. And you can reintroduce characters like Tyler (he actually has gone the furthest with Sophia save for Liam...had they been left alone or had the ability to go somewhere more private it is likely he would have been the first to tag Sophia
See, but it wasn't so long ago! IRL it was but in game time it was like 2 weeks ago, lol.

Which is why it's crazy to have a days system. It should be months.

Still, while very valid points I don't even know who a few are. I don't recall a Tyler. Was that the guy at the club?
Either way, I think that's a decision that just has to be made. If they are that much of a side character that we've seen them once in 6 years...gotta cut em. Gotta or this will never have a hope of finishing before 2035-2040.
 
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Probably never. If ICSTOR and Onxydime keep fucking around, we probably would be better off playing a different game rather than wait for this horse shit. ICSTOR and Onyxdime are most likely buttmates working together, just leeching off their patrons misleadingly, and delivering no promises in return.
ICSTOR is a legend. Made 100s of thousands a year and quit making content years ago. I'm still amazed so many just let their money get debited every month for years and don't pay attention.
 

restlez

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Same its the same issue i had with the last update, the MC of the Story its supposed to be Sophia, not Dylan, and yet in this update and the last, we kept listening to Dylan's thoughts and feelings, which i wouldnt mind knowing some bits of Dylans, feeling, but i want to know everything thats going into Sophia's mind not just few bit and pieces every now and then, also i would have likes it more if there was no alcohol involve,
Come to think of it you're right about Sophia being the MC. But from a storytelling perspective it could be balanced perspective of parties involved in the scene. I suppose it was reflective that Dylan was the initiator of most actions in the scenes here and Sophia just the respondent.

Also agree with the alcohol. It also seems like a lazy plot device.
 
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